名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words like "like," and correct verb forms and pronouns. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use one coherence phrase if needed.

範例: Yes, I find it easy to remember people's names. I often recall names quickly when they repeat them, and that usually surprises people.

建議: Provide a clearer structure and specific method. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, "first," "then") and explain the strategy with a concrete example. Avoid repetition and informal fillers.

範例: I remember names by linking them to a distinctive feature. For example, I might associate 'Anna' with her bright red scarf, so whenever I see the scarf I recall her name immediately.

建議: Correct grammar and pronoun use, and make the response more natural and concise. Use one or two sentences: state your feeling and describe what you do, with a linking word like "so" or "therefore."

範例: I don't take it personally when someone forgets my name, because that's normal for unfamiliar people. So I usually repeat my name politely and smile to help them remember.

建議: Be specific about frequency and reason, and avoid contradictory phrasing. Use linking words (e.g., "however," "sometimes") and correct tense and wording to describe how often and why you forget names.

範例: Sometimes I do forget names, especially if I only met the person briefly. However, when I have more contact with them the association technique usually helps me remember.

× In my case, yes, I'm really good at like memorize the person's name and if they ask me their names again for curiosity, I returned replies right away so they are amazed most of the time.

✓ In my case, yes, I'm really good at memorizing a person's name, and if they ask me their name again out of curiosity, I reply right away so they are amazed most of the time.

The phrase 'good at' requires a verb in the -ing form (gerund), so 'memorize' should be 'memorizing'. Use 'a person's name' (article) rather than 'the person's name' for general reference. 'If they ask me their names again for curiosity' is awkward; use 'out of curiosity' and 'their name' (singular) or 'a person's name'. 'I returned replies' is incorrect verb choice and tense; use simple present 'I reply' to match habitual action.

× So I remember their names by associates, their face and their names.

✓ So I remember their names by associating their faces with their names.

The original uses 'associates' (noun) incorrectly; the correct verb form is 'associating' (verb in -ing) to show the method. 'Their face and their names' should be parallel and plural: 'their faces with their names'. The corrected sentence uses proper verb form and parallel structure.

× So it's really easy for me to like remind their names by using this strategy.

✓ So it's really easy for me to remember their names by using this strategy.

'Remind their names' is incorrect because 'remind' needs an object (someone) and what follows; here the intended meaning is 'remember'. Also avoid filler 'like'. Use the base verb 'remember' to express the ability rather than 'remind'. 'By using this strategy' correctly explains the method.

× I don't blame themselves even though they don't recall my name.

✓ I don't blame them even though they don't recall my name.

Reflexive pronoun 'themselves' is incorrect because the subject is 'I' and the object should be 'them'. Use 'them' as the correct object pronoun. The sentence then correctly expresses that the speaker does not blame others.

× It's really common for people to forget my name if they're unfamiliar with.

✓ It's really common for people to forget my name if they're unfamiliar with me.

The phrase 'unfamiliar with' requires an object; add 'me' to complete the prepositional phrase. Without the object the sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical.

× So I just like gladly say my name again and and then I expect my names is recalled.

✓ So I gladly say my name again and then I expect my name will be recalled.

Remove filler 'like'. 'Gladly say my name again' is fine. 'I expect my names is recalled' has multiple issues: 'names' is plural but should be singular 'name'; passive construction is awkward and ungrammatical here. Use 'I expect my name will be recalled' (future construction) to show the expectation that the listener will remember it after hearing it.

× Yes, I forget some names even though I used my strategy.

✓ Yes, I forget some names even though I use my strategy.

Mixing present tense 'forget' with past tense 'used' is inconsistent. Use present tense 'use' to match the habitual action. If referring to a past attempt, use 'used' but then change 'forget' to past 'forgot'. Maintain consistent tense.

× As I mentioned before, I linked their face and styles their names, so I often forget people's names.

✓ As I mentioned before, I link their faces and styles to their names, so I still often forget people's names.

'Linked' is past tense; use 'link' to describe habitual method. 'Their face and styles their names' is ungrammatical and lacks preposition; use 'link their faces and styles to their names' to show the association. Adding 'still' clarifies the contrast that despite the method, forgetting happens.