记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use correct plural forms. Add a brief supporting detail with a linking word. Also keep answers within 2–3 sentences.

範例: Yes, I'm quite good at memorising things. For example, when I study a new language, I can learn new vocabulary quickly because I use association techniques and review words regularly.

建議: Give a direct yes/no then a short reason using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid informal contractions and incorrect structures; correct subject-verb agreement and article use.

範例: No, I haven't. I tend to double-check important information because I get nervous about forgetting things, so I make lists and review them regularly.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence and remove filler words. Use precise phrasing and correct grammar (avoid 'not allowed to forget it'). Provide a concise reason and a brief example of how you ensure you remember it.

範例: The most important thing I must remember every day is to take my medication for emotional control, because missing doses affects my mood. Therefore, I set an alarm and keep the medication next to my toothbrush as a reminder.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, use linking words (however, so), and avoid redundant phrasing. Explain specific methods you use (alarms, notes, apps) and give a short example of when you use them.

範例: Usually I rely on memory for routine tasks, but for important things I use tools. For example, I set phone alarms or write memos in a notes app so I don't forget appointments or medication.

× I think I have enough abilities to memorize something accurately and fast.

✓ I think I have enough ability to memorize things accurately and quickly.

Use 'ability' (uncountable) instead of 'abilities' here because referring to a general skill; use plural 'things' rather than 'something' for general statements; use adverb 'quickly' not adjective 'fast' to modify the verb 'memorize'. Suggestion: say 'ability to memorize things accurately and quickly.'

× Because of this ability, when I learn some languages, I always memorize the vocabulary vocabularies fast.

✓ Because of this ability, when I learn languages, I always memorize vocabulary quickly.

Do not repeat 'vocabulary' and 'vocabularies' together; 'vocabulary' is uncountable so use singular form. 'Some languages' can be simplified to 'languages'. Use adverb 'quickly' instead of adjective 'fast'. Suggestion: 'I always memorize vocabulary quickly.'

× No, 'cause I'm easily to become nervous if I don't check every details that I need to memorize.

✓ No, because I easily become nervous if I don't check every detail I need to memorize.

Remove 'to' after 'easily' — phrase should be 'easily become nervous'. Use 'because' rather than informal ''cause' for clarity. 'Every details' is wrong: use singular 'every detail'. Omit 'that' after 'details' and use reduced relative clause 'detail I need to memorize.' Suggestion: 'I easily become nervous if I don't check every detail I need to memorize.'

× Well, I think the most important thing that I'm not allowed to forget it in my daily life must be taking medicines that help me control, uh, my emotions.

✓ Well, I think the most important thing I must not forget in my daily life is taking medicine that helps me control my emotions.

Avoid redundancy: remove 'that' and 'it' together; use 'must not forget' rather than 'I'm not allowed to forget' which changes meaning. Use uncountable 'medicine' or 'medication' instead of 'medicines' when referring to treatment in general; match verb 'helps' to singular 'medicine'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: 'the most important thing I must not forget is taking medication that helps me control my emotions.'

× Umm, I think it is not an ordinary thing. Umm, so I need to pay extra attention to memorize it.

✓ I think it is not an ordinary thing, so I need to pay extra attention to remembering it.

Use 'remembering' (gerund) after 'pay attention to' instead of infinitive 'to memorize'. Combine sentences for smoother flow. Suggestion: 'so I need to pay extra attention to remembering it.'

× Well, in the daily life, in most of the time I prefer to memorize something just by my brain or my memorizing ability 'cause I think it is enough.

✓ In daily life, most of the time I prefer to memorize things just using my brain or my memory because I think that is enough.

Use 'daily life' without 'the'; 'most of the time' rather than 'in most of the time'. Use plural 'things' for general statements. 'Using my brain or my memory' is more natural than 'my memorizing ability'. Replace informal ''cause' with 'because'. Suggestion: 'most of the time I prefer to memorize things just using my memory.'

× But if something important that I must pay extra attention to, it will happen.

✓ But if something is important and I must pay extra attention to it, I will do so.

Original sentence is ungrammatical. Need a complete conditional clause: 'If something is important and I must pay extra attention to it' as condition, and a clear result 'I will do so' or 'I will use other methods.' 'It will happen' is vague. Suggestion: 'If something is important and I must pay extra attention to it, I will take extra steps to remember it.'

× I think I will also use the memos to avoid forgetting it.

✓ I think I will also use memos to avoid forgetting it.

Use plural 'memos' without 'the' unless referring to specific memos; keep 'it' to refer to the important thing mentioned. Suggestion: 'I will also use memos to avoid forgetting it.'