列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bir şekilde yapılandırarak, gereksiz tekrarları önleyin. Örneğin, alışveriş yaparken liste yapmadığınızı belirtip, nedenini ve nasıl alışveriş yaptığınızı açıklayabilirsiniz.

範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I go shopping because I like to pick items spontaneously. This way, I can choose whatever ingredients I feel like using to cook different dishes at home.

建議: Cevabınızı daha net ve düzenli hale getirin. İşinizle ilgili liste yapmama nedeninizi açıkça belirtin ve cümleler arasında bağlantı kurmak için bağlaçlar kullanın. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

範例: No, I don't make lists for my work because I work at a bookstore and coffee shop. Since my tasks, like making coffee, are straightforward, I don't find it necessary to use lists.

建議: Cevabınızda daha açık ve mantıklı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Neden bazı insanların liste yapmayı sevmediğini açıklarken, daha spesifik nedenler verin ve cümlelerinizi bağlaçlarla birbirine bağlayın.

範例: Some people might not like making lists because they prefer to live spontaneously and don't want to be restricted by plans. Also, they might feel confident managing tasks without writing them down.

建議: Cevabınızı daha akıcı ve tamamlanmış cümlelerle ifade edin. Tercihinizi belirtirken nedenlerini açıklayın ve cümleler arasında mantıklı geçişler yapın.

範例: Actually, I don't usually make lists, but if I have to, I prefer to write them on paper because I find it easier to organize my thoughts and I enjoy the feeling of writing by hand.

× No, I don't make a list when I shop 'cause I go supermarket an I pick randomly.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I shop 'cause I go to the supermarket and I pick randomly.

The preposition 'to' is required after the verb 'go' when referring to a place. Also, 'an' should be 'and' to connect the clauses properly.

× Any items and I come back to house has an.

✓ I pick any items and I come back to the house with them.

The sentence structure is incorrect and 'house has an' is ungrammatical. 'The house' requires the definite article 'the', and 'with them' clarifies the items are brought back.

× I come back to house has an.

✓ I come back to the house with them.

The phrase 'to house has an' is incorrect. It should be 'to the house' with the definite article and 'with them' to indicate carrying items.

× I come back to house has an.

✓ I come back to the house with them.

The pronoun 'them' is needed to refer to the items picked, replacing the unclear 'has an'.

× No, I don't make a list list for my work because I'm working for a. Bookstore and coffee shop.

✓ No, I don't make a list for my work because I work at a bookstore and coffee shop.

The preposition 'at' is used to indicate the place of work. Also, 'working for a. Bookstore' is fragmented and should be 'work at a bookstore'.

× I'm making a coffee.

✓ I make coffee.

In this context, 'make coffee' is the correct expression. 'Making a coffee' is less common and sounds unnatural.

× There is no need to list for making coffee.

✓ There is no need to make a list for making coffee.

The verb 'list' is a noun here, so 'make a list' is the correct phrase. Also, 'to list' is incorrect in this context.

× Maybe some people like. Living in Spondon knife.

✓ Maybe some people like living spontaneously.

The phrase 'Living in Spondon knife' is incorrect and unclear. The intended word is likely 'living spontaneously' meaning living without planning.

× Maybe they don't need to. Make a list.

✓ Maybe they don't need to make a list.

The sentence is fragmented with an unnecessary period. It should be one continuous sentence.

× Actually. I don't make a list, but if I need to list something I prefer to. On paper.

✓ Actually, I don't make a list, but if I need to list something, I prefer to do it on paper.

The sentence is fragmented and missing the verb 'do it' before 'on paper'. Also, commas improve readability.

× I think, yeah, because. I can. I love.

✓ I think, yeah, because I can and I love it.

The sentence is fragmented and missing objects. 'I love it' clarifies what is loved, and the sentence flows better.