记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: ・はっきりした主題文で答え、不要な繰り返しや発音の誤りを減らしましょう。具体例（仕事で扱う情報の種類や覚え方）を1～2文で付け加えると良いです。接続語（for example, because）を使って回答を論理的に繋げてください。 ・流暢さを高めるために「あいまいな間（uh）」を減らし、文法（I am good at memorizing / I studied）を正確にしましょう。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. For example, as a corporate lawyer I often memorise key legal principles and contract clauses, which helps me work more efficiently. Because I regularly review notes, the information sticks with me.

建議: ・質問に対して直接的な主題文で答え（Yes, I have.）その後、具体的な一例を時系列で整理して述べましょう。現在時制や過去形の使い分け（I forgot / the meeting started / my client called）を正しくすることが大切です。また、繰り返し（called me called me）や曖昧さを避けてください。 ・理由や結果（why it happened, what happened afterwards）を一文で付け加えると会話が豊かになります。

範例: Yes, I have. Once I forgot the start time of a meeting and my client called me when it had already begun. Because I was overloaded with work that day, I missed the first part of the discussion and had to ask for a summary later.

建議: ・まず明確に主題文で答え（I need to remember...）し、具体的な項目（appointments, deadlines, tasksなど）を挙げてください。現在の回答は意味が不明瞭で文法や語順の誤りが多く、内容が伝わりません。箇条的に2つほど具体例を挙げ、接続語（for example, and, so）でつなぐと良いです。 ・発音や語彙（I write down / paper planner）を正しく使い、あいまいな発声を減らしましょう。

範例: I need to remember appointments and deadlines in my daily life. For example, I keep track of meetings and client deadlines, and I also note personal tasks like paying bills in a paper planner.

建議: ・冒頭で明確に方法を示す主題文（I remember important things by...）を使い、その後で具体的な手順や理由（how you use the planner or phone, why it works）を付け加えましょう。現在の回答は意図は伝わるが時制（liked→write）や表現（write things down）が誤っています。接続語（also, because, for example）で構成を整えてください。 ・発音の詰まりや無意味な間を減らし、語彙（paper planner → paper planner or notebook）を正確に使ってください。

範例: I remember important things by writing them down in my paper planner. For example, I list tasks with deadlines and set reminders on my smartphone, so I can follow up and avoid forgetting anything.

× Yeah, I would. Uh, I I'm a good at memorizing things.

✓ Yeah, I would. Uh, I'm good at memorizing things.

The extra pronoun 'I' and the article 'a' before the adjective 'good' are incorrect. Use the subject pronoun 'I' once and say 'I'm good' (I am) without 'a'. Suggestion: remove the duplicated 'I' and the article: 'I'm good at memorizing things.'

× As a corporate lawyer, I studied legal issues and I learn about many things.

✓ As a corporate lawyer, I study legal issues and I learn about many things.

Tense inconsistency: 'studied' is past while 'I learn' is present. If describing current role, use present simple for habitual actions: 'I study' or better 'I deal with' or 'I study' legal issues. Suggestion: keep present tense for ongoing job duties: 'I study legal issues' or 'I deal with legal issues.'

× As many times I forgot.

✓ I have forgotten many times.

Word order and tense: 'As many times I forgot' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect 'have forgotten' for unspecified past occurrences affecting present. Also use proper word order: subject + auxiliary + past participle: 'I have forgotten many times.'

× The time when the meeting starts and my client called me called me.

✓ For example, there was a time when a meeting started and my client called me.

Fragmented and repeated phrase 'called me called me' and unclear time reference. Recast as a clear complete sentence with proper tense and no repetition. Suggestion: provide context 'For example' and use simple past for a specific past event: 'there was a time when a meeting started and my client called me.'

× Uh, I don't remember, uh, many things.

✓ Uh, I don't remember many things.

Extraneous commas and filler words break natural flow; although grammatically acceptable, remove unnecessary commas. Suggestion: say 'I don't remember many things.' for clarity.

× I lie down. On notebooks or paper planner.

✓ I write them down in notebooks or a paper planner.

'I lie down' (to recline) is wrong verb; likely intended 'write down'. Also sentence fragment 'On notebooks or paper planner.' lacks verb and article. Suggestion: use 'write them down in notebooks or a paper planner.'

× So I remember, uh, many things.

✓ So I remember many things.

Remove filler and comma for natural phrasing. Grammatically acceptable but cleaner without extra sounds. Suggestion: 'So I remember many things.'

× The victory.

✓ This helps me remember important things.

'The victory.' is a fragment and does not fit context. Likely intended to mean 'This works' or 'This helps me remember.' Replace with a full sentence that links to previous idea. Suggestion: 'This helps me remember important things.'

× I always liked things down on my paper planner.

✓ I always write things down in my paper planner.

'Liked' (past) is inconsistent with habitual present 'always'. Also missing verb 'write' before 'down'. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I always write things down.' Suggestion: 'I always write things down in my paper planner.'

× It's a good way to, uh, follow up and remember many things.

✓ It's a good way to follow up on and remember many things.

Verb 'follow up' requires preposition 'on' when referring to following up on tasks. Remove filler and place 'on' after 'follow up'. Suggestion: 'follow up on and remember many things.'

× I also, uh, use smartphones.

✓ I also use a smartphone.

Plural 'smartphones' is acceptable but singular 'a smartphone' is more natural when referring to one's device. Remove filler 'uh' and commas. Suggestion: 'I also use a smartphone.'