名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，并使用正确的冠词和名词复数，例如“have a hard time”和“people’s names”。“contact them with their names”表达不自然，可改为“match their names to their faces”。可以补充一个简短原因或例子，使回答更具体。

範例: No, I usually have a hard time remembering people's names. I can remember their faces and personalities quite easily, but I often struggle to match a name to a face, especially after meeting someone only once.

建議: 避免先说“不知道具体怎么记”，这会让回答显得不够清晰。具体说明一种记忆方法，例如重复对方的名字、将名字和外貌或特点联系起来。“look back and forth between their names and themselves”不自然；注意使用清晰的动词和连接词。

範例: I usually repeat the person's name in my head a few times after we meet. If I can connect it with something distinctive about them, like their hairstyle or job, it's much easier to remember.

建議: 回答的想法清楚，但开头的“It depends when”不自然，可用“It depends on the situation”。“feel kind of hurt”应改为“feel a little hurt”。用“whereas”或“but”清楚地对比两种情况，并保持条件表达一致。

範例: It depends on the situation. If I remember someone's name but they forget mine, I feel a little hurt because it seems as if they didn't pay attention. But if I can't remember their name either, I don't mind.

建議: 回答与前面“通常很难记住别人的名字”存在矛盾，建议保持观点一致，或明确说明自己其实不常忘记名字。“it's just me good”语法错误，应说“I'm just good”。可以补充一个具体原因，让回答更可信。

範例: Yes, I do, especially when I meet several people at the same time. I usually remember their faces, but I sometimes forget their names unless I repeat them or use them in conversation.

× No, actually I usually have hard time remembering people's name.

✓ No, actually I usually have a hard time remembering people's names.

固定表达是“have a hard time doing something”，其中“hard time”前需要加不定冠词“a”。建议记住“have a hard time + 动名词”这一结构。

× No, actually I usually have hard time remembering people's name.

✓ No, actually I usually have a hard time remembering people's names.

这里泛指记不住不同人的名字，因此“name”应使用复数“names”。注意“people's”表示“人们的”，后面的名词可以根据表达的意思使用复数。

× It depends when I remember their names but they don't remember mine.

✓ It depends on whether I remember their names but they don't remember mine.

表达“取决于是否……”时，通常使用“depend on whether”。原句缺少介词“on”。建议记住“depend on + 名词/疑问词从句”的搭配。

× It would feel kind of hurt, but if I don't remember their names either it's OK for me.

✓ I would feel kind of hurt, but if I don't remember their names either, it's OK for me.

这里表达的是“我会感到有点受伤”，感受者是“I”，所以应使用“I would feel”，而不是“It would feel”。建议检查句子的主语是否与所表达的动作或感受者一致。

× Maybe that's because I haven't met enough people in my life, or it's just me good at remembering names.

✓ Maybe that's because I haven't met enough people in my life, or maybe I'm just good at remembering names.

“it's just me good at”缺少正确的谓语结构，不能用“it's + me + good at”来表达“我很擅长”。应改为“I'm good at”。建议表达个人能力时使用“be good at + 名词/动名词”。