名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 質問には「簡単ではない」と直接答えましょう。"reembarging" は "remembering"、"forgot" は現在形では "forget" に直します。また、"tell about people's names" は不自然なので、"remember people's names" や "forget their names" を使ってください。自分の経験を具体的に説明し、"so" などの接続語で理由につなげると、より自然で効果的です。

範例: No, it isn’t very easy for me to remember people’s names. I often forget them shortly after meeting someone, especially if I meet several new people at once. However, I try to repeat a person’s name during the conversation so that I can remember it.

建議: 方法を最初に明確に述べ、その後に具体的な手順を説明しましょう。"take a note" は通常 "take notes" または "write down their names"、"take and I usually read it" は重複しているため削除します。"when I meet with other people" ではなく、"before I meet them again" のように意味を明確にしてください。

範例: I usually write people’s names down in my phone after I meet them. Before I see them again, I quickly review my notes. I also try to connect each name with something memorable, such as the person’s job or appearance.

建議: 答えの内容は質問に関連していますが、"I don't feel anything" はやや不自然で、"I don't take it personally" や "I understand" のほうが自然です。"forgot" は現在の一般的な状況なので "forget" に直してください。最初に感情を述べ、理由を "because" で説明すると、より論理的になります。

範例: I don’t feel particularly upset when people forget my name. I understand because I often have trouble remembering names myself. I usually remind them of my name and continue the conversation without making a big issue of it.

建議: "remembering and people's names" は "remembering people's names" に直し、"forget and tell the people's names" は意味が不明確なので、"forget their names" と表現しましょう。"make them make the angry" と "make people angry" は重複しているため、"This sometimes annoys people" のように簡潔に言えます。頻度、具体的な場面、結果を順序よく述べ、同じ表現を繰り返さないようにしてください。

範例: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially when I meet many new people at work or at social events. This can be awkward because I sometimes have to ask for their names again. To avoid this, I write their names in my phone and review them later.

× Yes I know I am not good at reembarging people's names so I usually forgot and tell about people's names.

✓ Yes, I know I am not good at remembering people's names, so I usually forget them.

After the expression not good at, the verb should be in the -ing form: remembering. The phrase reembarging is not a correct English word; the correct verb is remembering.

× Yes I know I am not good at reembarging people's names so I usually forgot and tell about people's names.

✓ Yes, I know I am not good at remembering people's names, so I usually forget them.

The adverb usually describes a habitual action, so the present-tense verb forget is required, not the past-tense verb forgot.

× I usually take a note about the people's names and take and I usually read it when I meet with other people.

✓ I usually take notes of people's names, and I read them when I meet other people.

Because you are referring to the names of multiple people, notes and them are more appropriate than a note and it. Using plural nouns also makes the meaning clearer.

× I usually take a note about the people's names and take and I usually read it when I meet with other people.

✓ I usually take notes of people's names, and I read them when I meet other people.

The natural preposition after take notes in this meaning is of: take notes of people's names. The phrase take a note about is unnatural here.

× I usually take a note about the people's names and take and I usually read it when I meet with other people.

✓ I usually take notes of people's names, and I read them when I meet other people.

The original sentence repeats take and I usually and contains an incomplete coordination. Use two parallel clauses: I usually take notes and I read them.

× I also can't remember people's names so I don't feel anything even if people forgot my name.

✓ I also can't remember people's names, so I don't feel anything even if people forget my name.

The condition refers to a general or repeated situation, so the present-tense verb forget is needed instead of the past-tense verb forgot.

× Yeah, I am not good at remembering and people's names so I usually forget and tell the people's names and I sometimes make them make the angry and make people angry.

✓ Yeah, I am not good at remembering people's names, so I usually forget them, and I sometimes make people angry.

The expression not good at must be followed by an -ing form, and remembering should be followed directly by its object: remembering people's names. The word and cannot be placed between remembering and people's names.

× Yeah, I am not good at remembering and people's names so I usually forget and tell the people's names and I sometimes make them make the angry and make people angry.

✓ Yeah, I am not good at remembering people's names, so I usually forget them, and I sometimes make people angry.

The pronoun them correctly refers to people's names after the verb forget. The original sentence does not provide a correct object after forget and uses make them make unnecessarily.

× Yeah, I am not good at remembering and people's names so I usually forget and tell the people's names and I sometimes make them make the angry and make people angry.

✓ Yeah, I am not good at remembering people's names, so I usually forget them, and I sometimes make people angry.

The original sentence contains several incorrectly connected phrases and repeats make people angry. Dividing the ideas into two clear clauses creates a grammatical and natural sentence.