记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сформулируйте ответ яснее и грамматически правильно: начните с прямого утверждения, затем приведите одно конкретное краткое объяснение или пример. Избегайте повторов и избыточных слов, используйте простые связки (for example, because, so). Исправьте ошибки времени и формы слов (например, "forgot" → "forget", "regret regrets" → убрать повтор).

範例: I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget details from the previous day because I have a busy schedule, so I rely on notes to remember important items.

建議: Говорите последовательно: сначала прямой ответ, затем кратко опишите ситуацию и результат. Используйте правильные времена и корректную форму глаголов, избегайте лишних слов (например, не говорите дважды «I come, I came»). Добавьте связку (for example, but, so) для плавности.

範例: Yes, I once forgot my mother's birthday. For example, I missed planning a gift, but my father reminded me and I arrived at the celebration on time, so everything turned out okay.

建議: Начните с общей темы, затем перечислите конкретные примеры с помощью связок (such as, for example). Избегайте повторов слов (current) и используйте более естественные фразы (calls вместо callings).

範例: I need to remember my work responsibilities every day. For example, I use a calendar to keep track of meetings, phone calls and deadlines so I don't miss important tasks.

建議: Дайте прямой ответ, затем подробно опишите метод с примерами и связками (for example, then, so). Избегайте лишней модальности (will) если говорите о привычках — используйте present simple. Уточните названия или функции приложений для конкретики.

範例: I rely on my phone to remember important things. For example, I use a task app and calendar to make lists, set reminders and check tasks regularly, so I don't forget appointments.

× I think I'm not so good at memorizing things.

✓ I don't think I'm very good at memorizing things.

The original uses 'I think I'm not so good' which is awkward and unnatural in present tense. Use 'I don't think I'm very good' to express negative belief about a current ability. Suggestion: use simple present negative construction 'I don't think' plus adjective phrase.

× For example, I often forgot what it was yesterday and but it's not problem for me.

✓ For example, I often forget what happened yesterday, but it's not a problem for me.

Mixed tenses: 'often' requires simple present 'forget' for habitual actions. 'What it was yesterday' is ungrammatical; use 'what happened yesterday'. Also missing article before 'problem' and extra conjunction 'and'. Use 'but' alone and add 'a'.

× I also kind of forget about some regret regrets.

✓ I also tend to forget some regrets.

Redundant 'regret regrets' is incorrect. 'kind of' is informal and unclear; use 'tend to' for habitual tendency. Use singular 'regrets' or 'some regrets' correctly.

× Yes, of course there was one situation where I forgot about my mum's birthday.

✓ Yes, of course there was one time when I forgot my mum's birthday.

'Situation' is not wrong but 'one time' or 'once' is more natural. 'Forgot about my mum's birthday' is acceptable but 'forgot my mum's birthday' is more idiomatic. Keep past tense 'was' and 'forgot'.

× It was terrible but my father remembered me about the celebration and I come, I came to it at the normal time.

✓ It was terrible, but my father reminded me about the celebration and I came at the usual time.

Use 'reminded me' rather than 'remembered me'. 'Remembered me about' is incorrect collocation. 'Come, I came' is repetition and wrong tense for 'come'; use past 'came'. 'At the normal time' should be 'at the usual time'.

× I usually need to remember my current working issues.

✓ I usually need to remember my current work issues.

'Working issues' is awkward; use 'work issues' or 'work-related issues'. 'Usually need to remember' is acceptable but 'need to remember my current work tasks' is clearer.

× I have a calendar which reminds me about my current tasks like meetings, like callings or other working activities.

✓ I have a calendar that reminds me about my current tasks, like meetings, calls, or other work activities.

Use 'that' instead of 'which' for essential clauses in informal speech. 'Callings' is incorrect; use 'calls'. 'Working activities' should be 'work activities'. Remove extra 'like' and add commas for a list.

× My phone also helps me to remember important things.

✓ My phone also helps me remember important things.

'Helps me to remember' is grammatically acceptable but more natural is 'helps me remember' (bare infinitive after 'help'). Maintain present tense.

× I have special applications for that where I can write a current list of tasks.

✓ I have special apps for that where I can write a current list of tasks.

'Applications for that' is awkward but acceptable; 'apps' is more natural. No major preposition error, but 'for that' can be kept; alternative: 'I have special apps for this' would be better. 'Current list of tasks' is okay.

× And when I need to check something, I will use this application.

✓ And when I need to check something, I use this app.

Using 'will' for habitual actions is incorrect; use simple present 'I use' for routines. Also 'application' -> 'app' for natural speech.