零食— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然且结构清晰。开头直接回答问题，然后用一两句补充细节并用连接词衔接。注意时态和介词用法（如 "in the afternoon"），避免重复词和小语法错误。可以将周末和工作日的情况分成两句，并用连接词（e.g. "while" 或 "but"）使逻辑更连贯。

範例: I usually have snacks in the afternoon on weekdays, usually fruit or yogurt at my office. On weekends I don’t have time for snacks because I take my children to school and play with them, so I usually skip them.

建議: 回答要更明确（肯定或否定），并提供具体理由和连接词。避免不完整句和重复（如 "we we"）。可以说明你认为健康或不健康的原因，并给出例子或个人做法。

範例: I'm not sure, but generally snacking can be unhealthy if people choose high-calorie foods. For example, many snacks are sugary or fried, which can lead to weight gain, so I try to choose healthier options like nuts or fruit.

建議: 回答要用正确的时态（过去时），并稍作扩展说明原因或对比。避免重复词并使用连接词（e.g. "because" 或 "so"）。提供具体细节可以提高分数，比如说你常玩的活动或家里饮食习惯。

範例: No, I didn't. When I was a child I usually just had regular meals because I was busy playing with my friends, so I rarely stopped for snacks. My family also preferred mealtimes over snacking.

建議: 回答要直接并具体说明喜欢的零食种类、频率和原因。避免语法错误和不完整句。可以举例并用连接词说明不同形式（e.g. "such as"）。

範例: My favorite snack is dark chocolate; I eat it regularly because it's less sweet and rich in flavor. I also enjoy chocolate-flavored foods like chocolate milk or chocolate cookies sometimes.