名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，也给出了具体的记忆方法和例子。注意名词单复数：泛指时应说“people's names”；“so I I”有重复。可以用“which helps me...”让后半句衔接更自然。

範例: Yes, I find it quite easy to remember people's names. I usually connect a name with someone's appearance or a distinctive feature. For example, if someone wears bright glasses, that visual detail helps me remember their name the next time I see them.

建議: 回答与前一题重复较多，且例句语法不完整。“people's name”应为“people's names”；“if a girl who has...”结构错误，“blink eyes”表达不清，“at the first sight”应改为“at first sight”或“when I see her again”。建议直接说明如何把外貌特征和名字联系起来，并给出清晰例子。

範例: I remember names by associating them with a person's appearance. For example, if I meet someone with striking blue eyes, I picture that feature whenever I try to recall her name. This visual connection usually makes the name easier to remember.

建議: 回答切题，理由和后续解释清楚，句子衔接也自然。可以进一步精简“have more opportunities to interact later”，并明确“names will come naturally”指对方之后会记住你的名字。

範例: I don't really mind if people forget my name. I think it can take time to remember someone, especially after just one meeting. If we see each other more often, they'll probably remember it naturally.

建議: 能表达出不熟悉的人更容易忘记，但语法和表达问题较多，影响理解。“those who are not really close with”缺少宾语，应说“people I'm not close to”；泛指别人时不要突然改用“your”；“cannot knew”应为“cannot get to know each other”。后半段重复且句子不完整，“necessity”在这里也不自然。建议用两三句简洁说明原因。

範例: Yes, I sometimes forget the names of people I'm not close to. If I've only met someone once or twice, I may not remember their name because we haven't had much time to get to know each other. However, I usually remember it after we've spoken a few times.

× I find it quite easy to remember people's name because I usually associate a name with a person's appearance or distinctive feature.

✓ I find it quite easy to remember people's names because I usually associate a name with a person's appearance or distinctive feature.

“people's”表示“人们的”，后面应接复数名词“names”。请注意名词所有格本身不表示单数，名词的单复数要根据含义判断。

× For example, if someone has bright glasses, I link the name to that visual cue so I I can recall it the next time I see them.

✓ For example, if someone has bright glasses, I link the name to that visual cue so I can recall it the next time I see them.

“I I”重复出现了主语，造成句子结构错误。保留一个“I”即可。

× As I mentioned before, I usually link people's name to their appearance.

✓ As I mentioned before, I usually link people's names to their appearance.

“people's”指“人们的”，因此应使用复数“names”，而不是单数“name”。

× For example, if a girl who has blink eyes and I will come up with their name when I see her at the first sight.

✓ For example, if a girl has bright eyes, I can recall her name when I see her for the first time.

原句的“if”从句和主句结构混杂：“if a girl who has...”后又接“I will...”，导致句子不完整且结构不通顺。可用“If + 主语 + 动词，主语 + can + 动词”的结构表达。

× For example, if a girl who has blink eyes and I will come up with their name when I see her at the first sight.

✓ For example, if a girl has bright eyes, I can recall her name when I see her for the first time.

前文的“a girl”和后文的“her”都是单数女性指代，因此不应使用复数或性别中性的“their”。代词应与所指对象保持一致，使用“her”。

× For example, if a girl who has blink eyes and I will come up with their name when I see her at the first sight.

✓ For example, if a girl has bright eyes, I can recall her name when I see her for the first time.

这里表达“第一次见到她”时，常用“for the first time”，不说“at the first sight”。请记住这个固定表达。

× For those who are not really close with, I would say I usually forget your name because without deeper interaction we cannot knew each other so well.

✓ For people I'm not really close to, I would say I usually forget their names because without deeper interaction we cannot know each other so well.

表示“与某人关系亲近”时，固定搭配是“be close to someone”，所以此处应使用“to”，而不是“with”。

× For those who are not really close with, I would say I usually forget your name because without deeper interaction we cannot knew each other so well.

✓ For people I'm not really close to, I would say I usually forget their names because without deeper interaction we cannot know each other so well.

句子以“I”表达自己的习惯，却突然使用“your name”指称他人的名字，导致人称不一致。泛指这些人时，可以用“their names”。

× For those who are not really close with, I would say I usually forget your name because without deeper interaction we cannot knew each other so well.

✓ For people I'm not really close to, I would say I usually forget their names because without deeper interaction we cannot know each other so well.

情态动词“cannot”后应接动词原形。原句用了过去式“knew”，应改为“know”。

× But yes, I think if we don't know each other so. Then I don't have the necessity to remember your name.

✓ But yes, I think that if we don't know each other well, then I don't need to remember your name.

“if we don't know each other so”没有表达完整，句末的“so”也不能单独表示“很熟”。此外，“Then”引出的部分与前面的条件句被不恰当地拆开。可以把条件和结果放在同一个完整句子中，并用“well”表达“了解得很深”。