列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сіздің жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдер түсініксіз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрылымдаңыз. Мысалы, 'No, I usually don't make a list because I have a good memory. I remember what to buy and usually don't have problems shopping.'

範例: No, I usually don't make a list because I have a good memory. I remember what to buy and usually don't have problems shopping.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлем құрылымы мен сөздерді дұрыс қолдану қажет. Тақырыпқа нақты жауап беріп, қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін сөздерді қолданыңыз. Мысалы, 'Yes, I usually make lists for work because I like time management. It helps me complete tasks on time.'

範例: Yes, I usually make lists for work because I like time management. It helps me complete tasks on time.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөздерді дұрыс таңдап, сөйлемдерді толық және түсінікті етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, 'In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary and believe they can remember everything.'

範例: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary and believe they can remember everything.

建議: Жауабыңызда сөйлемдерді толық және логикалық түрде құрастырыңыз, артық сөздерден аулақ болыңыз. Мысалы, 'I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It's easy to check my list anytime.'

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. It's easy to check my list anytime.

× So at home I making a memory list what to buy in.

✓ So at home I make a memory list of what to buy.

The verb 'making' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'make' to match the present simple tense. Also, 'what to buy in' is incomplete and should be 'of what to buy' for clarity.

× So at home I making a memory list what to buy in. Shopping mall.

✓ So at home I make a memory list of what to buy in the shopping mall.

The preposition 'in' should be followed by a noun phrase without a period separating it. 'Shopping mall' should be connected to the previous sentence to indicate the location.

× And in my opinion, a lot of people don't make at least because they think it is. Non pirated activity.

✓ And in my opinion, a lot of people don't make lists because they think it is unnecessary.

The phrase 'make at least' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'. Also, 'Non pirated activity' is unclear and likely a mishearing or mistranslation; 'unnecessary' fits the context better.

× I prefer to make, at least on my phone because I have. And my phone in every situation, every day.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because I have my phone with me in every situation, every day.

The pronoun usage is fragmented and unclear. 'I have. And my phone' should be combined and clarified to 'I have my phone with me' for correct pronoun and sentence structure.

× So in one second I can. And get it and watch my list so there is no problems to make at least in on my phone.

✓ So in one second I can access and check my list, so there are no problems making lists on my phone.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. Combining the clauses and correcting verb forms improves clarity and grammatical correctness.