名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答，再用清晰、自然的表达解释原因。注意说“have difficulty remembering”，而不是“have difficulty in remembering”；“connect to the experience with the name”意思不清，可改为“match a face to a name”。结尾的“know them better complete”不自然，可以说明需要多见几次才能记住名字。避免重复使用“But”。

範例: No, I’m not very good at remembering names, although I can usually remember people’s faces. I sometimes find it difficult to match a name to a face when I first meet someone. After talking to them a few times, though, their name usually sticks.

建議: 回答切题，也提到了两种记忆方法，但有语法和用词问题：“by associate associating”应改为“by associating”，“oftenly”应改为“often”。“remember their names”和“recall their names”重复，可以精简，并补充一个具体做法，例如把名字和某个明显特征联系起来。

範例: I usually remember names by connecting them with something distinctive about the person, such as their hairstyle or voice. I also try to use their name naturally during our conversation. Repeating it helps me remember it later.

建議: 观点明确，也对刚认识和相处较久的情况做了区分。表达时需要删去口误“if we are going if we're”，并使用“other people's names”或“others' names”。“insultive”不是自然用法，可说“insulting”；“unpolite”应改为“impolite”。可以简洁说明这种情况让你感觉不受重视。

範例: If we’ve only just met, I don’t mind because it takes time to learn someone’s name. However, if we’ve known each other for a long time and they still forget it, I might feel a little hurt. It could make me feel that they haven’t paid much attention to me.

建議: 回答中有一个逻辑矛盾：先说很难记住名字，随后又说从不忘记。可说明自己刚认识别人时容易忘名字，但熟悉后通常记得住。“difficulty remember”应改为“difficulty remembering”；“I don't have a time or chance to forget it”不自然，建议删去。例子应更具体地证明记忆力，而不是只说记得朋友的名字。

範例: I sometimes forget the names of people I’ve just met, but I rarely forget the names of people I know well. Seeing my friends regularly helps me remember them. For example, I still remember the names of classmates I haven’t seen for several years.

× But it is hard to connect to the the experience with the name.

✓ But it is hard to connect the experience with the name.

名词 experience 前重复使用了定冠词 the。删去一个 the 即可。

× So when I first meet someone it may take some time to know them better complete.

✓ So when I first meet someone, it may take some time to get to know them better.

better 在这里作副词，修饰 know；complete 放在句末不能自然地修饰 know。可以说 get to know someone better，表示“更了解某人”。

× I remember people's names by associate associating their appearance with their name.

✓ I remember people's names by associating their appearance with their name.

介词 by 后面接动词时，动词通常使用 -ing 形式。这里应使用 associating；associate 是说话时的重复或自我修正，应删去。

× This way I find that I can remember their names quickly and I can recall their names when meeting these people. Also, I will try to use their names in conversations oftenly so that I can remember.

✓ This way I find that I can remember their names quickly and I can recall their names when meeting these people. Also, I will try to use their names in conversations often so that I can remember.

often 本身就是副词，不需要加 -ly。应使用 often，而不是 oftenly。

× If we just met then I feel that it is normal because everyone takes time to remember others names.

✓ If we just met, then I feel that it is normal because everyone takes time to remember other people's names.

others 是代词，不能直接放在 names 前表示“其他人的名字”。这里可改为 other people's names，其中 other people 表示“其他人”，people's 表示所属关系。

× But if we are going if we're hanging out for a long time and the person still doesn't remember my name, I think this is a bit insultive or unpolite.

✓ But if we're hanging out for a long time and the person still doesn't remember my name, I think this is a bit insulting or impolite.

insultive 不是这里合适的标准形容词，应使用 insulting，表示“令人觉得受侮辱的”；“不礼貌的”通常说 impolite，而不是 unpolite。are going 是口语中的未完成表达，应删去。

× No, although I have difficulty remember people's names, I don't forget their names.

✓ No, although I have difficulty remembering people's names, I don't forget their names.

difficulty 后面接动词时，动词应使用 -ing 形式。因此 remember 要改为 remembering。

× Maybe it's because I see all the people I know nearly every day so that I don't have a time or chance to forget it.

✓ Maybe it's because I see all the people I know nearly every day, so I don't have time or a chance to forget them.

time 在表示“有时间做某事”时通常作不可数名词，不加 a；chance 是可数名词，单数形式前需要加 a。

× Maybe it's because I see all the people I know nearly every day so that I don't have a time or chance to forget it.

✓ Maybe it's because I see all the people I know nearly every day, so I don't have time or a chance to forget them.

it 是单数代词，但这里指代前文复数的 people's names。应使用复数代词 them。