记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g., “good at”, “memorising”, “human beings”, “memories”).

範例: Yes, I’m fairly good at memorising things because I practise regularly. For example, as a child I used to memorise poems and stories, which helped me build strong recall skills. Because of that practice, I find it easy to remember names and important dates.

建議: Give a direct answer (Yes/No), then give one concise specific example with a brief reason or consequence. Use past tense correctly and avoid vague phrases like “something special.”

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important appointment with my doctor last year. I missed the appointment because I did not put it on my calendar, and I had to reschedule and wait two weeks for the next available slot.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence stating what you need to remember daily, then give one or two specific reasons or examples and use linking words (for example, because, so). Correct word choice: say “I need to remember to…” or “I try to remember…”.

範例: In my daily life, I need to remember my study schedule and reading tasks because they help me improve my English. For example, I set a reminder to read for 30 minutes every evening so I can build vocabulary and strengthen my comprehension.

建議: Explain a clear method (e.g., making lists, using reminders, repeating information) with one specific example and linking words. Avoid irrelevant or repeated ideas; correct phrases like “reading books helps me” and replace unclear terms (e.g., “aisles picking”) with clear actions.

範例: I remember important things by using reminders and note-taking. For instance, I write tasks in a notebook and set phone alarms so I don’t forget deadlines, and I also review my notes each morning to reinforce my memory.

× Yeah, I think my good at memorizing thing because thinking is very important for our life, for human life beings.

✓ Yeah, I think I'm good at memorizing things because memory is very important for human life.

The original uses incorrect pronoun and verb forms: 'my good' should be 'I'm good' (subject + verb to be), 'memorizing thing' should be plural 'memorizing things' (singular/plural). 'thinking is very important for our life, for human life beings' is awkward and uses incorrect noun form; 'memory is very important for human life' is clearer. Suggest practicing subject-verb constructions and choosing correct noun forms and countability.

× So for my good thing for memorizing like my childhood.

✓ One thing that helped my memory was my childhood experiences.

The phrase 'for my good thing for memorizing' is ungrammatical and uses incorrect adjectives; restructuring the sentence into a clear subject ('One thing that helped my memory') and past tense verb ('was') fixes meaning. Recommend practicing using relative clauses and clear noun phrases.

× So my childhood is very good thing for my memories.

✓ My childhood gave me many good memories.

'Is very good thing for my memories' is incorrect adjective-noun usage and article omission; use 'gave me many good memories' to express cause and correct countability. Suggest learning verbs that express possession/experience (give, provide) and correct article use.

× 1st I have forgotten something important.

✓ First, I forgot something important.

The student used present perfect 'have forgotten' with '1st' (first) and narrative context; simple past 'forgot' is more natural when recounting a specific past event. Also '1st' should be written 'First,'. Practice distinguishing present perfect (experience) from simple past (specific events).

× I've forgotten something special.

✓ I forgot something important.

Using present perfect 'I've forgotten' can be acceptable, but 'something special' is vague and inconsistent; 'important' matches the question. For a specific past incident use simple past 'I forgot'. Ensure tense matches context and choose precise vocabulary.

× I remember in my daily life like, uh, reading books because reading books is my remem remember and they're memorizing and there grow my reading skill.

✓ In my daily life, I read books because reading helps me remember things and improves my reading skills.

Original has incorrect preposition placement ('remember in my daily life'), repetition and wrong pronouns ('they're'), and incorrect verb forms ('there grow'). The corrected sentence uses correct preposition order, singular/plural agreement, and clear verbs ('helps', 'improves'). Suggest practicing sentence structure for routines and subject-verb agreement.

× Yeah, this is always daily life for me.

✓ This is part of my daily routine.

'Always daily life' is awkward; use noun 'routine' and correct prepositional phrase 'part of my daily routine'. Also avoid unnecessary adverbs. Practice common collocations like 'daily routine'.

× Well, I think I remember important things to the, uh, reading books because reading book is growing my growing my reading skill and they're very helpful for me with my aisles picking and also reading.

✓ I remember important things by reading books, because reading improves my skills and is very helpful when I need to pick items in aisles and when I read.

Original has incorrect preposition 'remember ... to the reading books', repeated phrases, wrong forms ('reading book', 'growing my growing my'), and unclear phrase 'aisles picking'. The correction uses gerund 'by reading', correct present tense 'improves', and clarifies 'picking items in aisles'. Recommend practicing gerund use to express methods (by + -ing) and eliminating repetitions.