工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence and avoid repetition. Fix tense and article errors (e.g., "I also have an internship"), and reduce filler words. Keep within 2–3 sentences and use a linking phrase to explain why you have the internship.

範例: I'm currently a student, and I also have an internship in Nicaragua to explore whether I enjoy the work. I applied for this internship to gain practical experience and decide on my future career path.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence then add specific supporting detail. Remove hesitations and correct grammar ("I used to learn many languages," "I know how hard it is"). Use a linking word to connect your reason for teaching to your experience and describe one concrete way you help students.

範例: I work in Nicaragua as a Chinese teacher. Because I have learned several languages myself, I understand the challenges learners face, so I use simple explanations and lots of practice activities to help my students improve.

建議: Answer directly with one clear sentence and then give specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Fix grammar and word order ("my coworkers"; "we work well together"). Provide one concrete example of teamwork or a supportive feature.

範例: Yes, it's a good place to work because the students are friendly and my coworkers are supportive. For example, when issues arise we always discuss them together and find practical solutions.

建議: Start with a clear statement and give specific reasons using linking words. Correct comparative and tense errors ("not as busy as other places", "if I've finished my work"). Mention one or two specific benefits to strengthen the answer.

範例: Yes, I really like my workplace because it is not as busy as others and I have free time after completing my tasks. For instance, after finishing my work I often study for the IELTS exam.

建議: Give a concise topic sentence about your main plan, then add one specific reason and a linked detail. Correct grammar ("plans are"; "teaching Chinese as a second language"). Avoid repeating the same idea twice and use a linking word such as "because" or "so" to explain motivation.

範例: I plan to apply for jobs overseas and work as a Chinese-as-a-second-language teacher because I want to experience different cultures. For example, teaching abroad would let me learn about local customs while improving my teaching skills.

× Well, I'm a student currently, but I'm also have an intern in Nicaragua because I want to figure out if I really like my job.

✓ Well, I'm currently a student, but I'm also doing an internship in Nicaragua because I want to find out if I really like my job.

Errors: 'I'm also have an intern' is ungrammatical. The speaker needs a present continuous form for the action (doing an internship) not 'have an intern' (which means employing someone). Also word order: 'I'm a student currently' is better as 'I'm currently a student'. Suggestion: Use 'doing an internship' or 'I have an internship' depending on meaning; here 'doing an internship' fits. Keep adverb 'currently' before the noun phrase for natural order.

× So I applied for the internship right now I had.

✓ I applied for the internship recently and I have it now.

Errors: 'applied for the internship right now I had' mixes past and present incorrectly and lacks proper connectors. Use a clear past reference 'applied' with time adverb 'recently' and a present perfect 'I have it now' to show the outcome. Suggestion: Use connectors like 'and' or restructure into two clauses with correct tenses.

× I'm currently working in, uh, Nicaragua as a Chinese teacher because I used to learn a lot of language, so I know how hard is that That would be so, umm, I try to do my best to help the students, yeah.

✓ I'm currently working in Nicaragua as a Chinese teacher because I used to study many languages, so I know how hard that is. I try to do my best to help the students.

Errors: Remove unnecessary comma after 'in'. 'Used to learn a lot of language' is wrong: use 'used to study many languages' or 'used to learn many languages.' Word order 'know how hard is that' should be 'know how hard that is.' Also remove 'That would be so' which is unclear. Suggestion: Use correct verb 'study', plural 'languages', and standard English word order for complement clauses.

× The students are nice to meet the coworkers.

✓ The students are nice, and the coworkers are pleasant to work with.

Error: 'nice to meet the coworkers' is ambiguous and ungrammatical. It mixes objects and actions. Likely intended to say both students and coworkers are pleasant. Suggestion: Separate into two coordinated clauses and use correct collocations: 'pleasant to work with' rather than 'nice to meet'.

× Uh, works great with each others because whenever there's a problem, we always discuss whenever we have problems.

✓ We work well with each other because whenever there's a problem, we always discuss it.

Errors: Missing subject 'We' and verb agreement. 'each others' should be 'each other' (singular reciprocal). Repetition 'whenever there's a problem' and 'whenever we have problems' is redundant. Add object 'it' after 'discuss'. Suggestion: Use 'We work well with each other' and avoid repetition.

× Yeah, I like the place very much because it's not that busy as other places and also I can do whatever I want if I'm I've done my job.

✓ Yes, I like the place very much because it's not as busy as other places, and I can do whatever I want once I've finished my work.

Errors: Comparative structure: 'not that busy as other places' should be 'not as busy as other places.' 'if I'm I've done my job' is ungrammatical mixing 'if' and 'I've'. Use 'once I've finished my work' or 'after I've done my job.' Also 'work' is more natural than 'job' here. Suggestion: Use correct comparative 'not as...as' and a single conditional/time clause.

× For example, when I finish my job, I always study for IELTS to prepare for a test.

✓ For example, when I finish my work, I usually study for the IELTS to prepare for the test.

Errors: Tense and adverb choice: 'when I finish my job' (present simple) is okay for habitual action, but 'I always study' is acceptable; however 'usually' is more natural. Use article 'the' with 'IELTS' and 'the test' for specificity. Suggestion: Use 'work' for ongoing duties and include definite article with named exams.

× My future work plans is to apply for the job overseas and also work as a Chinese teaching teaching Chinese as a second language teacher because I want to experience the different culture in different countries, so I would definitely apply for the job overseas.

✓ My future work plans are to apply for jobs overseas and to work as a teacher of Chinese as a second language because I want to experience different cultures in other countries, so I will definitely apply for jobs abroad.

Errors: 'plans is' should be 'plans are' (subject-verb agreement). 'work as a Chinese teaching teaching Chinese' is repetitive and ungrammatical; use 'work as a teacher of Chinese as a second language.' 'the different culture' should be plural 'different cultures' and 'in different countries' redundant with 'overseas'; use 'other countries' or 'abroad.' Also avoid repeating 'apply for the job overseas' twice. Suggestion: Fix agreement, remove repetition, pluralize 'cultures', and use 'jobs abroad' for natural phrasing.