名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本直接，但有语法和表达问题： “Some of the names is”应改为“Some names are”；“such as”后面的例子不太自然，因为David和Stephanie都是常见名字，不能很好地说明“难记”。可以说明你通常难以记住不熟悉、发音复杂或相似的名字，并用“because”补充具体原因。避免使用“etc.”，因为口语中可以直接给出一两个例子。

範例: No, I’m not very good at remembering people’s names. I find unfamiliar names, especially those with difficult pronunciation, quite hard to remember. For example, I sometimes forget a new colleague’s name after meeting them only once.

建議: 回答使用了记忆联想的方法，方向是合适的，但有多处词语和语法错误。“its pictures”应改为“a picture”或“an image”，“phase”应为“face”，“the environments”可以改为“the place where I met them”。“the king of the Devict”表达不清，可能想说“King David”；应明确说明如何把名字与人物的外貌、场景或某个熟悉的人联系起来。

範例: I usually associate a person’s name with their face or the place where I met them. For example, if someone is called David, I might connect the name with the biblical King David. This helps me recall the name more easily when I see that person again.

建議: 回答没有准确回应问题，而且逻辑不清。题目问的是“别人记不起你的名字时你的感受”，通常应表达失望、尴尬或有些不高兴；“exciting”应改为“excited”，但这里的语境更适合使用“disappointed”或“embarrassed”。“I was recognized by my friends or new famous people”与题意不符，也不自然。建议先直接回答感受，再用一个原因或例子解释。

範例: I usually feel a little disappointed when someone can’t remember my name. It makes me feel that I didn’t make a strong impression on them. However, I understand that people meet many new faces, so I don’t take it too personally.

建議: 回答基本表达了“经常忘记”的意思，但需要改进时态、句型和词汇。“I often forgot”应改为“I often forget”；“because I hard to remember”应改为“because I find it hard to remember”；“Persian name”很可能是误用，应根据意思改为“people’s names”或“foreign names”。另外，句子重复使用because，且“recognize each people's faces”应改为“remember everyone’s face”。

範例: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially when I meet several new people at the same time. I find it difficult to remember both their names and faces after just one meeting. I usually remember them better after having another conversation with them.

× Some of the names is kind of hard to remember such as David, Stephanie, etc.

✓ Some of the names are kind of hard to remember, such as David and Stephanie.

“Some of the names”表示“名字中的一些”，names是复数，所以后面的动词要用复数形式“are”，不能用“is”。

× I will relate it to its pictures such as the phase or the environments.

✓ I will relate them to their pictures, such as faces or environments.

“names”是复数，因此要用复数代词“them”和“their”，不能使用单数代词“it”和“its”。

× I feel so exciting and frightening because I was recognized by my friends or new famous people that would let me have a sense of achievement.

✓ I feel so excited and frightened because I was recognized by my friends or new famous people, which gives me a sense of achievement.

“exciting”和“frightening”通常描述事物给人的感受；描述人的感受时，应使用“excited”和“frightened”。例如：I feel excited. / The movie is exciting.

× I often forgot because I hard to remember each of the Persian name because that is quite hard for me to recognize each people's faces.

✓ I often forget because I find it hard to remember each of the Persian names, as it is quite hard for me to recognize each person's face.

“often”表示经常发生的事情，所以应该使用一般现在时“forget”，不能使用过去式“forgot”。

× I often forgot because I hard to remember each of the Persian name because that is quite hard for me to recognize each people's faces.

✓ I often forget because I find it hard to remember each of the Persian names, as it is quite hard for me to recognize each person's face.

“I hard to remember”缺少谓语动词，不能直接用“hard”。可以使用固定结构“find it hard to do something”，所以应改为“I find it hard to remember...”.

× I often forgot because I hard to remember each of the Persian name because that is quite hard for me to recognize each people's faces.

✓ I often forget because I find it hard to remember each of the Persian names, as it is quite hard for me to recognize each person's face.

“each of the”后面必须接复数名词，因此应使用“names”。另外，“each”强调单个对象，所以应说“each person's face”，而不是“each people's faces”。