列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and natural but could be improved by adding a linking phrase and a bit more detail to make it more effective. Try to avoid short answers and add a reason or example to support your statement.

範例: No, I don't usually follow a list when I shop because I prefer to remember the things I need. For example, I often buy groceries based on what I notice is running low at home.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar for better understanding. Also, provide a clearer explanation of how you manage your work without a list.

範例: I don't make a list for my work, but I remember the tasks I need to complete each day. Therefore, I organise my day based on these tasks to ensure everything is done on time.

建議: Your answer has several grammar and coherence issues. Try to speak in complete sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons or examples.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because if they fail to accomplish their plans, they feel disappointed. As a result, they avoid making lists to prevent feeling sad.

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by adding a linking phrase and a specific example to make it more engaging and natural.

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier and more accessible. For instance, I can quickly check my tasks anytime without carrying extra paper.

× I don't make list for my works, but I remember the work I have to do for the day and according to that I follow the day.

✓ I don't make lists for my work, but I remember the work I have to do for the day and according to that I follow the day.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to multiple instances of lists. Also, 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context and should remain singular. Using correct quantifiers helps in making the sentence grammatically accurate.

× Some people don't like making list becaused whenever they have plans and they don't. Accomplish that. They feel a bit saddened about that and. Hands they do not make the list for the plans they are planning.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because whenever they have plans and they don't accomplish them, they feel a bit saddened about that and hence they do not make lists for the plans they are planning.

The word 'list' should be plural 'lists' to correctly refer to multiple lists. Also, 'becaused' is a typo and should be 'because'. The sentence structure was fragmented and unclear; combining the sentences and correcting the quantifiers improves clarity and grammatical correctness.