名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời chưa thể hiện rõ bạn nhớ tên người khác dễ hay khó; “Yet” cũng không phù hợp để mở đầu câu. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng “Yes” hoặc “No”, sau đó nêu một lý do và ví dụ ngắn. Sửa các cụm như “name is no one of the important feature” thành cách diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn, chẳng hạn “names aren’t the first thing I notice”.

範例: Not really. I often forget people's names because I tend to focus more on their faces and personalities. For example, I sometimes have to ask a friend to remind me of someone's name.

建議: Hãy bắt đầu bằng cách nêu rõ phương pháp bạn thường dùng, ví dụ “I usually repeat the name”. Sửa “a lot of way” thành “many ways” và dùng đúng cấu trúc “I usually talk”, không phải “I usually talking”. Câu cuối đang lặp lại ý trước; thay bằng một chi tiết cụ thể, chẳng hạn liên hệ tên với khuôn mặt hoặc nhắc lại tên khi trò chuyện.

範例: I usually repeat a person's name shortly after meeting them. I also try to connect the name with their face or something memorable about them. For instance, I might use their name when I say goodbye.

建議: Bạn đã nêu cảm xúc và cố gắng đưa ví dụ, nhưng phần giải thích về “special feature” chưa rõ và có nhiều từ ngập ngừng, lặp ý. Hãy dùng cấu trúc đơn giản như “I feel hurt because…” rồi kể ngắn gọn một tình huống cụ thể. Chú ý chia động từ: “I met” và “I was very sad”.

範例: I feel a little hurt when someone can't remember my name, because it makes me wonder whether I made a good impression. Once, a friend I had met before forgot my name, and I felt quite awkward. However, I understand that people sometimes forget names.

建議: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng các ý sau chưa rõ nghĩa, đặc biệt là “during four week study”. Hãy giải thích cụ thể bạn thường nhớ tên trong khoảng thời gian nào và sửa ngữ pháp: “names are”, “my classmates' names” và “four weeks”. Câu cuối nên liên kết rõ với câu trả lời, thay vì chuyển chủ đề sang mong muốn kết bạn.

範例: No, not very often. I usually remember my classmates' names after studying with them for a few weeks. I find it easier when I talk to them regularly and use their names in conversation.

× Yet it is because name is no one of the important feature of someone.

✓ Yes, it is, because a name is one of the important features of a person.

Use the plural noun features after one of the. Also, use a before the singular countable noun name. Suggestion: after one of the, use a plural noun.

× For example, I have no and remember my friend name.

✓ For example, I have no trouble remembering my friend's name.

The phrase have no trouble is followed by a gerund, so remember changes to remembering. Suggestion: use have no trouble + verb-ing.

× They have a lot of way to remember people names from me.

✓ There are a lot of ways for me to remember people's names.

The corrected sentence uses there are to introduce the plural noun phrase a lot of ways. Suggestion: use there are with plural nouns and there is with singular nouns.

× I usually talking with my friend and read their name to remember the name.

✓ I usually talk with my friends and read their names to remember them.

Usually describes a habitual action, so use the simple present talk, not talking. Suggestion: use the simple present for routines and repeated actions.

× For example I usually talking with talk with my friend to remember their names.

✓ For example, I usually talk with my friends to remember their names.

Use the simple present talk after usually to describe a habit. The repeated phrase talk with is also removed. Suggestion: use usually + base verb for habitual actions.

× It will be sad when, uh, someone can't remember my name because I think that myself don't have enough special feature to, uh, give to someone a special memories.

✓ It will make me sad when someone can't remember my name because I think that I don't have enough special features to give someone special memories.

Myself cannot replace the subject pronoun I in this clause. Use I as the subject of don't have. Suggestion: use a reflexive pronoun only when the subject and object refer to the same person or for emphasis.

× It will be sad when, uh, someone can't remember my name because I think that myself don't have enough special feature to, uh, give to someone a special memories.

✓ It will make me sad when someone can't remember my name because I think that I don't have enough special features to give someone special memories.

Special features is plural after enough, and memories cannot be used with the singular article a. Suggestion: check that articles and quantifiers agree with whether a noun is singular or plural.

× Some, uh, for instance, uh, one time I meet my friend and they and they can't remember my name.

✓ For instance, one time I met my friend, and they couldn't remember my name.

One time refers to a completed past event, so use the past forms met and couldn't. Suggestion: use the past tense when describing a finished event.

× I very sad.

✓ I was very sad.

The sentence has no main verb. Add was to link the subject I with the adjective sad. Suggestion: include a form of be before an adjective when describing a state.

× No, not really because name is something that very special and great feeling for me.

✓ No, not really, because a name is something very special to me and gives me a great feeling.

The clause that very special is missing a verb. The correction also gives the second idea a verb, gives. Suggestion: check that every clause has a subject and a verb.

× No, not really because name is something that very special and great feeling for me.

✓ No, not really, because a name is something very special to me and gives me a great feeling.

Name and feeling are singular countable nouns here, so they need the article a. Suggestion: use a or an before a singular countable noun when it is not specific.

× I can recall my classmates name only during four week study.

✓ I can recall my classmates' names after only four weeks of study.

Classmates and weeks refer to more than one, so they need plural forms. Names should also be plural to refer to the names of multiple classmates. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to more than one person, item, or period.

× I can recall my classmates name only during four week study.

✓ I can recall my classmates' names after only four weeks of study.

After is the appropriate preposition for saying that the names became recallable once four weeks had passed. Suggestion: use after + a time period to describe something that happens when that period has elapsed.