工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 文法と語順の誤りを修正し、発音の曖昧さ（フィラーの多用）を減らして簡潔に答える練習をしてください。具体的には現在形の用法、冠詞（a/an/the）、職場名の前後の前置詞、動詞の正しい形（divide → sortingなど）を意識しましょう。また「uh」などのフィラーを減らすために一呼吸おいてから話す訓練をすると自然さが向上します。回答は主題文＋必要なら1〜2文の具体例に留め、最大5文を守ってください。

範例: I work as an administrative assistant at the Patent Office. I handle sorting emails and preparing documents for outgoing messages. I enjoy the job because my colleagues are friendly and always ready to help.

建議: 語順と前置詞（in/at）を正しく使い、同じ内容を繰り返さないように簡潔に述べましょう。曖昧な単語（"rotor"）は正しい語を使う練習をし、接続語で文をつなぐと流暢さが増します。具体的には“in central Osaka”や“rush hour”などの表現を使い、1文目で場所を明確にし、2文目で理由や状況を付け加えると良いです。

範例: I work in central Osaka, which is a very busy part of the city. During the morning rush hour many people commute by train, so the trains are usually crowded.

建議: 肯定の返答の後に理由を自然な構造で述べ、フィラーを減らして流暢に話す練習をしてください。語順（"moved to a new location"）や冠詞（a/the）を正しく使い、具体的な点（眺め、設備、通勤の便など）を一つ加えると説得力が増します。文は短めに区切って話すと発音も改善します。

範例: Yes, it is a good place to work. Our office recently moved to a new building, and we are on the 15th floor, which gives us a nice view and better facilities.

建議: 質問の意味（Would you like the place where you work?＝職場が気に入っているか）を正確に捉え、はっきりした肯定か否定で答えてから理由を述べましょう。曖昧な表現や繰り返しを避け、‘I’m quite satisfied because…’など明確な構成にすると良いです。不要なフィラーを減らし、1〜2文で完結させてください。

範例: Yes, I like my workplace. I am quite satisfied because the office has friendly colleagues and a comfortable environment.

建議: 将来計画を述べるときは、明確な時制と語彙（contract expires rather than contract finish）を使い、余計なフィラーを減らして最後まで文を完結させてください。代替案や希望する職種、準備している行動（like updating CV, applying for positions）など具体的な情報を一つ加えると内容が豊かになります。

範例: In the future I plan to change jobs because my contract expires next year. I will start updating my CV and applying for positions in similar administrative roles.

× I currently working as a administrative assistant at Patent Office.

✓ I am currently working as an administrative assistant at the Patent Office.

This sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' required for the present continuous tense and needs the article 'an' before a job title and 'the' before 'Patent Office'. Correct structure: subject + am/is/are + verb-ing. Improve by practicing present continuous forms and article use.

× My responsibility is uh divide dividing e-mail and making some document to send e-mail.

✓ My responsibilities are dividing emails and making some documents to send by email.

Pluralize 'responsibilities' to match multiple activities (singular/plural agreement) and use gerund forms correctly. 'Email' should be plural or countable as 'emails' and 'documents'. Also use 'to send by email' for clarity. Practice matching subject number and parallel gerund phrases.

× I really like this job because my colleagues are very friendly and helpful.

✓ I really like this job because my colleagues are very friendly and helpful.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Keep adjective use as is.

× I work central Osaka, which is quite a busy city, and also are many people working, uh, central Osaka.

✓ I work in central Osaka, which is quite a busy area, and many people work in central Osaka.

Missing preposition 'in' after 'work'. 'City' can be kept but 'area' fits better for 'central Osaka'. Original second clause had incorrect word order and unnecessary 'are'. Use 'many people work' (subject + verb) instead of 'are many people working'. Practice correct preposition use and subject-verb word order.

× So during the morning time, the rotor people, uh, get on the train.

✓ So during the morning, a lot of people get on the train.

'Rotor people' is incorrect; likely intended 'other people' or 'a lot of people'. 'During the morning' is preferable to 'during the morning time'. Maintain simple present for habitual action. Improve vocabulary choice and concise time expressions.

× Yes. My uh, uh, working place is quite great because our office moved to new location.

✓ Yes. My workplace is quite nice because our office moved to a new location.

'Working place' is awkward; 'workplace' preferred. Missing article 'a' before 'new location'. Use simple past 'moved' is fine because it's a completed action. Improve article usage and word choice.

× So the building is uh, new and uh, our office is 15th floor.

✓ So the building is new and our office is on the 15th floor.

Add preposition 'on' before floor and ordinal indicator '15th'. Also remove filler words. Practice using 'on the nth floor' for location.

× I haven't, I don't know that yeah. I don't have uh, any, uh, answer, but I think I, my working place is, uh, I'm, I'm, uh, quite satisfied with this place, so I don't.

✓ I don't really know. I don't have an answer, but I think I am quite satisfied with my workplace, so I do.

Original is disfluent and contains contractions and fillers. Use clear negation: 'I don't really know.' 'I don't have an answer' is fine. Express satisfaction clearly and use 'so I do' to affirm. Remove fillers and correct pronoun order. Practice producing concise responses.

× Oh, that's a very interesting question. Uh, in the future, I'm going to, uh, change my job because my contract work contract, uh, and uh, finish, uh, next year.

✓ Oh, that's a very interesting question. In the future, I'm going to change my job because my contract work will finish next year.

Correct future construction 'will finish' for scheduled completion and remove repetition 'work contract'. Use 'my contract work' is awkward; better 'my contract' or 'my work contract'. Practice combining clauses and using 'will' for future events or 'is going to' consistently.

× So I have to, uh, look for another job, but.

✓ So I have to look for another job.

Trailing 'but' is incomplete; remove it to make a complete sentence. 'Have to' + base verb 'look' is correct. Avoid trailing conjunctions and hesitations; finish the thought.