记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity and grammar, produce a concise topic sentence, and give one specific supporting detail using linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary filler. Focus on correct verb forms and contractions only when natural.

範例: I find memorising difficult, especially for topics I am not interested in. For example, I’m not into cars, so I struggle to remember car-related facts. To help, I try to relate new information to things I care about, which makes it easier to recall.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example with chronological coherence. Reduce hesitation words and correct grammar (e.g., past tense). Use linking words to clarify sequence.

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things. For example, during an exam last year I completely blanked on an answer because I felt nervous. Since then, I practise mock exams to improve my recall under pressure.

建議: Give one clear specific item to remember and explain why and how it affects you. Eliminate fillers and unclear references. Use linking words to connect cause and effect and correct tense usage.

範例: In daily life I need to remember to eat regular meals because I often get absorbed in work or study. As a result, I set alarms and prepare meals in advance so I don't skip them.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your main strategy, then give a specific example and a brief reason or result. Reduce repetition and improve grammar (present continuous vs. simple present). Add linking words for coherence.

範例: I use repetition to remember important things because it helps move information into long-term memory. For example, when I learn new vocabulary I repeat each word aloud several times and use it in sentences until I can recall it without prompting.

× I think this is quite tough question, but for me I think it's quite difficult for me to memorize things, especially with something I don't really into it.

✓ I think this is quite a tough question, but for me it is difficult to memorize things, especially subjects I am not really interested in.

Original has missing article 'a', redundant phrases ('for me' twice), incorrect structure 'something I don't really into it' (missing verb and wrong pronoun). Suggestion: add 'a' before 'tough question', remove repetition, use 'it is' or 'I'm', and use 'interested in' after the noun to form correct prepositional phrase.

× Like for example, I I not a car person, so sometimes when it comes to car or something I think I not really good.

✓ For example, I am not a car person, so sometimes when it comes to cars I am not really good at them.

Original omits the verb 'am' and uses 'I not' which is ungrammatical. 'Car' should be plural 'cars' when speaking generally, and the phrase 'good at' requires the preposition 'at' and an object. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'to be' (am), pluralize the noun for a general statement, and use 'good at' plus pronoun or noun.

× He uh, yes, of course. I think the most important things I forgot is the answer when I'm trying to figure out the caution, like when I was in exam or something.

✓ Yes, of course. I think the most important thing I have forgotten is an answer when I am trying to recall a question, for example during an exam.

Problems: 'most important things' should be singular 'thing' if referring to one item; 'I forgot' with present relevance should be present perfect 'I have forgotten'; 'when I'm trying to figure out the caution' is unclear and ungrammatical—likely 'recall a question' or 'remember the question'; 'when I was in exam' lacks article and correct preposition—use 'during an exam'. Suggestion: use present perfect for past actions with present relevance, use singular/plural consistently, and replace unclear phrasing.

× I think that's, that's actually interesting for me.

✓ I think that's actually interesting to me.

Redundant comma and repeated 'that's'; 'interesting for me' is acceptable but 'interesting to me' is more natural. Suggestion: remove repetition and use 'interesting to me'.

× MMM In my daily life, I think there are many things that I have to remember, but one of the most important things is it.

✓ In my daily life, I think there are many things I have to remember, but one of the most important is eating regularly.

Original ends with 'is it' which is ungrammatical and unclear. Also 'one of the most important things' should be followed by the specific item. Suggestion: specify the important thing and remove filler words.

× So I need to eat in the uh, in most of the time.

✓ So I need to eat most of the time.

Original includes unnecessary 'in the' before 'most of the time' and filler words. Suggestion: simplify to 'eat most of the time' or 'eat regularly'.

× But sometime I do remember to eat 'cause when I was into the work or study.

✓ But sometimes I forget to eat because when I am busy with work or study I lose track of time.

Original uses 'do remember' incorrectly; context suggests forgetting. 'Sometime' should be plural 'sometimes'; 'cause' should be 'because'; 'when I was into the work or study' is unidiomatic—use 'busy with work or study'. Also tense should match habitual present. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual situations and correct adverb and conjunction.

× Uh, how to I in, uh, remember the important things.

✓ How do I remember important things?

Original word order is incorrect for forming a question. 'How to I' is wrong; correct auxiliary is 'do' and order is 'How do I...'. Also remove filler sounds. Suggestion: use standard question word order: question word + auxiliary + subject + base verb.

× So for example, when I trying to memorize the vocabulary or trying to remember a sentence, I always repeat, repeat, repeat over, over again.

✓ For example, when I am trying to memorize vocabulary or remember a sentence, I always repeat it over and over again.

Original omits auxiliary 'am' before 'trying' and unnecessarily repeats 'trying'; 'the vocabulary' should be 'vocabulary' (uncountable) or 'the vocabulary words'; 'repeat, repeat, repeat over, over again' is redundant and missing object. Suggestion: include auxiliary 'am', simplify repetition to 'repeat it over and over again'.

× So trying to make it into my deep mind.

✓ I try to make it part of my long-term memory.

Original 'into my deep mind' is not idiomatic English. Use 'make it part of my long-term memory' or 'store it in my memory'. Also change 'trying to' to 'I try to' to form a complete sentence. Suggestion: use standard collocations for memory and ensure subject and verb are present.