名字— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, so) correctly and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., "people's" and removing duplicate words).

範例: No, I find it difficult to remember people's names. This is mainly because I have social anxiety, so I often avoid eye contact and don't form a strong visual memory of faces. As a result, I struggle to link names with faces.

建議: Provide a clear method and give a short example. Use linking words to show sequence or result (for example, 'usually', 'then', 'so'). Fix unclear phrases ("extend" is incorrect here).

範例: I don't use a formal technique; usually I try to meet the person again soon and repeat their name. For example, when I meet a colleague, I say, "Nice to meet you, Sarah," and then use their name in conversation so I remember it.

建議: Clarify the emotion and avoid unclear expressions. Begin with a direct statement of feeling, then give a brief reason. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "never spiritual" is incorrect, use "not offended" or "not bothered").

範例: I'm usually not offended when people forget my name because I know I forget names too. Therefore, I don't expect others to remember my name, especially if we don't meet often.

建議: Give a clear yes/no response and add a concise explanation with a specific detail or example. Remove filler words and repeated phrases. Use linking words like 'because' to explain the reason.

範例: Yes, I often forget people's names because I don't focus on their faces or repeat their names. For instance, I sometimes meet someone twice before I can recall their name.

× I really find it difficult to remember people' names and match them with their faces.

✓ I really find it difficult to remember people's names and match them with their faces.

The possessive of people is people's not people'. This is a singular/plural punctuation issue: people is plural and the possessive uses an apostrophe + s. Use people's names to show names belonging to people.

× I think that has to do with my social anxiety that that I don't really look into their eyes, so I don't really remember their face so I can remember their names too.

✓ I think it has to do with my social anxiety: I don't really look them in the eyes, so I don't remember their faces and I can't remember their names either.

Multiple issues: repeated 'that that' and incorrect pronoun/phrase order. 'Look into their eyes' is better as 'look them in the eyes.' 'Remember their face' needs plural 'faces.' 'So I can remember their names too' is contradictory; intended meaning is inability, so 'I can't remember their names either.' Fix sentence flow and pronoun usage.

× There is no specific technique I just extend if I see them again and I will keep asking till I remember their names.

✓ There is no specific technique. I just wait to see them again and I keep asking until I remember their names.

Run-on sentence and wrong verb 'extend' used instead of 'wait.' Split into two sentences. 'Till' is informal; 'until' or 'until I remember' is clearer. Use present simple 'I keep asking' to indicate habitual action.

× Never spiritual because I also can't remember names so I don't feel like it is a bit dee someone doesn't remember my names because I'm not a famous partner, so it's not their duty to remember by my name.

✓ Never offended, because I also can't remember names, so I don't feel bad when someone doesn't remember my name; I'm not famous, so it's not their duty to remember my name.

Many word choice errors: 'spiritual' should be 'offended'; 'dee' unclear -> 'bad'; 'my names' should be singular 'my name'; 'partner' wrong -> remove; 'remember by my name' -> 'remember my name.' Rephrase to natural English and correct adjective/adverb usage and noun number.

× Yes, isn't like forgetting their names is just like I just can't recall what their names are like I just completely forget.

✓ Yes, it's not that I forget their names; it's that I simply can't recall their names — I just completely forget.

Original has informal fillers and incorrect contraction 'isn't like.' Use 'it's not that' and proper clause structure. Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'it's' and remove repetitive 'like' and 'just' to make statement clear.