记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然并注意时态和单复数。先直接回应问题，再用一到两句具体细节支持。避免多余词句和语法错误，例如 information 不可数，过去时与现在时要一致。可以用连接词（e.g., because, so）让逻辑更清楚。

範例: Yes, I am quite good at memorising things. When I was in high school I could remember facts from textbooks easily, so I often got good marks on exams.

建議: 回答应直接说是否忘记过重要事情，并给出具体例子。注意表达清晰、避免重复（memories 重复使用），语法要简洁。用连接词（however, but）来衔接对比。

範例: Yes, I have forgotten important things before. For example, I once missed a dentist appointment because I forgot the date, but I usually remember the most meaningful events.

建議: 回答要更有条理并减少口头语（uh）。先给主题句，然后列出一到两项具体内容，并说明方法（e.g., list, reminders）。注意句子结构和时态一致。

範例: I need to remember daily tasks such as work deadlines and appointments. To keep track I make a to-do list every evening for today and tomorrow.

建議: 回答要清楚说明方法並给出具体步骤或例子。纠正词语拼写（write, diary）和语法（past/future）。避免不完整句子和重复。可以提到具体工具（apps, calendar）来丰富内容。

範例: I usually write important things in a diary or set reminders on my phone. My mother taught me to write down important dates, so I still use a calendar app to avoid forgetting.

× Yes, I am good at memorizing things when I was a student in high school.

✓ Yes, I was good at memorizing things when I was a student in high school.

句中时间状语为“when I was a student in high school”（表示过去），主句却使用现在时态“am good”，时态不一致。应使用过去时“was”。建议：遇到表示过去的时间词时（如 when I was... / last year / in 2010），主句也要用过去时。

× I can always remember the informations in the book and I can get good marks at the exams.

✓ I could always remember the information in the books and I could get good marks in the exams.

“informations”错误——information 為不可數名詞不加-s；“in the book”若指一般多本書，應用複數“books”；句前已改為過去時，應將 can → could；介詞搭配應為 get good marks in exams（或 in the exams）。建議：不可數名詞不用複數形式；根據語境調整時態和介詞。

× In my opinions, in our lives we always have many important memories.

✓ In my opinion, in our lives we always have many important memories.

“opinions”此處為習慣用法固定短語“In my opinion”單數，使用複數不正確。建議：記住常用表達的固定搭配，如 In my opinion（單數）。

× We can't remember all the memories, so I think I've forgotten some things important memories, but I truly remember the deep things important for me.

✓ We can't remember all the memories, so I think I've forgotten some important ones, but I truly remember the things that are deeply important to me.

原句結構混亂，重複使用“things important memories”不合語法；需用代詞“ones”替代前文名詞，並用關係從句或形容詞短語修飾“things”；“deep things important for me”語序和搭配不當，改為“things that are deeply important to me”。建議：避免名詞重複，用代詞和正確的修飾結構。

× I need to remember something I need to do and some things I, uh, in orders to do when I, uh, when I was sleeping, I always make a list that the today's, tomorrow's I need to do.

✓ I need to remember things I need to do, and to help with that, when I was sleeping I always made a list of what I needed to do today and tomorrow.

原句時態混亂：開頭用現在時描述一般需要，但後半又提到過去習慣“when I was sleeping”，因此需把表示過去習慣的部分改為過去時“made/needed”。另外“in orders to do”錯誤，應為“in order to”或直接用不定式；“the today's, tomorrow's”表達不自然，改為“what I needed to do today and tomorrow”。建議：同一句話若同時包含現在和過去情況，分清主句時態並重組句子，使時間點一致。

× I used to rice Diaries when I was a kid.

✓ I used to write diaries when I was a kid.

動詞“rice”顯然拼寫錯誤，應為“write”；此處“used to”後接動詞原形，不是動名詞。建議：注意單詞拼寫並記住“used to + 動詞原形”表過去常態。

× My mom tell me that something important you need to write down and as a Diaries.

✓ My mom told me that if something is important, you need to write it down in a diary.

多處問題：動詞時態與主句一致應為過去“told”；句子主語和從句結構不清，“something important you need to write down”需被動或完整表達為“if something is important, you need to write it down”；“as a Diaries”錯誤，應為“in a diary”（單數，diary 為可數名詞）。建議：使用正確時態，保證從句語序完整，並用正確單數/複數形式和介詞。

× The hobbies that I the hobbies that I always keep it and until the day.

✓ The hobbies that I always kept stayed with me until that day.

原句語序混亂且重複“the hobbies that I”；“keep it and until the day”不合語法。建議重組為清晰的主謂結構，例如“The hobbies that I always kept stayed with me until that day.”或更自然的表達。