记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 在回答时要更自然、简洁并使用正确表达，避免重复和语法错误。先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用一到两句具体细节支撑，使用连接词如“however”或“but”要放在恰当位置。注意搭配，例如说“good at memorising”而不是“good at memory things”。

範例: Not really. I'm not good at memorising long lists or sentences, although I can remember deadlines and some vocabulary. However, I can easily memorise skills in video games, because I practise them repeatedly.

建議: 回答要更流畅并注意时态和词汇搭配。先用一句简洁的主题句承认是否有过此类经历，然后用具体细节说明原因和结果，避免重复口头语和断断续续。使用正确短语如 “forget my best friend's birthday” 和 “make it up to him”。

範例: Yes, it happened once. I forgot my best friend's birthday because I had a heavy study load that week. However, I apologised and made it up to him by taking him out to dinner.

建議: 回答应更清晰、有条理，先给主题句再列举具体事项。避免语法和词序错误，如“remember to do my homework”或“complete my assignments on time”。使用连接词（for example, also）使句子流畅。

範例: As a student, I need to remember to do my homework and complete my assignments on time. I also keep track of campus events, such as sports activities and club meetings.

建議: 回答要更准确并减少犹豫词。先陈述主要方法，然后提供具体细节和例子。使用合适表达如 “take notes on my phone” 和 “set reminders” 来丰富内容。避免错误短语如 “I don't pray forget it”。

範例: If something is really important, I usually remember it naturally. For other things, I take notes on my phone and set reminders so I can check them every day and avoid forgetting.

× Not really. I'm not very good at memory things.

✓ Not really. I'm not very good at remembering things.

原句中使用了名词短语“memory things”，不符合英语习惯。应使用动名词“remembering”作为介词短语“good at”的宾语，表示擅长记住某事。建议使用“good at remembering things”。

× Uh, just like I can remember the deadline of homework or some words, but I can't uh, remember the long list or some sentence.

✓ For example, I can remember homework deadlines or some words, but I can't remember long lists or sentences.

原句存在表达不自然和名词单复数错误：应使用复数“deadlines”和“lists/sentences”。此外，句首的口语填充词应删减，使句子更规范。动名词形式“remember”在此为普通动词，保持不变。建议将单数改为复数并整理语序。

× But however I can memorize the just like the skill in the game.

✓ However, I can memorize skills in a game.

“But however”重复连接词，冗余；“the just like the skill”不符合英语搭配，应简化为“memorize skills”或“memorize a skill”。将“in the game”改为“in a game”或“in games”。建议去掉冗余连接词并调整名词短语。

× No, not really, but I, it happened once or twice.

✓ No, not really, but it happened once or twice.

原句中多余的代词“I”导致句子结构混乱。主语与谓语需一致，此处应为“It happened”。建议删除多余的“I”。

× For example, I once worked my best friend's birthday.

✓ For example, I once forgot my best friend's birthday.

原句用动词“worked”不符合语义，应该使用“forgot”来表达“忘记”。且需要过去式“forgot”。建议根据语境选择正确的动词。

× Yeah, it's important for me, uh, because it just because it's, uh, ha.

✓ Yeah, it was important to me, but I just couldn't remember because I was very busy.

原句有混乱重复“because it just because it's”，且时态应为过去（forgot birthday），需要用过去时态和清晰的因果连接词。建议把因果关系用“because”清楚表达并使用过去时。

× I have a heavy, uh, study work in that week, uh, so.

✓ I had a heavy study workload that week.

“study work”不地道，应使用“study workload”或“a lot of schoolwork”。时态应为过去“had”。同时“in that week”应改为“that week”。建议使用更自然的名词搭配并统一过去时。

× But after that I make it up and have a apologize to him and have a dinner with.

✓ But after that I made it up, apologized to him and had dinner with him.

句中时态须统一为过去时：“make it up”应为“made it up”，“have a apologize”语法错误，应为“apologized to him”，“have a dinner with”缺少宾语，应为“had dinner with him”。建议统一为过去式并使用正确动词短语和宾语。

× Uh, I'm a student, so the most important thing I need to remember is uh did not have my homework.

✓ I'm a student, so the most important thing I need to remember is not to miss my homework.

原句“is did not have my homework”时态和结构错误。应使用不定式“not to miss my homework”或“to remember to do my homework”。建议用不定式表达需要记住的事项。

× I need to uh, complete uh, finish the IT and do well in uh in time.

✓ I need to complete and submit my assignments on time.

原句“complete finish the IT”混用多余动词并且“IT”可能指“assignments”或“an assignment”，表达不清。应使用“complete and submit my assignments on time”。建议明确名词并简化动词短语。

× And also I need to re remember some uh activities in campus uh, like the sports activity.

✓ I also need to remember campus activities, like sports events.

“re remember”是重复错误，应为“remember”；“activities in campus”应为“campus activities”或“activities on campus”；“the sports activity”更自然为“sports events”。建议删除重复词并调整名词顺序和单复数。

× Uh, I feel like if something is really important for me, so I will remember and don't forget it, but other things, uh, where I will, uh, take notes on my phone so I can check every day and don't, so I don't pray, uh, forget it.

✓ If something is really important to me, I will remember it and not forget it. For other things, I take notes on my phone so I can check them every day and not forget.

原句时态和从句结构混乱，存在多余词“so”，“where I will”不正确。应使用“important to me”而不是“for me”；否定形式应为“not forget it”。最后的“pray”显然是口误，应删除。建议拆成两句，使用正确的连接词并保持时态一致。