列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "helps me and to avoid ifying unnecessary items." Try to use simpler, correct sentences and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words properly to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it saves time and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like "helps me and not to forget an important tasks." Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect points logically.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, especially when I have many tasks. It helps me remember important tasks, save time, and focus on completing them efficiently.

建議: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "making lease" and "confident under memory." Try to use simpler sentences and correct vocabulary. Also, organize your ideas clearly with linking words.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and boring. Others prefer to rely on their memory because they are confident they won't forget their tasks.

建議: Your answer has good points but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like "dangerous to using your phone in a properly." Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your reasons.

範例: I prefer to make my list on paper because using a phone while shopping can be distracting and risky if I lose it. Also, a paper list is easy to carry and helps me remember tasks better.

× Additionally, it helps me and to avoid ifying unnecessary items.

✓ Additionally, it helps me to avoid buying unnecessary items.

The conjunction 'and' is incorrectly used here, causing confusion. The phrase should be 'helps me to avoid buying' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× It helps me and not to forget an important tasks and also it saves me time and helps me to focus on my work to complete the task in.

✓ It helps me not to forget important tasks, and also saves me time and helps me focus on my work to complete the tasks.

The phrase 'an important tasks' is incorrect because 'tasks' is plural and should not be preceded by 'an'. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× Most of the people don't like making lease because they think it is a time consuming and tedious.

✓ Most people don't like making lists because they think it is time-consuming and tedious.

'Most of the people' is better expressed as 'Most people'. 'Making lease' is a typo and should be 'making lists'. 'A time consuming' is incorrect; 'time-consuming' is an adjective and does not need an article.

× So they prefer to spend time on an. Completing tasks the others are very confident under memory to not for get things to do.

✓ So they prefer to spend time on completing tasks; others are very confident in their memory to not forget things to do.

The sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect conjunctions and prepositions. 'On an. Completing tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'on completing tasks'. 'Under memory' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'confident in their memory'.

× I prefer to make your list on a paper because I think it is really dangerous to using your phone in a properly and also it is risky to lose it.

✓ I prefer to make my list on paper because I think it is really dangerous to use your phone improperly, and also it is risky to lose it.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrectly used instead of 'my' to match the subject. 'To using' should be 'to use'. 'In a properly' is incorrect; it should be 'improperly' or 'inappropriately'.

× So I prefer to write it down because it is easy to carry it and it's a better way to remember things to do.

✓ So I prefer to write it down because it is easy to carry and it's a better way to remember things to do.

The phrase 'easy to carry it' is redundant; 'carry' already implies the object. Removing 'it' makes the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.