工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện độ lưu loát và chính xác ngữ pháp; tránh tiếng ồn (uh, umm) và lỗi thừa từ. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm một chi tiết ngắn gọn (ví dụ: tên trường, vị trí, thời gian học). Sử dụng cấu trúc: "I am a student at [school name], located in [place]. I have been studying there for [length of time]."

範例: I am a student at Kenya High School in Ning Bing Province. I have been studying there for two years.

建議: Giảm lặp và tiếng ồn, trả lời trực tiếp ngắn gọn. Tránh dùng 'work' nếu bạn là học sinh; giải thích công việc chính của bạn bằng câu đơn giản. Thêm liên từ nếu cần để rõ ràng (e.g., "so").

範例: I don't work; I'm a full-time student. My main 'work' is studying and completing homework and assignments set by my teachers.

建議: Trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và liên hệ tới môi trường làm việc/học tập. Hãy dùng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng trả lời 'Yes' hoặc 'No', sau đó giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ồn.

範例: Yes, it's a good place to work in the sense of studying. I usually do homework there and prepare for the next lessons, which helps me learn effectively.

建議: Giải thích rõ cảm xúc và nêu lý do cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement). Sử dụng cấu trúc: câu chủ đề (Yes, I like it) + 1–2 lý do cụ thể + minh chứng ngắn. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp (friendly, supportive, motivating).

範例: Yes, I like my school because the teachers and students are friendly and supportive. Their guidance motivates me to study harder.

建議: Trình bày kế hoạch tương lai rõ ràng và ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi phát âm/ghi âm từ như 'AI' gây nhầm. Nên nói rõ mục tiêu (ví dụ: học chuyên ngành, nghề nghiệp) và lý do ngắn gọn. Dùng liên từ để mạch lạc (because, so).

範例: I plan to pursue further studies in English because I am passionate about the language. I hope to major in English at university and possibly become an English teacher or translator.

× Uh, currently I'm a student studying at in Kenya High School which is located in Ning Bing Province and I have been studying for two years.

✓ Uh, currently I'm a student studying at Kenya High School, which is located in Ning Bing Province, and I have been studying here for two years.

The phrase 'at in' uses two prepositions together; only one is needed. Use 'at Kenya High School'. Add a comma before the relative clause 'which is located...' for clarity. Add 'here' to indicate the place where the student has been studying for two years. Suggestion: remove redundant prepositions and add commas for clarity.

× Well, uh, as I said before, I'm a student. So uh, my, my work is only study and uh, complete, umm, and complete, umm, all the tasks that the school, uh, assigned.

✓ Well, as I said before, I'm a student. So my work is only to study and to complete all the tasks that the school assigns.

The original mixes fragments and repeats words, and omits the infinitive marker 'to' before verbs. Use parallel infinitives 'to study and to complete'. Change 'assigned' to 'assigns' to indicate habitual present action by the school. Suggestion: use concise sentence structure and consistent verb forms.

× Well, umm, as I said before, uh, I'm a student so uh, if uh, to talk about my work is I usually umm, uh, do homework and prepare the next uh, lesson at school.

✓ Well, as I said before, I'm a student, so when I talk about my work I usually do homework and prepare for the next lesson at school.

The phrase 'if to talk about my work is I usually' is ungrammatical. Use 'when I talk about my work' and keep verbs in the simple present for habitual actions: 'do' and 'prepare'. Add 'for' after 'prepare' to show preparation for the lesson. Suggestion: simplify clause structure and use standard time clauses ('when').

× Of course, uh, of course, umm, my school is umm, uh, uh, friendly environment environment because, uh, the, the teacher and, uh, the students here is very, uh, friendly and, umm, in guidance and guidance is have me a little way motivate and.

✓ Of course, my school has a friendly environment because the teachers and the students here are very friendly, and the guidance has motivated me a little.

'School is friendly environment' needs an article or 'has' + noun: use 'has a friendly environment'. 'Teacher and the students here is' has subject-verb disagreement: plural subject requires 'are'. The clause 'guidance is have me a little way motivate and' is ungrammatical; correct to 'the guidance has motivated me a little' using present perfect to show effect. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement and proper verb forms; avoid repetition and filler words.

× Well, uh, I think that I have AI have a passionate for English studies because I have, uh, I have inspired, uh, to studying, uh, English. So I think that, uh, this field will suit suitable for me.

✓ Well, I think that I have a passion for English studies because I am inspired to study English. So I think that this field will be suitable for me.

'AI have a passionate' misuses pronouns/words; should be 'I have a passion'. 'I have inspired to studying' is incorrect: 'am inspired to study' or 'inspired to study' is correct. 'Will suit suitable for me' duplicates meaning; use 'will be suitable for me' or 'will suit me'. Suggestion: choose correct noun 'passion', use passive/state verb 'am inspired', and avoid redundant adjectives.