列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but lacks clarity and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I prefer to make a shopping list when I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use clear sentence structures and linking words to explain your points logically. Also, be specific about how making lists helps you.

範例: Yes, I prefer to make lists for my work. For example, when I have many assignments, I list them according to their deadlines so I can complete the most urgent ones first and stay organized.

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to compare different preferences and explain reasons.

範例: I think it depends on the person. For example, I like to organize things by making lists because it helps me remember tasks. However, some people prefer using apps on their phones to stay organized instead of making lists.

建議: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences and clear reasons. Use linking words to explain your preference logically.

範例: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's more convenient than paper, which can be easily lost or forgotten.

× Yes I prefer to make shopping list while go for shopping because it helps me to keep organized and it also.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a shopping list while going shopping because it helps me to stay organized.

The phrase 'while go for shopping' is incorrect because after 'while' we need the verb in the -ing form to indicate simultaneous actions. Also, 'make shopping list' needs an article 'a' before 'shopping list'. 'Keep organized' is better expressed as 'stay organized' for clarity.

× It also aids me.

✓ It also helps me.

The phrase 'aids me' is grammatically correct but sounds unnatural in this context. 'Helps me' is more appropriate and commonly used in everyday English.

× True.

✓ That's true.

The single word 'True' is incomplete as a sentence. Adding 'That's' makes it a complete and natural response.

× Sure, whatever I need.

✓ Sure, I can get whatever I need.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a verb. Adding 'I can get' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, I prefer to make list for my work.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list for my work.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× For example if I have a lot of assignments, I preferred to make a list of the priority answered them as a priority.

✓ For example, if I have a lot of assignments, I prefer to make a list of priorities and answer them accordingly.

The verb 'preferred' is past tense but the context is present habitual action, so 'prefer' is correct. Also, 'priority answered them as a priority' is unclear and awkward; rephrasing improves clarity.

× Like for example if my assignment is due at 25th and 1 is a 26.

✓ For example, if one assignment is due on the 25th and another on the 26th,

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'one assignment' and 'another' clarifies the meaning, and 'due on the 25th' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× So I make a list so that I can we get I can be organized while doing my work.

✓ So I make a list so that I can be organized while doing my work.

The phrase 'I can we get I can be organized' is confusing and contains extra words. Removing the unnecessary words clarifies the sentence.

× I think making list is different person to person.

✓ I think making lists is different from person to person.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to generalize the activity. Also, the phrase 'different person to person' is incorrect; it should be 'different from person to person'.

× Like for example if I take my example, I love to organize things so that as I can forget things easily so that's why I prefer to make less.

✓ For example, if I take myself, I love to organize things so that I don't forget things easily, so that's why I prefer to make lists.

The sentence has several issues: 'if I take my example' is awkward, better as 'if I take myself'; 'so that as I can forget' is incorrect, should be 'so that I don't forget'; 'make less' is a typo and should be 'make lists'.

× But some people like have some apps in their phone which had them to keep themselves to give them organize.

✓ But some people have apps on their phones which help them stay organized.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and verbs: 'like have' should be 'have'; 'in their phone' should be 'on their phones'; 'which had them to keep themselves to give them organize' is incorrect and should be 'which help them stay organized'.

× Oh, actually I prefer to make list to all my phone because I keep my phone.

✓ Oh, actually I prefer to make lists on my phone because I keep my phone with me.

The phrase 'make list to all my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists on my phone'. Also, 'I keep my phone' is incomplete; adding 'with me' clarifies the meaning.

× Fit me all the time and it's hard to carry your paper and it's a risk to lossed it so that's why I prefer to make list on the phone.

✓ It is with me all the time, and it's hard to carry paper, plus there's a risk of losing it, so that's why I prefer to make lists on the phone.

The original sentence has several errors: 'Fit me all the time' is unclear, corrected to 'It is with me all the time'; 'your paper' should be 'paper'; 'risk to lossed it' is incorrect, should be 'risk of losing it'; 'make list' should be 'make lists'.