记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答需要更自然、简洁且语法正确。应以主题句直接回答问题，并用一到两句具体说明或举例，避免过多填充词（如 "umm", "uh"）和重复。注意主语与动词一致（例如说 “It’s not my thing” 或 “I’m not good at it”）。

範例: Not really. I find memorising difficult because I often forget new words unless I review them several times. For example, when I learn English vocabulary, I need frequent repetition or I quickly forget the words.

建議: 回答已包含直接回应和举例，但可以更流畅并减少模糊表达。用更自然的句型说明频率与后果，并使用连接词使句子连贯，如 “because” 或 “so”。避免不必要的被动或不准确表达（例如 “it usually happened on me” 不自然）。

範例: Yes, I have. For instance, I often forget the time of some classes, so my classmates have to remind me. This has caused me to miss a few sessions, which is frustrating because I fall behind on coursework.

建議: 回答应更简洁且条理清晰。先用一句话概括主要类别（如 schedule or appointments），然后列举具体事项并用连接词分隔。注意词汇搭配（不要说 “some dating with others” — 用 “appointments” 或 “plans with friends”）。避免语法错误（“a large amount of” 用于不可数名词，改用 “a large number of” 或 “many”）。

範例: I need to remember my daily schedule, such as class times at university, appointments or plans with friends, and study tasks or deadlines. For example, I keep track of assignment due dates and class times so I can prepare in advance.

建議: 回答已经明确且实用，但可以更自然地组织并减少重复。先给出主要方法，然后说明具体操作和优点，使用连接词如 “so” 或 “for example”。注意主谓一致（“notebooks are”）。

範例: I rely on my phone calendar and digital notebooks to remember important things. For example, I set reminders for classes and deadlines in my calendar and keep detailed notes in a digital notebook so I can quickly check them when needed.

× Actually is not my thing.

✓ Actually, it's not my thing.

此句缺少主语和助动词的正确位置，應使用縮寫形式“it's”或完整形式“it is”。建议在口语中使用“it's”来使句子完整且自然。

× I think it's hard, hard for me.

✓ I think it's hard for me.

句子重复了形容词“hard”。应删除多余的词以使句子简洁自然。

× For example, umm, when I memorize some, even some English words, umm, I will forget it uh, quickly without repetition.

✓ For example, when I memorize things, even some English words, I forget them quickly without repetition.

原句中“memorize some”後接不明指代且時態及代詞不一致。根据语境使用一般现在时或现在习惯性事实，用“forget them”与“things/words”保持数的一致。建议使用复数代词“them”指代前文的“things/words”。

× Well, yes. Umm, it usually happened on me.

✓ Well, yes. Umm, it usually happens to me.

原句“happened on me”結構不正確，且時態應為習慣性現在時，用“happens to me”表示經常發生在我身上。

× For example, sometimes I will forget when to take some classes and I need my classmates to remind me of that.

✓ For example, sometimes I forget when I should attend classes and I need my classmates to remind me.

句中時態不需要未來式“will”，用一般現在時表示習慣性行為更自然；“when to take some classes”表達不夠地道，改為“when I should attend classes”。此外“remind me of that”可簡化為“remind me”。

× There are a large amount of things I need to remember, like my class times at university and my schedule and some dating with others and even some knowledge I learned I have to prepare for it.

✓ There are a large number of things I need to remember, like my class times at university, my schedule, dates with others, and even some knowledge I have learned that I need to prepare.

“a large amount of”通常用于不可數名詞，應對可數名詞使用“a large number of”。“some dating with others”表達不自然，改用“dates with others”。句子過長且結構混亂，需重組並使代詞、時態一致。

× Well, as I mentioned before, I am poor at memorizing things, so I will choose to remember them through my phone calendar.

✓ Well, as I mentioned before, I am poor at memorizing things, so I choose to remember them using my phone calendar.

使用“will choose”暗示未來計劃，但此處表達習慣性做法應用一般現在時“choose”。另外“through my phone calendar”可改為“using my phone calendar”更自然。

× Yeah, and my digital notebooks is quite useful because once I need, I will check on it.

✓ Yeah, and my digital notebook is quite useful because whenever I need to, I check it.

原句“notebooks is”主謂不一致，若使用單數“notebook”則動詞用“is”；此外“once I need, I will check on it”時態和副詞使用不自然，改為“whenever I need to, I check it”更符合習慣表達。