记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ответ был понятен, но звучал неестественно и запинался. Нужно давать краткий тематический ответ, затем одно-два поддерживающих предложения с логическими связками. Избегайте повторов и запинок, используйте простые фразы и корректную грамматику.

範例: Not really. I find it hard to memorise facts because I remember events rather than details, so I often forget names even if I remember the situation.

建議: Хорошая конкретная история, но речь была запинана и повторялась. Надо структурировать ответ: короткий вступительный предложение, затем причина и результат с логическими связками. Следите за правильным временем и избегайте повторов слов.

範例: Yes. Once I forgot my phone password, so I couldn't access my photos or accounts. As a result, I lost important pictures and felt really frustrated.

建議: Ответ расплывчат и содержит много повторов. Надо отвечать прямо на вопрос (что нужно помнить), затем привести одно конкретное примечание с объяснением. Используйте связки (for example, because, so) и проверьте согласование числительных и артиклей.

範例: I need to remember my weekly tasks, such as reading one book per week. For example, by setting a reading schedule I can recall the book's plot and also organise my daily chores better.

建議: Ответ был очень неясен и бессвязен. Нужно дать ясную стратегию запоминания: короткое утверждение и затем одно-два конкретных метода с примерами. Избегайте эхолалий и незаконченных фраз.

範例: I usually use reminders and notes to remember important things. For example, I set phone alarms and write short to‑do lists so my friends or I can check them when needed.

× No, I'm not 'cause I'm not that good at memorizing things. I'm I have a lot of memories and so I don't know everyone.

✓ No, I'm not, because I'm not very good at memorizing things. I have a lot of memories, so I can't remember everyone.

The original contains run-on structure and redundant words ('I'm I have'). It mixes spoken contractions and informal connectors incorrectly. Suggestion: separate into two clear sentences, replace 'cause' with 'because' in formal contexts, use 'very good' instead of 'that good' for clarity, and use 'can't remember' to express inability. Improve fluency by removing repetition and ensuring each clause has a subject and verb.

× Yes I forgot our password from my phone so I lost every photo and accounts from my phone and I I'm I'm sick of that.

✓ Yes, I forgot the password for my phone, so I lost all the photos and accounts on it, and I was very upset about that.

Use past simple consistently to describe past events. 'Forgot' is correct, but 'so I lost every photo and accounts from my phone' is ungrammatical: use 'all the photos and accounts on it.' 'I'm sick of that' is present; change to 'I was very upset about that' to match past context. Avoid repetition and correct preposition use ('for my phone', 'on it').

× I think I need to read the books every every week.

✓ I think I need to read books every week.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before the plural noun here. Also there is a duplicated word 'every.' Use plural 'books' without 'the' when speaking generally. 'Every week' expresses frequency correctly.

× I think in a one book in a one week.

✓ I think one book per week.

The phrase 'in a one book in a one week' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the concise expression 'one book per week' or 'one book a week.' Ensure correct order: quantity + noun + frequency unit.

× So because of that, because of book, I remember a books, a story of a book and I remember daily things of my life.

✓ Because of that, from reading books I remember their stories and the daily things in my life.

Multiple article errors: 'because of book' should be 'because of reading books' or 'from reading books.' 'I remember a books, a story of a book' is incorrect: use 'their stories.' Use plural possessive reference to 'books.' Also 'daily things of my life' is awkward; use 'the daily things in my life.' Remove redundant 'because of that.'

× I don't remember it's so well, so I, uh, tell that I told her on my told without seeing some of my friends and my friends, uh, against tell me that when I forgot that.

✓ I don't remember things very well, so I tell someone I trust or a friend when I forget something.

The original is highly fragmented and unclear. Fix sentence structure: use 'I don't remember things very well' and a clear main clause: 'so I tell someone I trust or a friend when I forget something.' Remove filler words and repeated fragments. Ensure subject-verb-object order and logical connectors.