列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. For example, say 'I make a list of things I need before shopping to remember everything and stay within my budget.'

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before going shopping. This helps me remember everything and stick to my budget.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and explain your reason with supporting details. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary. For example, say 'I don't make a list for my work because my tasks vary daily, and I am not sure what I will do each day.'

範例: I don't usually make a list for my work because my tasks change every day, so I find it difficult to plan in advance.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is hard to understand due to grammar and word choice errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. For example, say 'Some people are confident and prefer to remember tasks without writing lists. However, I prefer making to-do lists because writing helps me stay organized and improve my skills.'

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory. However, I prefer to write to-do lists since it helps me stay organized and improve my productivity.

建議: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repetition. For example, say 'I prefer making lists on my phone because it has various apps with reminders that help me remember tasks.'

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it has different apps with reminders that notify me about my tasks.

× When I'm going to shopping I make a list after things I need because if I do not write it on my list I forget it.

✓ When I'm going shopping I make a list of the things I need because if I do not write them on my list I forget them.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed by the gerund form 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'after things I need' should be 'of the things I need' to correctly express the list's content. Additionally, 'it' should be plural 'them' to agree with 'things'.

× When I'm going to shopping I make a list after things I need because if I do not write it on my list I forget it.

✓ When I'm going shopping I make a list of the things I need because if I do not write them on my list I forget them.

The preposition 'after' is incorrectly used; the correct preposition to indicate the content of a list is 'of'. Also, 'write it' should be 'write them' to agree with the plural noun 'things'.

× To remember everything an passing my budget I do.

✓ I do it to remember everything and to stay within my budget.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and unclear meaning. The corrected sentence rearranges the words to form a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing purpose.

× I don't do a less for my work because every day when I'm going to work I'm doing everything.

✓ I don't make a list for my work because every day when I go to work I do everything.

The phrase 'do a less' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, 'going to work' should be 'go to work' to express habitual action. 'I'm doing everything' is better as 'I do everything' to indicate routine.

× Knew.

✓ I know.

'Knew' is the past tense of 'know' and is used incorrectly here without context. The present tense 'I know' fits the intended meaning better.

× And I do not know what should I do in the work, that's why I do not. List my works.

✓ And I do not know what I should do at work, that's why I do not list my work tasks.

The question word order 'what should I do' is incorrect in a statement; it should be 'what I should do'. Also, 'in the work' should be 'at work'. The phrase 'do not. List my works' is fragmented and corrected to 'do not list my work tasks' for clarity.

× Some people are confident. To remember everything and they don't write let's.

✓ Some people are confident to remember everything and they don't write lists.

The phrase 'write let's' is incorrect; it should be 'write lists'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and corrected to a complete sentence.

× But I would like to prefer To Do List because I have wrote in a book.

✓ But I prefer to use a To-Do List because I have written it in a book.

'Would like to prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' suffices. 'Have wrote' is incorrect; the past participle of 'write' is 'written'. Also, 'To Do List' should be 'To-Do List' and 'in a book' clarified to 'written it in a book'.

× If you making a less for your work, you can improve your scales 1 by 10.

✓ If you make a list for your work, you can improve your skills tenfold.

'Making' should be 'make' to form the correct conditional sentence. 'Less' should be 'list'. 'Scales 1 by 10' is unclear and corrected to 'skills tenfold' to express improvement clearly.

× I prefer to make a list and my phone because my phone have a different apps and some apps halves reminder and remind me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone has different apps and some apps have reminders and remind me.

The preposition 'and' should be 'on' to indicate where the list is made. 'Have a different apps' should be 'has different apps' for subject-verb agreement and plural noun. 'Halves reminder' is incorrect; it should be 'have reminders'.

× my phone have a different apps and some apps halves reminder and remind me.

✓ My phone has different apps and some apps have reminders and remind me.

The singular subject 'phone' requires the singular verb 'has'. 'Apps' is plural and requires the plural verb 'have'. 'Halves' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have'.

× That's why I prefer to do my less on my phone, not on paper.

✓ That's why I prefer to make my list on my phone, not on paper.

'Do my less' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make my list'. This correction clarifies the intended meaning.