名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 先直接回答问题，再给出清楚、合理的原因。“a complicated combination of the dangerous names”表达不自然，也不清楚你想说什么；可以说明名字较多或初次见面时信息太多，所以难以记住。注意使用自然的搭配，例如“have trouble remembering names”。

範例: No, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names. When I meet several people at once, I often forget their names because there’s a lot of new information to take in.

建議: 回答时直接说明你使用的记忆方法。避免重复“remember people's names”，并注意代词一致：people's names对应“their names”，而不是“its names”。“with its first impressions”和“have connections”不自然；可以说把名字与对方的外貌、特点或初次见面的情景联系起来，并用“because”解释原因。

範例: I try to connect a person’s name with my first impression of them. For example, I might remember someone’s name by linking it to their appearance or something we talked about when we first met.

建議: 注意准确回应题目：题目问别人“记不起”你的名字时的感受，但你的回答主要说的是别人记得你的名字时你会开心。可以先表达被忘记名字时的感受，再补充如果对方记得你的名字会有什么感觉。避免重复和不自然的表达，例如“that's real that's me happy”和“memorize my details”；这里用“remember my name”更合适。

範例: I feel a little disappointed when someone can’t remember my name, especially if we’ve met a few times. However, I don’t take it personally, because people meet many others and can easily forget names.

建議: 先直接回答“often”或“not very often”，并保持一般现在时：习惯性的情况应使用“forget”，而不是“forgot”。后半句重复了多次“remember people's names”，可以简化；同时解释一个具体原因，例如名字没有和谈话内容或见面情景联系起来。用“so”连接原因和结果会更自然。

範例: Yes, I do, especially when I meet a lot of new people in a short time. I often forget a name if I can’t connect it with the person or something we talked about.

× No, I can't remember people's names easily because there are such a complicated combination of the dangerous names I have seen.

✓ No, I can't remember people's names easily because there is such a complicated combination of the dangerous names I have seen.

There be句型中，be动词要与后面的主语保持单复数一致。这里的主语中心词是单数名词“combination”，因此应使用“there is”，而不是“there are”。

× If I want to remember people's names, I would like to remember its names with its first impressions because this is the effective way to have connections.

✓ If I want to remember people's names, I would like to remember their names along with my first impressions of them because this is an effective way to have connections.

“people”是复数，不能用单数代词“its”指代；应使用“their”。另外，“first impressions”是说话者对他人的印象，因此用“my first impressions of them”表达更清楚。

× If I want to remember people's names, I would like to remember its names with its first impressions because this is the effective way to have connections.

✓ If I want to remember people's names, I would like to remember their names along with my first impressions of them because this is an effective way to have connections.

这里是在泛指一种有效的方法，并没有特指双方都知道的某一种方法，所以不应使用定冠词“the”。单数可数名词“way”前应使用不定冠词“an”。

× I feel so excited if people remember my name because that's real that's me happy because someone would like to memorize my details.

✓ I feel so excited when people remember my name because it really makes me happy that someone would like to remember details about me.

“that's real that's me happy”把多个词组直接连在一起，缺少清晰、完整的句子结构。可以改为“it really makes me happy that...”，用完整的主语和谓语表达“这让我很开心”。

× I often forgot people's names because I can't remember the names and the related events therefore I usually mess up remembering people's names.

✓ I often forget people's names because I can't remember the names and related events, and therefore I usually mess up remembering people's names.

句子描述的是经常发生的习惯，并且后面的“can't”和“usually mess up”都使用现在时，因此“forgot”应改为一般现在时“forget”。