名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use a linking phrase to give a brief reason or example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and correct verb forms (e.g., “Remembering names is difficult for me”).

範例: No, it isn’t easy for me. Remembering names is difficult because I meet many people from different countries at work, so I often struggle to recall each name.

建議: Provide a clear method and use correct grammar and linking words. State the main technique first, then give a specific example. Avoid phrases like “one of the most easiest” and reduce repetition.

範例: I usually ask people to repeat their name and then use it in conversation. For example, when I work closely with someone, I call them by name several times over a few days to help me remember.

建議: Start with a clear statement of your feeling, then give a brief reason and a contrasting example using linking words. Correct small errors and avoid repeating ‘I don’t feel’ twice.

範例: Honestly, I don’t feel upset when people forget my name because it can be hard for foreigners to pronounce. However, I know some friends do get offended when I forget their names, so I try to apologise and learn them again.

建議: Answer directly and concisely, then give one or two specific strategies using cohesive devices. Avoid excessive repetition like “many, many times” and correct verb tense and article use.

範例: Yes, I often forget names. To remember someone, I try to meet them several times and use their name during conversations or do activities together so the name becomes familiar.

× No, absolutely not. Remember someone's name is one of the most difficult things for me when I work in Australia I have a chance to meet a lot of people from every country and then remember their name is one of the most difficult for me.

✓ No, absolutely not. Remembering someone's name is one of the most difficult things for me. When I worked in Australia, I had a chance to meet a lot of people from many countries, and remembering their names was very difficult for me.

This sentence contains multiple sentence structure issues (ID 26) and tense problems (ID 5/6). The verb phrase 'Remember someone's name' should be a gerund as the subject: 'Remembering someone's name'. The original mixes present and past contexts; because the speaker refers to past experience in Australia, use past tense 'worked' and 'had' and change 'remember their name is' to 'remembering their names was'. Also separate into shorter sentences and add commas for clarity. Use 'many countries' and plural 'names' to match 'people'.

× One of the most easiest way to remember their name is ask them but I am quite often to forget their the name.

✓ One of the easiest ways to remember their names is to ask them, but I quite often forget their names.

This sentence has adjective/adverb errors (ID 13) and plural/singular errors (ID 1). 'Most easiest' is redundant; use 'easiest'. 'Way' should be plural 'ways' to match 'one of the...'. Use the infinitive 'to ask' and correct 'I am quite often to forget' to 'I quite often forget'. Remove the extra article 'the' before 'name' and use plural 'names'.

× So in order to remember their name clearly, I have to meet them often, for example, to work with them many, many days.

✓ So in order to remember their names clearly, I have to meet them often, for example, by working with them for many days.

This includes verb + -ing form issues (ID 8) and plural errors (ID 1). 'To work with them many, many days' is awkward; use the gerund form 'by working' and add a preposition 'for' before 'many days'. Use plural 'names' to match 'them'.

× To be honest for me, I don't feel anything, I don't feel sad or anything because my name is quite difficult for some foreigners to remember, but I have made a lot of friends that get upset where I couldn't remember their name.

✓ To be honest, I don't feel anything; I don't feel sad because my name is quite difficult for some foreigners to remember. However, I have made a lot of friends who get upset when I can't remember their names.

This contains incorrect conjunction and relative clause use (ID 16) and tense inconsistency (ID 6/5). Replace the comma splices with proper punctuation and connectives. Use 'who' for people, not 'that', and 'when' for the time clause instead of 'where'. Keep tense consistent: if speaking generally, present 'can't remember' and plural 'names'.

× Yes, absolutely. Most of the time I couldn't remember people's name.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Most of the time I can't remember people's names.

This is a past tense problem (ID 5) and plural issue (ID 1). The question asks 'Do you often forget...' so use present tense 'can't' to indicate habitual action. Also use plural 'names' to agree with 'people'.

× If I want to remember someone's name, I have to meet them many, many times or hang out with them or to have some activity with them many, many times.

✓ If I want to remember someone's name, I have to meet them many times, hang out with them, or do activities with them many times.

This sentence has inconsistent verb forms and incorrect preposition usage (IDs 8 and 11). Use parallel verb forms in the list: 'meet', 'hang out', 'do activities'. Remove redundant 'to' before 'have' and replace 'have some activity with them' with 'do activities with them' for natural phrasing. Also remove repeated 'many, many' redundancy.

× So I can't remember their name clearly.

✓ So I can't remember their names clearly.

This is a sentence structure and plural issue (IDs 26 and 1). Use plural 'names' to agree with 'their'. The sentence is otherwise simple but needs number agreement.