名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答基本切题，但过于简短，只有模糊的表达“maybe not”，没有解释原因。建议先直接表明立场，再补充一个具体原因和例子；可以使用“because”“especially when”等连接表达，使答案更完整、自然。

範例: Not really. I sometimes find it difficult to remember people's names, especially when I meet several new people at the same time. I usually need to hear a name a few times before I can remember it.

建議: 答案中的“give them pedro”意思不清，影响交流；“write some name”也不自然。建议使用清晰、准确的表达，例如“write their names down”或“repeat their names”。回答应直接说明记忆方法，并补充具体使用场景。

範例: I usually write their names down on my phone after meeting them. I also try to repeat each name during the conversation so that I can remember it more easily. For example, I might say, “Nice to meet you, Anna.”

建議: 答案切题，并清楚表达了感受，但内容较少，且“unhappy”在此语境中略显生硬。建议使用“a little disappointed”或“slightly hurt”等更自然的词，并解释为什么会有这种感受；注意在转折前后使用逗号或连接词。

範例: I feel a little disappointed when people can’t remember my name, but I’m not angry. I understand that they may have met many people recently. However, it still makes me feel that our conversation was not very memorable.

建議: 答案直接回应了问题，也提供了转折和原因，整体较自然。需要改进语法：应说“people’s names”而不是“people’s name”，并在“No”和“I think”之间加标点。为了提高内容分数，可以补充一个具体情况，例如在第一次见面或同时认识多人时容易忘记名字。

範例: No, not very often, because I have a fairly good memory. However, I sometimes forget people’s names when I meet several new people in one day. In those situations, I usually ask them to remind me politely.

× I can write some name or give them pedro.

✓ I can write some names or give them Pedro.

“some”通常用于修饰可数名词复数，因此“some name”应改为“some names”。另外，“Pedro”是人名，首字母应大写。这里主要属于名词单复数错误。

× No I think I have a good memory but sometimes I forget people's name.

✓ No, I think I have a good memory, but sometimes I forget people's names.

“people's”表示“人们的”，后面所指的名字通常是复数，所以应使用“names”，而不是“name”。此外，句首“No”后和并列句前应使用逗号，使句子结构更清楚。