记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more grammatical, concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific methods with linking words. Avoid repetition and awkward phrases.

範例: Yes, I'm good at memorising things. To remember information I first make sure I understand it, and then I link it to personal experiences or use interesting stories. For example, when learning new vocabulary I create short sentences about my own life, which helps me recall the words more easily.

建議: Give a brief, clear account with a topic sentence and one specific detail. Use correct tense and avoid unclear words. Conclude with a short consequence or lesson learned.

範例: Yes, I have. For example, once I had an appointment with a seller to collect some items, but I forgot to meet her and missed the appointment. As a result I had to reschedule and learned to set reminders on my phone to avoid the same mistake.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence and then give specific examples. Use correct word forms (e.g. 'vocabulary' uncountable) and linking words to explain why these things matter.

範例: I need to remember vocabulary and speaking techniques for my IELTS preparation. For instance, I study topic-related words and practise pronunciation daily so I can speak more fluently and accurately in the exam.

建議: Organize the response: give a topic sentence, then two specific methods with linking words and one brief result. Use natural phrases like 'write things down' and 'set reminders on my phone'.

範例: I usually write important tasks in my planner and set reminders on my phone a few days before the deadline. This way I get notified in advance and rarely forget to complete my tasks.

× Actually I'm good at memorising things because at first I knowing the information and I will keep in mind and try to use some interesting way or something information that is related to my personal life to memorize.

✓ Actually I'm good at memorising things because at first I learn the information and I keep it in mind and try to use some interesting ways or information that is related to my personal life to memorize.

The original sentence uses 'knowing' incorrectly where a simple present verb 'learn' or 'know' is required (verb in present participle form misused). Also 'I will keep in mind' is awkward for a general ability; use present simple 'I keep it in mind'. 'Some interesting way or something information' is ungrammatical; use plural 'ways' and 'information' without 'something'. Suggestions: replace 'knowing' with 'learn' or 'know', use 'keep it in mind', use plural 'ways' or 'methods' and remove 'something' before 'information'.

× Oh yes I have this experience and for example once I had an appointment with my S seller and I forgot to match meet her and take away my things but.

✓ Oh yes, I have had this experience. For example, once I had an appointment with a seller and I forgot to meet her and pick up my things.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'have this experience' should be present perfect 'have had this experience' to refer to a past event. 'Match meet' is incorrect combination; use 'meet'. 'Take away my things' is unnatural here; use 'pick up my things'. Also add commas and split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestions: use present perfect for life experiences and simple past for specific past events, and choose appropriate verbs ('meet', 'pick up').

× For me, I will say the vocabulary or some methods about speaking because now I'm preparing for the IELTS test and I need to memorize a lot of useful vocabularies to help me to strengthen my abilities.

✓ For me, I would say vocabulary or some speaking methods because now I'm preparing for the IELTS test and I need to memorize a lot of useful vocabulary to help strengthen my skills.

Problems: 'I will say' is inappropriate for stating a preference; use 'I would say' or 'I would mention'. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect plural—'vocabulary' is uncountable. 'Methods about speaking' is awkward; 'speaking methods' or 'methods for speaking' is better. 'To help me to strengthen my abilities' is wordy; use 'to help strengthen my skills'. Suggestions: use conditional or present simple for preferences, treat 'vocabulary' as uncountable, and simplify phrasing ('skills').

× Actually I would write it down in my itinerary and before some days I will set up in my cell phone to remind myself that on what day I need to finish what kind of tasks and this very helpful for me to memorize something important things.

✓ Actually I write it down in my itinerary and a few days before I set a reminder on my cell phone to tell me which day I need to finish which tasks, and this is very helpful for me to remember important things.

Tense and word choice issues: 'I would write' suggests conditional; use present simple 'I write' or 'I usually write' for habitual action. 'Before some days' should be 'a few days before'. 'I will set up in my cell phone' is incorrect; use 'I set a reminder on my cell phone' or 'I set up a reminder'. 'To remind myself that on what day I need to finish what kind of tasks' is ungrammatical; use 'to tell me which day I need to finish which tasks'. 'This very helpful for me to memorize something important things' is incorrect; use 'this is very helpful for me to remember important things'. Suggestions: use present simple for habits, correct time expressions, and simplify clauses for clarity.