记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve fluency, grammar, and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms and singular/plural, avoid redundancy, and add one short specific detail with a linking word. Keep under 5 sentences.

範例: Yes, I am fairly good at memorising things. For example, when I was in secondary school we had dictations, and I could memorise the passages within about 50 minutes. This method helped me perform well in tests.

建議: Work on grammar (tenses, articles), clarity and conciseness. Begin with a direct statement, then give one specific example using linking words (for example, because, so). Avoid repetition and correct vocabulary (e.g., "important", "forgot").

範例: Yes, I have. For example, when I was at university I once forgot the deadline for an assignment, so a friend reminded me and helped me submit it on time. Since then I have tried to use reminders to avoid that problem.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence and more precise vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct articles (a/an/the). Be concise and include one specific detail about your tasks.

範例: I need to remember my work tasks. I work at an events company, so I must plan events and contact various guests; therefore I write down a monthly to-do list with deadlines for each task.

建議: Organise your answer: state method first, then give reasons and a brief example. Improve grammar (verb forms), avoid filler words, and keep sentences concise. Mention one clear benefit of your method.

範例: I usually write paper to-do lists to remember important things. I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember tasks more deeply, and for example I review my list every morning to prioritise urgent items.

× I think I'm good at memorising thing because when I was a secondary school students so we need to have a dictation.

✓ I think I'm good at memorising things because when I was in secondary school we needed to have dictations.

Plural nouns: 'thing' should be 'things' and 'students' should be 'student' (or omit) to match singular subject 'I' and context. Also 'in secondary school' is the correct preposition and 'we needed' keeps past tense consistent. Suggestion: use plural for general items (things) and match noun number to context.

× So as I remember, I just use a few minutes, like 50 minutes.

✓ As I remember, I just used a few minutes, like 50 minutes.

Tense inconsistency: recounting a past event requires past tense 'used' not present 'use'. Keep verbs in past when describing past memories. Suggestion: change present to past when narrating past events.

× I already memorized all the contents, so I feel like good at.

✓ I had already memorized all the content, so I felt good about it.

Use of perfect/past and noun form: 'already memorized' is fine but when sequencing past events 'had already memorized' can be clearer; 'contents' is better as 'content' in this context; 'feel like good at' is ungrammatical — use 'felt good about it'. Suggestion: choose correct noun form and a proper expression for feelings.

× Yes, especially I especially when I'm get older I usually forgot some intolerant things such as when I'm in university I forgot the day that I need to hand in my assignment so I I need to I need the help for by my friend so but I'm trying to fix this.

✓ Yes, especially as I got older I usually forgot some important things. For example, when I was at university I forgot the day I needed to hand in my assignment, so I needed help from my friend, but I'm trying to fix this.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'when I'm get older' should be 'as I got older' (past). 'forgot' is past and should match past context. 'intolerant' is wrong word; use 'important'. 'when I'm in university' should be 'when I was at university'. 'the day that I need to hand in' -> 'the day I needed to hand in'. 'help for by my friend' -> 'help from my friend'. Suggestion: maintain past tense consistently and use correct prepositions and word choice.

× I think which is my work missions because which is very important.

✓ I think my work tasks are what I need to remember because they are very important.

Incorrect use of 'which' and noun choice: 'which is' is incorrect as a subject; better to say 'my work tasks' or 'work responsibilities'. Also 'missions' is unnatural in this context. Suggestion: use clear subject nouns and plural agreement.

× So now I'm working at a event company, so we need to plan a event and we need to contact different guests.

✓ So now I'm working at an event company, so we need to plan events and contact different guests.

Article errors: 'a event' should be 'an event' before a vowel sound. Also 'plan a event' -> 'plan events' (plural) to match general activity. Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds and prefer plural for general repeated tasks.

× So I need to drop down the notes about the missions that I need to do in the next month or this month.

✓ So I need to write down notes about the tasks I need to do this month or next month.

Phrase 'drop down the notes' is incorrect; use 'write down notes' or 'jot down notes'. 'missions' is better as 'tasks'. Suggestion: use common collocations like 'write down' and correct noun choice.

× I usually used to do this to drop down the notes and write down the missions that I need to complete and I usually use the paper To Do List instead of using my mobile phone because I like to write by plan instead of typing so it can help me to umm, deeply memorize something Yeah, I think if.

✓ I usually write down notes and the tasks I need to complete, and I usually use a paper to-do list instead of my mobile phone because I prefer writing plans instead of typing; it helps me remember things more deeply.

Verb form and phrase choice: 'used to do this to drop down' is redundant and incorrect—use 'usually write down'. 'paper To Do List' needs an article 'a paper to-do list'. 'write by plan' is incorrect; use 'writing plans'. 'memorize something' -> 'remember things'. Suggestion: simplify structure, use correct collocations and article usage.