列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness and effectiveness. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence, followed by specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and ensure correct grammar to improve clarity.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list because I can easily remember what I need. However, if I have many items to buy or I'm in a hurry, I make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

建議: Your answer lacks clarity and contains several grammatical mistakes. To improve, respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, focus on correct sentence structure and vocabulary relevant to the context.

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work, especially when I have important tasks. Writing them down in my planner helps me stay organised and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Improve by using correct grammar, clearer vocabulary, and linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: From my point of view, some people don't like making lists because they already know what they need to do, so they find lists unnecessary. Also, some people find lists restrictive and prefer to keep their plans flexible.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary and correct sentence structure.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because we use our phones all the time nowadays. This makes it easier and more convenient to keep track of my lists.

× I don't usually make a shopping list because I can easily remember the thing I need.

✓ I don't usually make a shopping list because I can easily remember the things I need.

The word 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items needed, not just one.

× For instant, when I go to the supermarket are just keep the items in my my.

✓ For instance, when I go to the supermarket, I just keep the items in my mind.

The sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'For instant' should be 'For instance'. The phrase 'are just keep the items in my my' is incorrect; it should be 'I just keep the items in my mind' to make sense and be grammatically correct.

× However, if I have a lot to buy or if I am in a hurry, I should how make a list to avoid forget?

✓ However, if I have a lot to buy or if I am in a hurry, I should make a list to avoid forgetting.

The modal verb 'should' is incorrectly followed by 'how make'; 'how' is unnecessary. Also, 'avoid forget' should be 'avoid forgetting' because 'avoid' is followed by a gerund.

× Yes, I always make a list from my work, especially when they were out important or is a good work is really help me stay organized an ensure that I'm not forget anything important actually write anything down in my planner with makes me. Easier with my work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work, especially when there are important tasks. It really helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget anything important. I actually write everything down in my planner, which makes it easier to manage my work.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect; it should be 'for' when referring to making a list related to work. The original sentence is fragmented and contains multiple errors; it has been corrected for clarity and grammar, including subject-verb agreement and verb forms.

× So from my point of view, I think some people that don't like making list because they early know exactly what they need to do, so they feel a list is unnecessary.

✓ So from my point of view, I think some people don't like making lists because they already know exactly what they need to do, so they feel a list is unnecessary.

The relative pronoun 'that' is unnecessary here; 'some people don't like making lists' is correct. Also, 'early' should be 'already'. 'Making list' should be plural 'making lists'.

× Also some people file list. Resistive and prefer to keep their plan flexible.

✓ Also, some people find lists restrictive and prefer to keep their plans flexible.

The phrase 'file list. Resistive' is incorrect; it should be 'find lists restrictive'. 'Plan' should be plural 'plans' to match 'their'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer make a place on my mobile.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb: 'prefer to make'. 'Place' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. 'On my mobile' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× Because you know, nowadays social media and phone, we clearly phone all the time.

✓ Because you know, nowadays with social media and phones, we use our phones all the time.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Social media and phone' should be 'social media and phones'. 'We clearly phone all the time' is incorrect; it should be 'we use our phones all the time'.

× So I think if we make lists on mobile, phone is making easier.

✓ So I think if we make lists on mobile phones, it makes things easier.

The phrase 'on mobile, phone' is incorrect; it should be 'on mobile phones'. 'Is making easier' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it makes things easier'.