名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời trực tiếp việc bạn có dễ nhớ tên người khác hay không. Bạn đang nhầm lẫn giữa tên của mình và việc ghi nhớ tên người khác, đồng thời cấu trúc câu và cách dùng động từ chưa rõ. Hãy bắt đầu bằng “No, it isn’t easy for me...” rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và thêm một chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh nối quá nhiều ý bằng “so” trong một câu.

範例: No, it isn’t easy for me to remember people’s names. I often forget them, especially when I meet several new people at the same time. However, I usually remember a name better if I repeat it during the conversation.

建議: Câu trả lời chưa trả lời đúng câu hỏi “Bạn nhớ tên mọi người bằng cách nào?”. Bạn nên nêu một phương pháp cụ thể, chẳng hạn như lặp lại tên, liên tưởng tên với khuôn mặt hoặc ghi chú vào điện thoại. Từ “pupil” không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này; hãy dùng “people” hoặc “names”. Ngoài ra, cần dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng như “I usually remember names by...”, và tránh các từ ngập ngừng hoặc cụm từ không hoàn chỉnh.

範例: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them during the conversation. I also try to associate each name with the person’s face or a memorable detail about them. If I still cannot remember a name, I write it down on my phone.

建議: Câu trả lời có cố gắng diễn đạt cảm xúc nhưng chưa có câu hoàn chỉnh và ý nghĩa còn khó hiểu. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp bằng một tính từ cảm xúc, ví dụ “I feel a little disappointed” hoặc “I don’t take it personally”. Sau đó, giải thích lý do và dùng từ nối như “because” hoặc “however” để làm câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Không cần lặp lại “worried” hoặc “but” nhiều lần.

範例: I feel a little disappointed when people cannot remember my name. However, I do not take it personally because remembering names can be difficult. I usually remind them politely and continue the conversation.

建議: Bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp “Absolutely yes”, nhưng phần giải thích còn sai từ vựng và ngữ pháp nên người nghe khó hiểu. “Pupil names” nên được thay bằng “people’s names”, còn “heartfall” và “short remember” không phải cách diễn đạt tự nhiên. Hãy nêu một lý do rõ ràng, chẳng hạn như bạn gặp nhiều người mới hoặc không nghe kỹ tên của họ, rồi đưa ra một ví dụ ngắn. Câu trả lời nên gồm khoảng 2–3 câu mạch lạc.

範例: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially when I meet many new people at once. I sometimes focus more on the conversation than on remembering their names. For example, I may forget a new colleague’s name a few minutes after we meet.

× Absolutely yes, my name is Ling is named by grandmother give me so my full name is Wendy Ha Link please every people who like it.

✓ Absolutely, yes. My name is Ling, and my grandmother gave me this name, so my full name is Wendy Ha Link. People usually like it.

The original sentence contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses. Use separate sentences and conjunctions such as and and so to clearly connect the ideas.

× Absolutely yes, my name is Ling is named by grandmother give me so my full name is Wendy Ha Link please every people who like it.

✓ Absolutely, yes. My name is Ling, and my grandmother gave me this name, so my full name is Wendy Ha Link. People usually like it.

The verb give should be in the past tense, gave, because the grandmother named the speaker in the past.

× Absolutely yes, my name is Ling is named by grandmother give me so my full name is Wendy Ha Link please every people who like it.

✓ Absolutely, yes. My name is Ling, and my grandmother gave me this name, so my full name is Wendy Ha Link. People usually like it.

If you use the passive structure, the correct form is was given, not is named by. However, the active sentence my grandmother gave me this name is clearer here.

× Absolutely yes, my name is Ling is named by grandmother give me so my full name is Wendy Ha Link please every people who like it.

✓ Absolutely, yes. My name is Ling, and my grandmother gave me this name, so my full name is Wendy Ha Link. People usually like it.

Every people is incorrect because every is followed by a singular noun. Use everyone or people instead. In this sentence, people is the natural choice.

× Note, I think that I don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is hardly for me. I'm a clicely or or short remembered and usually unremembered for the name.

✓ No, I do not think I remember people's names because names are difficult for me. I have a short memory, so I usually forget people's names.

The original answer contains fragments and several clauses without a clear grammatical structure. Divide the ideas into complete sentences with a subject and a verb.

× Note, I think that I don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is hardly for me. I'm a clicely or or short remembered and usually unremembered for the name.

✓ No, I do not think I remember people's names because names are difficult for me. I have a short memory, so I usually forget people's names.

When speaking generally about names, use the plural form names. Also, people's names needs the plural possessive form because the names belong to people in general.

× Note, I think that I don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is hardly for me. I'm a clicely or or short remembered and usually unremembered for the name.

✓ No, I do not think I remember people's names because names are difficult for me. I have a short memory, so I usually forget people's names.

Hardly, clicely, and unremembered do not express the intended meaning correctly. Use difficult to describe the names and short memory to explain why remembering them is difficult.

× Note, I think that I don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is hardly for me. I'm a clicely or or short remembered and usually unremembered for the name.

✓ No, I do not think I remember people's names because names are difficult for me. I have a short memory, so I usually forget people's names.

Use the present simple to describe a current and usual situation: I have a short memory and I usually forget people's names.

× Oh, I the bit of worry it because I think that I'm so very worried but but I can't temporarily this.

✓ I feel a bit worried because I think people may forget my name, but I cannot remember this feeling for long.

The original sentence is missing the main verb feel and contains incomplete phrases. A complete sentence needs a subject, a verb, and a logically connected complement.

× Oh, I the bit of worry it because I think that I'm so very worried but but I can't temporarily this.

✓ I feel a bit worried because I think people may forget my name, but I cannot remember this feeling for long.

Use feel in the present simple to describe your current emotional reaction. The form I the bit of worry does not contain a correctly conjugated verb.

× Oh, I the bit of worry it because I think that I'm so very worried but but I can't temporarily this.

✓ I feel a bit worried because I think people may forget my name, but I cannot remember this feeling for long.

Do not repeat but. Use because to give the reason and one but to show the contrast between feeling worried and not remembering the feeling for long.

× Oh, I the bit of worry it because I think that I'm so very worried but but I can't temporarily this.

✓ I feel a bit worried because I think people may forget my name, but I cannot remember this feeling for long.

Temporarily is not used naturally in the original position. The phrase for long should come after remember to express the duration clearly.

× Absolutely yes. I usually don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is so heartfall for me I the person the short remember.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I usually do not remember people's names because names are very difficult for me, and I have a short memory.

The final clause is incomplete and has no clear grammatical structure. Express the second reason with the complete clause I have a short memory.

× Absolutely yes. I usually don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is so heartfall for me I the person the short remember.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I usually do not remember people's names because names are very difficult for me, and I have a short memory.

Use people's names and names when referring to names in general. The singular phrase the pupil name does not match the general meaning.

× Absolutely yes. I usually don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is so heartfall for me I the person the short remember.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I usually do not remember people's names because names are very difficult for me, and I have a short memory.

Heartfall is not an appropriate English adjective in this context. Use difficult to explain that remembering names is not easy.

× Absolutely yes. I usually don't remember pupil names because the pupil name is so heartfall for me I the person the short remember.

✓ Absolutely, yes. I usually do not remember people's names because names are very difficult for me, and I have a short memory.

Use and to connect two related reasons: names are difficult and the speaker has a short memory. The original ideas are incorrectly joined without a conjunction.