Part 1
考官
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
考生
Actually, I find it difficult for me to remember people's name and often I can't match the names to their faces, so I have to spend a long time trying to recognize them.
考官
How do you remember people's names?
考生
Actually I don't have exact way to remember people's name, usually I just try to get familiar with them do through a short conversations and this helps me remember their name better.
考官
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
考生
I never mind and I will not be angry with that because I think it's very normal for people to not remember people's name and I just introduced myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can Remember Me easily.
考官
Do you often forget people's names?
考生
Actually, I'm sorry about that because I really not good at remembering people's name, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. So I'm actually I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
分數: 68.0建議: 回答直接,能够说明“很难记住名字”的观点,并给出原因。但“difficult for me to remember people's name”应改为“difficult for me to remember people's names”,“match the names to their faces”虽然可以理解,但更自然的表达是“match names with faces”;另外,recognize them表示“认出他们”,这里更准确的是“remember their names”。建议使用“because/so”清晰连接原因和结果,并避免重复表达。
範例: No, I find it quite difficult to remember people's names. I often struggle to match names with faces, especially when I meet several new people at once. As a result, I may need to hear someone's name a few times before I can remember it.
How do you remember people's names?
分數: 55.0建議: 回答有明确的方法,但存在较多语法和搭配问题:“don't have exact way”应为“don't have an exact way”,“people's name”应为“people's names”,“through a short conversations”应为“through short conversations”;“get familiar with them”后面不应接“do”。建议先直接说明方法,再补充具体做法,例如在聊天中重复对方的名字或把名字与个人特征联系起来。
範例: I don't have a specific method, but I usually have a short conversation with someone to get to know them better. I also try to repeat their name during the conversation. This helps me remember both the person and their name more easily.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
分數: 62.0建議: 观点清楚,也解释了自己不会生气的原因,并提出了应对方式。不过,“I never mind”不如“I don't mind”自然;“with that”应改为“about it”,“people's name”应为“people's names”,“I just introduced myself”应使用现在时“I just introduce myself”。答案中“again and again”和“more often”略显重复,可以用一个具体但简洁的例子增强内容。
範例: I don't really mind because forgetting a name is quite common, especially when people meet for the first time. I simply introduce myself again and continue chatting with them. After we talk a few more times, they usually remember my name.
Do you often forget people's names?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答与问题相关,并能联系到自己的经历,但语法错误较多:“I really not good”应为“I am really not good”,“people's name”应为“people's names”。第二句重复使用“So”和“actually”,且“I really understand the people”表达不够自然,建议改为“I can really understand people who forget my name”。可以补充一个具体情境,使答案更生动,但仍控制在3—4句。
範例: Yes, I often forget people's names, especially when I meet many new people in a short period of time. I sometimes have to ask them to introduce themselves again, which can be a little embarrassing. However, I can understand people who forget my name because I have the same problem.
× Actually, I find it difficult for me to remember people's name and often I can't match the names to their faces, so I have to spend a long time trying to recognize them.
✓ Actually, I find it difficult for me to remember people's names and often I can't match the names to their faces, so I have to spend a long time trying to recognize them.
“People's”表示“人们的”,后面通常需要接可数名词复数,因此“name”应改为“names”。这里指很多人的名字。
× Actually I don't have exact way to remember people's name, usually I just try to get familiar with them do through a short conversations and this helps me remember their name better.
✓ Actually, I don't have an exact way to remember people's names. Usually, I just try to get familiar with them through short conversations, and this helps me remember their names better.
“exact way”是单数可数名词短语,前面需要使用不定冠词“an”,因为“exact”的发音以元音音素开头。
× Actually I don't have exact way to remember people's name, usually I just try to get familiar with them do through a short conversations and this helps me remember their name better.
✓ Actually, I don't have an exact way to remember people's names. Usually, I just try to get familiar with them through short conversations, and this helps me remember their names better.
“people's names”和“their names”都表示多个人的名字,所以“name”应使用复数形式“names”。另外,“a short conversations”中的“a”不能和复数名词“conversations”搭配;表达泛指时应使用“short conversations”。
× Actually I don't have exact way to remember people's name, usually I just try to get familiar with them do through a short conversations and this helps me remember their name better.
✓ Actually, I don't have an exact way to remember people's names. Usually, I just try to get familiar with them through short conversations, and this helps me remember their names better.
“get familiar with them do through”结构错误。“through”后面可以直接接名词短语,因此应改为“get familiar with them through short conversations”,删除多余的“do”。同时,原句用逗号连接多个完整句子,拆分并使用连词后结构更清楚。
× I never mind and I will not be angry with that because I think it's very normal for people to not remember people's name and I just introduced myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can Remember Me easily.
✓ I don't mind, and I am not angry about it because I think it's very normal for people not to remember people's names. I just introduce myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can remember me easily.
这里描述的是通常的态度和习惯,应使用一般现在时。“I never mind”不如“I don't mind”自然;“introduced”是过去式,应改为“introduce”,因为这是反复发生的行为。
× I never mind and I will not be angry with that because I think it's very normal for people to not remember people's name and I just introduced myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can Remember Me easily.
✓ I don't mind, and I am not angry about it because I think it's very normal for people not to remember people's names. I just introduce myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can remember me easily.
表示“对某事感到生气”时,通常使用“be angry about something”,而不是“be angry with that”。“with”通常用于指对某人感到生气,例如“be angry with him”。
× I never mind and I will not be angry with that because I think it's very normal for people to not remember people's name and I just introduced myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can Remember Me easily.
✓ I don't mind, and I am not angry about it because I think it's very normal for people not to remember people's names. I just introduce myself again and again and chat with them more often so that they can remember me easily.
“people's”后面应接复数名词,因为说的是许多人的名字,所以“people's name”应改为“people's names”。
× Actually, I'm sorry about that because I really not good at remembering people's name, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. So I'm actually I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
✓ Actually, I'm sorry about that because I am really not good at remembering people's names, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
“people's names”表示许多人的名字,因此“people's name”中的“name”应改为复数“names”。
× Actually, I'm sorry about that because I really not good at remembering people's name, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. So I'm actually I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
✓ Actually, I'm sorry about that because I am really not good at remembering people's names, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
“not good”在这里描述现在的能力,需要和主语“I”搭配系动词“am”。因此应说“I am really not good at...”,不能说“I really not good at...”。
× Actually, I'm sorry about that because I really not good at remembering people's name, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. So I'm actually I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
✓ Actually, I'm sorry about that because I am really not good at remembering people's names, so I need them to introduce themselves to me again and again. I really understand the people who can't remember my name.
“So I'm actually I really understand”包含两个主语和两个结构冲突的成分,句子结构不完整。应删除多余的“I'm actually”,直接说“I really understand...”。