记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity, grammar and organization. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, use correct verb forms and a clear reason. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

範例: Not really. I often forget small things in daily life, so I usually write reminders on my phone. For example, I put notes about shopping and appointments to avoid missing them.

建議: Be specific and coherent. State the important thing you forgot, give a brief reason or consequence, and avoid repetition and hesitations. Use one or two supporting details linked with words like “for example” or “because”.

範例: Yes, I once forgot to book an important dentist appointment. Because I assumed I had already booked it, I missed the first available slot and had to wait two weeks for the next one.

建議: Answer directly and use precise vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence listing key daily items, then add a brief example using a linking word such as “for example” or “such as”. Avoid filler and short incomplete sentences.

範例: I need to remember tasks like work deadlines, appointments and grocery lists. For example, I set reminders on my phone for meetings and shopping so I don’t forget urgent chores.

建議: Provide a clear method and a short explanation. Start with a direct statement of your strategy, then add one supporting detail or benefit. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I store important things on my smartphone because…”).

範例: I usually store important information on my smartphone because it notifies me at the right time. For instance, I use calendar alerts for bills and appointments so I don’t miss them.

× Not really, I quite listen forgot things.

✓ Not really, I quite often forget things I hear.

The original has incorrect word order and mixed tense forms. 'Quite' should modify an adverb like 'often'; 'listen forgot' is ungrammatical. Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions and place adverb before the main verb: 'quite often forget'. Also specify 'things I hear' to clarify meaning.

× I usually forgot uh listen thing in daily life.

✓ I usually forget things I hear in daily life.

The sentence uses past tense 'forgot' but describes a habitual action, so present simple 'forget' is required. 'listen thing' is incorrect; use 'things I hear'. 'Usually' indicates a repeated action, so use present simple.

× Uh, but I usually note in my phone for only my my what do?

✓ But I usually note them on my phone so I don't forget.

The original is fragmented and unclear. Use a complete clause: 'note them on my phone' (correct preposition 'on' for devices) and add purpose 'so I don't forget'. Remove filler and duplicate words.

× Yes, I have uh, I remember something I forgot about uh, book appointment for high end Cayenne, uh, is very is very.

✓ Yes, I have. I remember forgetting to book an appointment for a high-end Cayenne; it was very important.

Original mixes present perfect 'I have' with unclear clauses and repeats. Use 'I remember forgetting' to combine memory of a past action. 'Book appointment' needs article 'an appointment' and 'high-end Cayenne' uses hyphenated adjective and capitalization. Clarify 'it was very important' rather than repeated fragments.

× Well, in daily life I usually, uh, north in my phone to remind what I should do in the day. I usually.

✓ Well, in daily life I usually note things on my phone to remind me what I should do during the day.

Several issues: 'north' is incorrect word (should be 'note'); use plural 'things' and preposition 'on my phone'. 'Remind me' uses correct pronoun and infinitive structure. 'During the day' is more natural than 'in the day' here.

× MMM uh, I usually N important things in my smartphone because it's the my me too.

✓ I usually note important things in my smartphone because it helps me too.

Original contains fragments and wrong words: 'N' should be 'note', 'it's the my me too' is ungrammatical. Use clear clause 'because it helps me too'. Use 'in/on my smartphone' — 'in' or 'on' both possible; 'on' is more common.