工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 纠正语法和表达，使回答更自然、连贯并信息具体。注意使用清晰的主题句并用一到两句补充细节，避免重复。需要改进时态、单复数和词汇搭配（例如："currently a student"，"majoring in"，"interested in software development"）。

範例: I am currently a student at Macao Polytechnic University, majoring in Computer Science. I chose this major because I enjoy programming and problem-solving. In the future, I hope to work in software development, possibly focusing on game development.

建議: 把句子合并成完整的陈述，改正语法错误并补充具体细节。说明你目前的身份并给出选择学校的明确原因，使用连词使表达更连贯（例如："because"、"which"）。避免断句。

範例: I don't work yet; I am currently a student in Macao. I chose Macao Polytechnic University because it offers many courses taught in English, which helps me improve my language skills and prepares me for an international career.

建議: 组织回答结构：先给出总体观点，然后用一到两句具体说明支持理由。修正词汇和句法（例如："students are active"改为"the school organizes many activities"），避免断句并用连词连接观点。

範例: Yes, it's a good place to study. Although the school is small, it has a strong academic atmosphere; the teachers are professional and patient, and the university organizes many activities that help students learn and communicate with each other.

建議: 将断断续续的短句合并成流畅的几句话，明确说明喜欢的原因并提供具体例子（如提升自信、获得解决问题的技能）。使用连词（例如："because"、"which"）来提高连贯性。

範例: Yes, I like studying here. Since I joined the university, my confidence has improved because the courses and projects have taught me problem-solving skills, which I believe will help me adapt to future jobs and find employment.

建議: 给出更明确且结构化的回答：先说明总体情况，再列出可能的方向并简短解释原因。避免重复和犹豫语气，使用词组如"perhaps"、"I might"并提供具体职业或技能目标。

範例: To be honest, I don't have a detailed plan yet. I might work in a software development team, possibly focusing on game development, because I enjoy coding. Alternatively, I plan to study finance basics to keep the option of a finance-related role open.

× I am cur students. At Macao Polytechnic University and I am majoring in Computer Science.

✓ I am a current student at Macao Polytechnic University, and I am majoring in Computer Science.

错误类型：主谓一致 / 单复数与冠词使用。原句中“cur students”有复数形式且拼写错误，应为单数“a current student”；另外句子断开不连贯，介词“At”和大写问题需修正。建议：使用不定冠词a并将修正后的短语连成完整句子。

× I choose this subject because I have patience for computer software.

✓ I chose this subject because I have a passion for computer software.

错误类型：单复数/词汇选择与时态。原句中的“choose”应与叙述过去的选择一致用过去式“chose”（面试描述已做出的选择更常用过去式）；“have patience for”搭配不当，应为“have a passion for”或“am patient with”。建议：根据语境使用正确搭配并注意时态。

× In the future, I want to work in software department to develop. Game.

✓ In the future, I want to work in a software department to develop games.

错误类型：现在/未来时与名词复数及冠词。需要加冠词“a”，名词“game”应为复数“games”，并且“develop”后直接加名词。建议：使用不定冠词并将可数名词改为复数以匹配泛指。

× I haven't work yet.

✓ I haven't worked yet.

错误类型：过去分词形式（完成时）。“have/has”之后应使用过去分词“worked”，原句用了原形“work”。建议：在现在完成时中使用正确的过去分词形式。

× I'm current students in Macao.

✓ I'm currently a student in Macao.

错误类型：现在时/副词与单复数。需要使用副词“currently”修饰“am”，并把“students”改为单数“a student”。建议：使用副词形式并注意单复数一致。

× The reason why I choose this place so is that. This university. Offering a lot of. Class tough in. English, this can help me improve my English skill.

✓ The reason I chose this place is that the university offers a lot of classes taught in English, which can help me improve my English skills.

错误类型：句子结构与时态、动词形式和拼写。需要把“choose”改为过去式“chose”；将多个断裂片段合并成完整句；“Offering”应改为谓语“offers”；“Class tough in English”应为“classes taught in English”；“skill”复数改为“skills”。建议：把句子合并为一个完整句，注意主谓一致和正确词序。

× Yes, although the school is small, it has a great academic atmosphere.

✓ Yes, although the school is small, it has a great academic atmosphere.

错误类型：无（原句语法正确）。句子语法正确，无需修改。建议：保持不变。

× The teacher is professional and patient.

✓ The teachers are professional and patient.

错误类型：主谓一致/单复数。上下文讲的是学校师资，通常用复数“teachers”。如果指单个，需用冠词“the teacher is”。建议：根据语境选择单数或复数并保持一致。

× And student is an activity that they often organize a lot of activities.

✓ And the students are active; they often organize a lot of activities.

错误类型：单复数与词类使用。“student”应为复数“students”；原句“is an activity”用法错误，应该用形容词“active”描述学生；句子需拆分或用分号连接以更通顺。建议：使用复数并改为适当形容词。

× To let us study. Commutating. And.

✓ These activities help us study and improve our communication and commuting skills.

错误类型：无动词的句子/句子结构错误。原句片段化，缺乏谓语，且“Commutating”拼写和用法错误，应为“communication”或“commuting”并根据语境选择。建议：把片段合并为完整句并使用正确名词。

× Of course I do. I feel better and better since I came to the school.

✓ Of course I do. I have felt better and better since I came to the school.

错误类型：现在时与完成时。表示自从到校以来持续的状态，常用现在完成时“I have felt”。建议：使用现在完成时表达从过去延续到现在的状态。

× Through the study in here. I feel more confidence.

✓ Through studying here, I feel more confident.

错误类型：过去分词/形容词形式。应使用动名词“studying”或改为“study here”形成完整短语，同时“confidence”是名词，需用形容词“confident”来描述“feel”。建议：使用动名词短语并用形容词描述感受。

× And there are a lot of skills. To solve problems which can adapt me, make me adapt the future.

✓ And I have learned a lot of skills to solve problems, which help me adapt to the future and find a job.

错误类型：介词使用与句子结构。“adapt me”用法错误，应为“help me adapt to the future”；缺少主语“I have learned”，句子碎片需合并。建议：补全主语并使用正确介词“adapt to”。

× To be honest. I haven't had a clear plan yet.

✓ To be honest, I haven't had a clear plan yet.

错误类型：时态与句子结构。句子本身语法正确，但标点碎片化，保持连贯并使用逗号更自然。建议：合并短句使表达更流畅。

× Maybe I will work in a software department to develop. Develop. Game.

✓ Maybe I will work in a software department to develop games.

错误类型：现在/未来时与重复及名词复数。合并断句，去掉重复“Develop.”并把“game”改为复数“games”。建议：将意图完整表达为一句并注意名词复数形式。

× Or? I will also learn some knowledge about finance to find a finance job like.

✓ Or I will also learn about finance to find a job in finance.

错误类型：时态与句子结构。句子断断续续且结尾不完整，应合并并用更自然的表达“learn about finance”以及“a job in finance”。建议：连成完整句并避免不必要的问号和残句。