Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Yes, of course I things up. I think, uh, make legs is very important for me. Well, you know, I, I remember I last week I go to the shopping's I will make like because I think make a less well. Remembers, I know.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yes, of course, I think Smejkal ace uh when I walk, I need work, I will do some things, I will remember it well, you know XI remembers I last week I walk while you know Simon artist, so I think so make a list.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Well, you know, 'cause I think many people things makings lace is is difficult because they want two things go go was to gold. So they don't like making list.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Yes, I realize, uh make lays on my phone because I think uh make less on my phones is very easy. I think is comfortable's. Well, you know, I remember Zai last week. I'll go to the swings, but I notice remembers.
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 40.0建議: 你的回答不够连贯,语法和词汇使用有误,建议练习简单句型,确保表达清晰且符合语法规则。可以先用简单句直接回答问题,再补充具体细节。
範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list. For example, last week I wrote down all the things I needed before going to the store. This helps me remember everything and shop efficiently.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 35.0建議: 回答中有很多语音错误和不连贯,建议练习发音和句子结构,使用简单明了的句子表达观点,并用连接词使内容连贯。
範例: Yes, I make a list for my work. It helps me remember tasks. For example, last week I wrote a list and completed all my work on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 30.0建議: 表达不清晰且语法错误较多,建议学习如何用简单句表达原因,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。
範例: Some people do not like making lists because they find it difficult. They may prefer to remember things without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 40.0建議: 回答中有语法和词汇错误,建议练习表达偏好时的句型,使用正确的时态和词汇,并补充具体理由。
範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy and convenient. For example, last week I used my phone to check my shopping list while I was at the store.
× Yes, of course I things up.
✓ Yes, of course I make things up.
这里's things'是复数名词,但句子结构需要动词短语,原句缺少动词,应该用'make things up'表示'整理东西'。
× I think, uh, make legs is very important for me.
✓ I think, uh, making lists is very important for me.
原句中'make legs'错误,应该用动名词'making'加复数名词'lists'表示'做清单'。
× Well, you know, I, I remember I last week I go to the shopping's I will make like because I think make a less well.
✓ Well, you know, I remember last week I went shopping and I made a list because I think making a list is good.
原句中'go'应为过去式'went','will make like'应为过去式'made a list',时态不一致。
× Remembers, I know.
✓ I remember, you know.
'Remembers'是动词第三人称单数形式,主语应为'I',应使用动词原形或第一人称形式'remember'。
× Yes, of course, I think Smejkal ace uh when I walk, I need work, I will do some things, I will remember it well, you know XI remembers I last week I walk while you know Simon artist, so I think so make a list.
✓ Yes, of course, I think making a list when I work helps me remember things well. You know, I remember last week when I was working, so I think making a list is good.
原句中'Smejkal ace'无意义,'walk'应为'work','remembers'应为'remember',时态和单复数错误较多,需调整为正确表达。
× 'cause I think many people things makings lace is is difficult because they want two things go go was to gold.
✓ Because I think many people find making lists difficult because they want to do two things at once.
原句中'people things makings lace'结构混乱,'two things go go was to gold'无意义,需改为正确表达。
× So they don't like making list.
✓ So they don't like making lists.
'list'应为复数'lists',表示泛指多份清单。
× Yes, I realize, uh make lays on my phone because I think uh make less on my phones is very easy.
✓ Yes, I realize, uh, making lists on my phone is very easy.
'make lays'应为'making lists','phones'应为单数'phone',代词使用错误。
× I think is comfortable's.
✓ I think it is comfortable.
'comfortable's'错误,正确表达为'it is comfortable'。
× Well, you know, I remember Zai last week. I'll go to the swings, but I notice remembers.
✓ Well, you know, I remember last week I went shopping, and I noticed.
'I'll go'应为过去式'went','remembers'应为'noticed',时态错误。