记忆— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and word choice, then give one specific supporting example. Use linking words such as "for example" or "so" and avoid redundancy. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I think I was quite good at memorising when I was a child. For example, teachers often asked us to learn paragraphs and I remembered them by visualising the shape of the characters, which helped me recite accurately. As a result, I rarely forgot what I had learned.

建議: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason and a specific example. Fix small grammar issues (e.g. "has always told me to double-check"; consistent tense). Use linking words like "because" and "so" appropriately.

範例: Hardly ever. My dad always told me to double-check important items before I leave, especially for long trips, so I make a short checklist and check it several times to make sure I haven't forgotten anything.

建議: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence, then add two specific details. Fix run-on sentences and grammatical errors, and use linking words like "for example" or "also". Avoid vague endings and finish the thought.

範例: Mostly tasks related to my dog. For example, every morning I need to take him for a walk, so I always remember to bring his leash and plastic bags for cleaning up after him. I also need to feed him and check his water during the day.

建議: Begin with a direct topic sentence describing your main methods, then list 2–3 specific techniques with brief explanations and linking words. Correct grammar ("events", "I add important dates to my calendar"). Avoid trailing phrases.

範例: I use a few simple methods to remember important things. For example, I tell my partner and family to remind me about upcoming tasks, and I add important dates to my digital calendar with alerts a few days beforehand. This way I rarely miss important events.

× When I was a child, I believe I was, and some people may even commented that I had a graphic memory.

✓ When I was a child, I believe I was, and some people even commented that I had a photographic memory.

The phrase 'may even commented' incorrectly mixes modal 'may' with past tense verb form; use 'even commented' or 'may even have commented'. Also 'graphic memory' is not idiomatic; 'photographic memory' is correct. Suggestion: use 'some people even commented' or 'some people may even have commented'.

× For example, if the teacher asked me to recite a paragraph, what I did was simply remembering the shape of the characters, and I would recite a paragraph by recognizing the characters by shape.

✓ For example, if the teacher asked me to recite a paragraph, I would simply remember the shape of the characters, and I would recite the paragraph by recognizing the characters by their shape.

After 'did' the correct form is base verb not '-ing' when describing habit: 'what I did was remember', or better 'I would simply remember'. Also add possessive 'their shape' for clarity. Suggestion: use simple verb forms for habits and include 'the' for a specific paragraph.

× Hardly ever, because my dad has always told me to double check important things before you leave your home, especially when you leave home for a long vacation.

✓ Hardly ever, because my dad has always told me to double-check important things before you leave home, especially when you go away on a long vacation.

Mixing 'leave your home' and 'you' is slightly inconsistent; 'leave home' is more natural. Use 'go away on a long vacation' for clarity. Also hyphenate 'double-check'. Tense 'has always told' is fine; adjust surrounding verbs to natural present/future contexts.

× So every time I would make a short list of the things I need to carry with me and I would double check several times to make sure.

✓ So every time I make a short list of the things I need to carry with me, and I double-check several times to make sure.

Use simple present 'I make' and 'I double-check' to describe regular habits instead of conditional 'would'. Hyphenate 'double-check'. Add comma for sentence flow.

× The things I need to remember in my daily life are mostly related to my dog because I need to take care of him for the first thing I need to do after I get up every day is to take him on a walk.

✓ The things I need to remember in my daily life are mostly related to my dog, because the first thing I need to do after I get up every day is take him for a walk.

Original sentence is run-on and repeats ideas. Rearranged to make 'because' clause explain reason and to correct infinitive structure: 'is take him for a walk' (not 'is to take him on a walk'). Use 'take him for a walk' as idiomatic expression.

× And when I'm taking him on a walk I need to bring his leash and also plastic bags and after.

✓ When I take him for a walk, I need to bring his leash and plastic bags.

Use simple present 'take' for habitual action instead of 'I'm taking'. Remove trailing 'and after' which is incomplete. 'Bring his leash and plastic bags' is sufficient and idiomatic. Add comma after introductory clause.

× A trick that I always do is to share the message to everyone around me like my partner, my parents and my best friend and ask them to remind me when I need to bring something or remind me a few days before a special events.

✓ A trick I always use is to tell everyone around me, like my partner, my parents, and my best friend, and ask them to remind me when I need to bring something or to remind me a few days before a special event.

'A trick that I always do' is awkward; 'A trick I always use' is natural. Use 'tell' or 'share the message with' rather than 'share the message to'. Ensure parallel infinitives 'ask them to remind' and correct 'a special events' to singular 'a special event'.

× And also I would like to add important dates on my calendar and also.

✓ I also add important dates to my calendar.

Use simple present 'add' for habitual action instead of conditional 'would like to'. Use preposition 'to' with 'add to my calendar' and remove the trailing 'and also' which is redundant. Keep sentence concise for clarity.