名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答“是否容易”，再说明原因和做法。注意语法：用“remembering people's names”，而不是“memory others name”；“too flexible”不适合描述名字难记，可说“unfamiliar”或“difficult to pronounce”。减少填充词，并用一个具体做法补充答案。

範例: Not really. I sometimes find it hard to remember people's names, especially when they are unfamiliar or difficult to pronounce. I usually repeat a person's name when I meet them because I think remembering it shows respect.

建議: 回答中提到记下来是有效的，但“book it on my phone”和“say it all the time”表达不自然。可以说“save it in my phone”或“add it to my contacts”，并说明之后如何复习。减少重复的“uh”和“in order to”，让句子更简洁。

範例: I usually write a person's name down shortly after meeting them. If I need to remember it for later, I save it in my phone contacts. I also try to use the name in conversation, which helps it stick in my mind.

建議: 答案的情绪逻辑不清楚：题目问别人记不住你的名字，你却说开心，因为有人记得你的名字。先明确表达被忘记时的真实感受，再补充原因或例外情况。注意“exciting”应改为描述人的“excited”，但这里更适合“disappointed”或“a little hurt”。

範例: I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we have met several times. However, I understand that people meet many others and may not remember every name. I usually just remind them politely.

建議: 开头可以直接回答“Yes, quite often.”。注意名词复数和表达：用“people's names”以及“some names are difficult to remember”，不要说“not easy to remember it”。最后的“as far as I know”与意思不匹配，可以改成具体的记忆方法。

範例: Yes, quite often, especially when I meet several people at once. Some names are unfamiliar to me, so I sometimes struggle to remember them. I try to repeat each person's name during the conversation to help me remember it.

× Actually I'm not good at memory others name because some people's name is to uh flexible.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at remembering other people's names because some people's names are too, uh, flexible.

介词 at 后面通常接名词或动名词，因此这里应使用 remembering，而不是 memory。建议记住“be good at + 动名词”这一结构。

× Actually I'm not good at memory others name because some people's name is to uh flexible.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at remembering other people's names because some people's names are too, uh, flexible.

这里泛指多个人的名字，因此 name 应使用复数 names。建议检查名词所指的数量，并让名词形式与语义一致。

× Actually I'm not good at memory others name because some people's name is to uh flexible.

✓ Actually, I'm not good at remembering other people's names because some people's names are too, uh, flexible.

这里需要表示“太灵活”，应使用副词 too 修饰形容词 flexible；to 通常表示方向或不定式标记。注意区分 too 和 to。

× So it's hard for me to remember it.

✓ So it's hard for me to remember them.

it 指单数事物，而前文说的是多个人的名字，应使用复数代词 them。建议确保代词的单复数与它所指代的名词一致。

× Uh, sometimes I will write it down so I can remember it particularly, and other times I will, uh, book it on my phone so I can say it all the time, uh, in order to remember it.

✓ Uh, sometimes I will write them down so I can remember them particularly, and other times I will, uh, book them on my phone so I can say them all the time, uh, in order to remember them.

这里谈论的是多个人的名字，原句反复使用单数代词 it，应改为复数代词 them。建议先确认代词指代的对象，再匹配其单复数。

× Well, actually I will feel exciting and happy because my name is remembered by some people and even don't know.

✓ Well, actually I will feel excited and happy because my name is remembered by some people I don't even know.

exciting 通常形容“令人兴奋的事物”，描述人的感受时应使用 excited。建议区分 -ing 和 -ed 形容词：事物令人产生某种感受用 -ing，人的感受用 -ed。

× Well, actually I will feel exciting and happy because my name is remembered by some people and even don't know.

✓ Well, actually I will feel excited and happy because my name is remembered by some people I don't even know.

and even don't know 前缺少明确的主语，而且原句没有清楚表达“我不认识这些人”。可将其改为 people I don't even know，组成完整、清楚的定语从句。

× Actually yes, yes, I often forget people's name because some name is too difficult and not easy to remember it.

✓ Actually, yes, I often forget people's names because some names are too difficult and not easy to remember.

people's names 和 some names 都指多个名字，因此 name 应改为 names；相应地，谓语应使用 are。建议检查名词单复数及其对应的主谓形式。

× Actually yes, yes, I often forget people's name because some name is too difficult and not easy to remember it.

✓ Actually, yes, I often forget people's names because some names are too difficult and not easy to remember.

remember 后面的 it 与前面的复数 names 不一致，而且 names 已经是 remember 的宾语，不需要再用 it 重复指代。建议避免宾语重复，并让代词与其指代对象的数保持一致。

× So I will try to remember it and as far as I know.

✓ So I will try to remember them whenever I can.

原句中的 and as far as I know 没有与前面的内容形成完整、清楚的句子结构，而且 as far as I know 表示“据我所知”，不适合表达尽力记住名字。建议使用完整的从句或合适的时间表达，例如 whenever I can。