列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy, such as "remind me not to remind me" and "almighty things beyond the list" which is confusing. Try to be more concise and clear, directly answering the question with a topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to help me remember important items. However, I often end up buying extra things that are not on the list because I see interesting products in the store.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to unclear phrasing and grammar mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain why the list does not work. Use specific reasons and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work, but it often doesn't help because I get interrupted frequently. Also, I tend to add too many tasks, which makes it hard to complete everything on time.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and confusing phrases. Focus on giving a clear opinion with supporting reasons. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid vague expressions.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it creates pressure and limits their freedom. They prefer to be more spontaneous rather than following a strict plan.

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to explain your preference more smoothly and precisely.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient and clear. I can easily edit or add items anytime and anywhere.

× Yes, I always make a list when I shop or in order to remind me not to remind me to buy something important.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop in order to remind myself not to forget to buy something important.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'remind me not to remind me' which is confusing and ungrammatical. The correct form is 'remind myself not to forget' because 'remind' should be followed by an object pronoun and an infinitive or gerund. Also, 'myself' is the correct reflexive pronoun here.

× But in fact I hardly buy things strictly according to the list on and I always buy almighty things beyond the list.

✓ But in fact, I hardly buy things strictly according to the list, and I always buy many things beyond the list.

The original sentence has unclear and incorrect phrases such as 'on' and 'almighty things'. 'On' is unnecessary here, and 'almighty' is incorrect in this context. The sentence structure is also awkward. The correction clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× Oh I always make a list for my work but it doesn't work on becaused on there always something interrupting me and I like to make to make the make tasks too heavy or on so that I can't finish it.

✓ Oh, I always make a list for my work, but it doesn't work because there is always something interrupting me, and I tend to make the tasks too heavy or too many so that I can't finish them.

The original sentence misuses prepositions like 'on' and has spelling errors such as 'becaused'. Also, 'make to make the make tasks' is repetitive and incorrect. The correction fixes preposition use, verb forms, and clarifies meaning.

× I think even though making it so how can help people on the wall order the life on it always bring or things of pressure and limit limitation.

✓ I think even though making lists can help people organise their lives, it always brings pressure and limitations.

The original sentence has incorrect conjunctions and unclear phrases like 'on the wall order the life on it' and 'or things of pressure and limit limitation'. The correction uses proper conjunctions and clearer expressions.

× So some people don't like making on. Please.

✓ So some people don't like making lists, please.

The phrase 'making on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'making lists'. The word 'please' seems out of place but is retained as per original intent.

× I prefer to make a list or on my phone on becauses this is more convenient and clear I can change it.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because this is more convenient and clear, and I can change it.

The original sentence misuses prepositions 'or on' and 'on becauses'. The correction uses the correct preposition 'on' and corrects 'becauses' to 'because'. It also improves sentence flow.

× Every time and every space if I need.

✓ Anytime and anywhere if I need to.

The original phrase 'Every time and every space if I need' is awkward and incorrect. The correction uses proper adverbs 'anytime' and 'anywhere' to express the intended meaning clearly.