记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用更自然、语法正确的表达并控制在最多五句。开头用主题句直接回答（Yes/No + brief reason），随后用一两句具体细节或例子并用连接词衔接。注意时态和动词形式（memorise, become），避免冗余。可增加具体例子说明“练习记忆”的方式。

範例: Yes, I used to be good at memorising when I was a child because I could learn many words in a few minutes. However, recently it has become harder to remember things, possibly due to less practice. For example, I rarely use flashcards now, so I think I need to do short daily memory exercises to improve.

建議: 回答直接且具体，但要改进语法与用词，避免口语化或重复。先给出主题句，然后用一两句简洁描述事件与结果，使用连接词（so, therefore）使逻辑更清楚。可说明如何改进以避免类似问题。

範例: Yes, I once forgot an important password when I needed it, which caused a lot of trouble. Therefore, I now write my passwords in a secure notebook and use a password manager as a backup to avoid repeating that mistake.

建議: 回答要更自然并简洁，避免重复和语法错误。先用主题句回答，再用一到两句具体说明（举例说明手机帮助记忆哪些事项），并用连接词衔接。最后一句可提出影响或改进方法。

範例: Nowadays I don't need to remember many daily details because my phone stores them. For example, I check my calendar for appointments and use apps for shopping lists. As a result, my memory for small tasks has declined, so I try to practise remembering one item each day.

建議: 回答清晰且具体，但开头的“MMM”不够正式。保持最多五句，第一句作主题陈述，随后用具体例子支持并用连接词连接。可补充安全性或备份措施以显示更全面的考虑。

範例: I usually rely on my phone to remember important things by setting reminders and using a digital calendar. For example, I set alerts for appointments and record tasks in a notes app so I don’t forget them. To be safe, I also back up critical information in a password-protected note.

× I used to be good at memorize things when I was a child.

✓ I used to be good at memorising things when I was a child.

“be good at” 后面应接动名词（动词 + -ing），不是不定式或原形动词。将 “memorize” 改为动名词 “memorising”。建议多记忆固定搭配（be good at + V-ing）。

× At the time I could memorize such as a lot of words just need a few minutes.

✓ At that time I could memorise a lot of words in just a few minutes.

原句结构混乱，插入了不合适的 “such as” 并且谓语和时间状语顺序不当。改为 “could memorise a lot of words in just a few minutes” 更符合英语语序。建议按 主语 + 情态动词 + 动词 + 宾语 + 时间状语 的顺序组织句子。

× But now I find it become harder and harder to keep something in mind.

✓ But now I find it becoming harder and harder to keep things in mind.

“find” 后接动词时常用动名词或形容词结构，且 “become” 要用进行形式 “becoming” 与 “harder and harder” 搭配更自然；“something” 改为更常用的复数 “things” 表示泛指多项记不住的事。建议注意动词形式和单复数一致。

× Maybe I need more exercise about that.

✓ Maybe I need more practice with that.

英文中表示“练习”常用名词 practice 而不是 exercise（exercise 更多指体育锻炼），且介词搭配用 “practice with” 或 “practice in”。原句也没有动名词错误但更自然的表达需替换词汇。建议学习常用搭配。

× Yes, once I forgot my password when I really needed to use it.

✓ Yes, once I forgot my password when I really needed to use it.

此句时态正确，无需改动。保持过去时描述过去发生的事情是合适的。

× It's really troublesome to me, so after that I always kept the password on a notebook in case I suddenly cannot memorize them.

✓ It was really troublesome for me, so after that I always kept the password in a notebook in case I suddenly couldn't remember it.

“troublesome to me” 更常见的说法是 “troublesome for me”；叙述过去事件时全句应使用过去时（was / couldn't）；“on a notebook” 应改为 “in a notebook”；“cannot memorize them” 中密码是单数，应使用代词 “it” 并用更自然的动词 “remember”。建议注意代词指代一致、介词搭配及时态一致。

× Actually, because of the frequent use of mobile phones, I don't have to remember anything in my daily life.

✓ Actually, because of the frequent use of mobile phones, I don't have to remember much in my daily life.

原句语法上可接受，但“anything” 与后文逻辑略冲突（后文说“check the information if I really need them”），用 “much” 更符合不可数/泛指信息的表达。若保留 “anything” 也可，但建议用 “much” 以提高自然度。

× I just need to turn on my phone and check the information if I really need them.

✓ I just need to turn on my phone and check the information if I really need it.

“information” 是不可数名词，代词应为单数 “it” 而不是复数 “them”。此外条件句词序无误。建议注意不可数名词的代词指代。

× So I guess that's all that's that is a reason why I became less.

✓ So I guess that's one of the reasons why I became worse at remembering.

原句重复且结构不清（“that's all that's that is” 很混乱），“became less” 不完整，应说明“记忆能力变差”，因此改为 “became worse at remembering”。建议使用清晰的原因表述结构：one of the reasons why + 从句。

× MMM. I rely on my phone to store information and set reminders.

✓ Mmm. I rely on my phone to store information and to set reminders.

原句语法基本正确，但为了平衡并列不定式可在第二个动词前加 to（可选）。主要无错误，仅稍作风格调整。建议保持并列不定式的平衡。

× For example, I use a digital calendar for appointments and a notes app for recording things I needed.

✓ For example, I use a digital calendar for appointments and a notes app for recording things I need.

前半句用一般现在时谈习惯（I use），因此后半句也应使用现在时（I need），而不是过去时 “needed”。建议时态一致，描述习惯性行为用一般现在时。

× That's very convenient and easy for me.

✓ That's very convenient and easy for me.

此句时态与表达均正确，无需修改。保持一般现在时描述现在感觉是合适的。