列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: คุณควรตอบคำถามโดยตรงและใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนมากขึ้น รวมถึงใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น ใช้ tense ให้เหมาะสม และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I go shopping. Instead, I walk around the supermarket and decide what I need as I go.

建議: คำตอบควรมีโครงสร้างที่ชัดเจนและใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และเข้าใจง่าย ควรหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์และคำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'like under after daylight' และเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจนเกี่ยวกับประโยชน์ของการทำรายการงาน

範例: Yes, I make a list of all my responsibilities and set deadlines for each task. This method helps me stay organized and complete my work on time.

建議: ควรตอบคำถามด้วยประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และใช้คำเชื่อมที่เหมาะสมเพื่อให้ความหมายชัดเจน และหลีกเลี่ยงการพูดซ้ำหรือประโยคที่ไม่สมบูรณ์

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because it forces them to face all their responsibilities at once, which can feel overwhelming.

建議: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'sticky notes' แทน 'sticky nose' และอธิบายเหตุผลอย่างชัดเจน พร้อมใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I usually use sticky notes. I put them on my desk so I can see them often and remind myself to complete my tasks.

× No, I'm not that kind of the preparing person.

✓ No, I'm not that kind of preparing person.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'preparing person'. In English, 'that kind of' is followed directly by a noun without 'the'. So, 'the' should be omitted here.

× Every time I went to the supermarket and then I walk around to see what I need.

✓ Every time I go to the supermarket, I walk around to see what I need.

The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'walk'. Since the action is habitual, present tense should be used consistently: 'go' and 'walk'.

× In the same time I walk in.

✓ At the same time, I walk in.

The phrase 'In the same time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'At the same time'. Also, a comma is needed after the introductory phrase.

× Yes, I make a list for all of my responsibility and I also matching with the date that I need to finish.

✓ Yes, I make a list for all of my responsibilities and I also match them with the dates that I need to finish.

'Responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' because it refers to multiple tasks. 'Matching' should be 'match' to agree with the subject 'I'. Also, 'date' should be plural 'dates' to correspond with multiple responsibilities.

× And I think is really helpful for me to like work.

✓ And I think it is really helpful for me to work.

The sentence lacks the subject 'it' after 'think'. Also, 'to like work' is incorrect; it should be 'to work'.

× Like under after daylight.

✓ Like under after daylight.

This sentence fragment is unclear and incomplete. It should be removed or rewritten for clarity, but since it does not meet the grammar problem list, no correction is applied.

× Ann is really nice because.

✓ Ann is really nice because...

This is an incomplete sentence and does not provide a full thought. However, it does not fall under the specified grammar problem types, so no correction is applied.

× In my opinion, they don't want to know like what responsibility they need to. Taking.

✓ In my opinion, they don't want to know what responsibilities they need to take.

The phrase 'need to. Taking' is incorrect. The correct form is 'need to take' (infinitive verb). Also, 'responsibility' should be plural 'responsibilities' to match the context.

× After this, you know, because when you.

✓ After this, you know, because when you...

This is an incomplete sentence fragment and does not express a complete thought. No correction is applied as it does not meet the grammar problem list.

× Make a list is mean.

✓ Making a list means.

The phrase 'Make a list is mean' is incorrect. The gerund 'Making' should be used as the subject, and 'means' is the correct verb form. Also, 'mean' should be 'means' to agree with the singular subject.

× You have to think about every task that you need to be finished in the mean in the mean time.

✓ You have to think about every task that you need to finish in the meantime.

'Need to be finished' is passive and awkward here; active form 'need to finish' is better. Also, 'in the mean in the mean time' is repetitive and incorrect; correct phrase is 'in the meantime'.

× I prefer to make a list on the paper because I am.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I am.

The phrase 'on the paper' is incorrect when referring to paper in general; it should be 'on paper' without 'the'.

× The paper that I normally use is a sticky nose.

✓ The paper that I normally use is a sticky note.

'Sticky nose' is a mispronunciation or typo; the correct term is 'sticky note'.

× And I put it in front of my dress top so I can sell it every time and repeat.

✓ And I put it in front of my desktop so I can see it every time and remind myself.

'Dress top' is incorrect; the intended word is 'desktop'. 'Sell it' is incorrect; it should be 'see it'. 'Repeat' is incorrect; 'remind myself' fits the context.

× Remind myself that I need to finish off.

✓ Remind myself that I need to finish.

The phrasal verb 'finish off' is informal and unnecessary here; 'finish' is sufficient and more appropriate.