唱歌— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap doğal fakat karışık ve bazen anlamsız ifadeler içeriyor. Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi ile başlayın, ardından 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları (ör. "I say very long") kaldırın ve nedenleri daha spesifik yapın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak (because, so, and) akışı iyileştirin. Ayrıca cümle yapılarını basit tutup doğru zaman ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin.

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and forget my problems. For example, when I sing at home after a stressful day, I immediately feel calmer. Because singing distracts me, I often sing for 10–15 minutes to lift my mood.

建議: Cevap kafa karıştırıcı ve dilbilgisi hataları çok. Doğrudan "No" ile başlayıp kısa bir açıklama verin neden ders almadığınızı. Gereksiz ve anlamsız ifadelerden kaçının. Basit cümleler kurun ve bağlaçlarla gerekirse sebep gösterin (because, so).

範例: No, I have never taken singing lessons because I felt I could improve by practising at home. However, I sometimes watch online tutorials to learn basic techniques.

建議: Duyguyu ifade etmek iyi ama cümleler tekrar ediyor ve bazı kelime seçimleri hatalı (ör. "love boyfriend", "look at his"). Daha doğru possessive ve artikeller kullanın (my boyfriend, when I look at him). Bir konu cümlesiyle başlayıp 1–2 spesifik destekleyici ayrıntı verin.

範例: I would like to sing for my boyfriend because it makes him happy and helps me feel closer to him. For instance, I sometimes sing a romantic song when we have dinner together.

建議: Genel fikir uygun ancak ifadeler tekrar ediyor ve bazı kelimeler yanlış (ör. "say they can sing"). Daha doğal ve spesifik örnekler verin. Bağlaçlarla neden–sonuç ilişkisini net kurun ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

範例: Yes, I believe singing can make people happier because it reduces stress and improves mood. For example, people often sing along to cheerful songs to lift their spirits when they feel bored or sad.

建議: Cümleler anlam bakımından belirsiz ve dilbilgisi hataları var (ör. "individuals sound", "don't like listen"). Net bir konu cümlesi kurup, iki kısa destekleyici açıklama verin; olumlu ve olumsuz durumları örnekleyin. Doğru kelime sırası ve artikellere dikkat edin.

範例: Yes, I enjoy listening to other people sing, especially if they have a pleasant voice. For example, I like listening to professional singers because their tone and control are impressive, but I avoid performances where the singer is clearly off-key.

建議: Cevap mantıklı ve sebep verilmiş fakat gereksiz tekrarlar ve karışık ifade var. Tek bir net neden verin ve kısa detay ekleyin (örn. yoğun program, başka öncelikler). Zaman ifadelerini düzenleyin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

範例: No, I haven't taken any singing classes because I was too busy with school and studying. If I had more free time now, I would consider joining a weekend class to improve my voice.

× Yes, I like singing because when I sing a song I feel very comfortable and I forget my old problems. I say very long.

✓ Yes, I like singing because when I sing a song I feel very comfortable and I forget my old problems. I sing for a long time.

The phrase 'I say very long' is incorrect because 'say' does not collocate with duration. Use the verb 'sing' and express duration as 'for a long time'. Suggestion: replace 'I say very long' with 'I sing for a long time'.

× No, I haven't learned how to think because I understood. How musics are sing sang and I haven't need it.

✓ No, I haven't learned how to sing because I didn't understand how music is sung and I didn't need it.

Multiple errors: 'learned how to think' is wrong meaning; use 'learned how to sing'. 'Understood' vs 'didn't understand' tense/meaning issue corrected. 'Musics' is incorrect plural; use 'music'. 'are sing sang' is incorrect forms; use passive 'is sung' or active 'people sing'. 'I haven't need it' should be 'I didn't need it' (past tense). Suggestion: use correct verb forms and nouns: 'I haven't learned how to sing because I didn't understand how music is sung and I didn't need it.'

× I want to sing for my boyfriend because I love boyfriend so much and when I look at his I forget my old problems and I will sing a song. I want to sing a song with my boyfriend.

✓ I want to sing for my boyfriend because I love him so much, and when I look at him I forget my old problems and I will sing a song. I want to sing a song with my boyfriend.

'Love boyfriend' is missing the object pronoun; use 'love him'. 'Look at his' is wrong possessive pronoun; use 'look at him'. Suggestion: replace noun repeats with appropriate pronouns to sound natural: 'I love him', 'look at him'.

× Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing a song they feel very comfortable and when people feel bored they can say they can sing a song.

✓ Yes, singing can bring happiness to people because when people sing a song they feel very comfortable, and when people feel bored they can sing a song.

'Can say they can sing a song' is redundant and incorrect. Remove 'say they can' and use the simple modal structure 'can sing'. Suggestion: simplify to 'they can sing a song'.

× Yes, but it is change from sound to sense. For example, if individuals sound is good, of course I like listening to them, but if the sound is not good I don't like listen to them.

✓ Yes, but it varies from sound to sense. For example, if an individual's voice is good, of course I like listening to them, but if the sound is not good I don't like listening to them.

'It is change from' is ungrammatical; use 'it varies'. 'Individuals sound' needs possessive: 'individual's voice'. 'Sound' is acceptable but 'voice' is more natural. 'I don't like listen to them' needs gerund: 'listening to them'. Suggestion: use 'varies', possessive forms, and correct verb+ing after 'like'.

× No, I haven't taken a single class because my life was really busy and I didn't find the time. So I didn't join another class because I studied lesson and I went to school.

✓ No, I haven't taken a single class because my life was really busy and I didn't find the time. So I didn't join other classes because I was studying and I went to school.

'Another class' is awkward when referring to any additional classes; use 'other classes'. 'I studied lesson' is unnatural; use 'I was studying' or 'I had lessons'. Tense consistency: keep past continuous 'was studying' with 'went to school'. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'other classes', 'I was studying', or 'I had lessons'.