名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接，且用“认得脸却对不上名字”补充了具体困难，内容相关。注意表达自然度：“have a very funny pronunciation”不够地道，可改为“sound unusual”；“not quite simple”建议用“not very easy”。后半句可适当简化，避免重复出现“remember”和“faces”。

範例: Not always. I can usually remember names that sound unusual, but I often recognize someone's face without being able to recall their name.

建議: 你提供了“把外貌和名字编成小故事”的具体记忆方法，这是回答的亮点。注意语法和搭配：“make a story including their appearance with their names”可改为“make up a story that links their name to their appearance”；“schemes”在这里不自然，可用“techniques”或“tricks”；“like make up”应改为“like making up”。后两句意思重复，可以合并。

範例: I try to link a person's name to something distinctive about their appearance. For example, if someone called Rose wears a red jacket, I might make up a little story about a rose in a red garden. That kind of association helps the name stick in my mind.

建議: 你明确表达了“我不介意”，并解释了原因，基本回应了问题。不过，“a tag a sound”和“the way who I am”不自然；“name is just a representative”也没有准确表达你的意思。建议用“a name is just a label”说明名字只是称呼，并减少重复，让理由更清楚。

範例: I don't really mind if someone forgets my name. A name is just a label, and I care more about whether people understand and respect me as a person. Of course, it’s nice when they remember it, but it’s not a big deal.

建議: “on the tip of my tongue”用得恰当，也解释了忘记名字时的感受和原因。注意避免语法错误和不自然搭配：“I just all of a sudden my mind goes blank”可改为“my mind suddenly goes blank”；“speak out their names”建议用“say their names”；“it's just only”重复，且“they don't treat them seriously”指代不清。可用更简洁的表达说明别人可能觉得你不够在意他们。

範例: Yes, occasionally. A name will be on the tip of my tongue, but then my mind suddenly goes blank. I feel a little embarrassed because the other person might think I haven't been paying attention, even though I simply have a poor memory for names.

× It's difficult to memorize all people's names, especially if you are in a new environment, so it does require some certain schemes like make up a story to help.

✓ It's difficult to memorize all people's names, especially if you are in a new environment, so it does require some certain schemes, like making up a story to help.

这里的 like 表示“例如”，后面应接名词或动名词，因此 make 应改为 making。可以记住：like 后举例说明某种做法时，通常使用动名词形式，如 like making up a story。

× I think it's okay because name is just a tag a sound for others to call me as long as they know what kind of person I am, my personality or the way who I am. I think that's enough. Name is just a representative.

✓ I think it's okay because a name is just a tag, a sound for others to call me. As long as they know what kind of person I am—my personality or the way I am—I think that's enough. A name is just a representative.

name 和 representative 在这里都是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。泛指名字时用 a name；泛指某个代表物时用 a representative。

× I think it's okay because name is just a tag a sound for others to call me as long as they know what kind of person I am, my personality or the way who I am. I think that's enough. Name is just a representative.

✓ I think it's okay because a name is just a tag, a sound for others to call me. As long as they know what kind of person I am—my personality or the way I am—I think that's enough. A name is just a representative.

the way 后面应接完整的主谓结构，表达“我的样子／我的为人”时说 the way I am。who 用于指人，不能放在这里代替主语 I。

× Yes, sometimes I feel like their name is on the tip of my tongue but I just all of a sudden my mind goes blank and cannot recall their names.

✓ Yes, sometimes I feel like their name is on the tip of my tongue, but all of a sudden my mind goes blank and I cannot recall their names.

原句中 I just 和 my mind goes blank 形成了不恰当的主语衔接。可以直接以 my mind 为主语，说 my mind goes blank；后面的并列动作则补出主语 I，即 I cannot recall their names。

× This time I would feel a little bit embarrassed because if you cannot speak out their names, people will think they don't treat them seriously but it's just only because my poor memory.

✓ I would feel a little bit embarrassed because if I cannot say their names, people will think I don't take them seriously, but that's only because of my poor memory.

原句先用 I 描述自己的感受，随后突然改用 you 指代同一个人，造成代词指代不一致。这里应统一使用 I。表达别人会认为“我不认真对待他们”时，也应使用 I don't take them seriously。

× This time I would feel a little bit embarrassed because if you cannot speak out their names, people will think they don't treat them seriously but it's just only because my poor memory.

✓ I would feel a little bit embarrassed because if I cannot say their names, people will think I don't take them seriously, but that's only because of my poor memory.

because 后面通常接从句；如果后面接名词短语 my poor memory，应使用 because of。因此应说 because of my poor memory。