工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Give a direct, clear answer (state whether you work or study) and add one brief detail about your role or course. Avoid unrelated phrases like "Good job!" and check pronunciation of key words. Keep it within 1–2 sentences.

範例: I’m currently a student at the University of X, studying business management. I also work part-time as a library assistant to gain practical experience.

建議: Answer the question directly with the workplace name or type and add one specific detail about your job or the location. Use a topic sentence first, then one supporting detail with a linking word (for example, "and" or "because").

範例: I work at a small marketing agency in the city center, and my office is only a ten-minute walk from the main train station.

建議: Respond with a clear opinion (yes or no) and give one or two specific reasons to support it. Use linking words like "because" or "because of" to connect your opinion and reasons. Keep it concise and natural.

範例: Yes, it’s a good place to work because my colleagues are supportive and the company offers flexible hours, which helps me balance work and study.

建議: Understand the question as asking whether you like your workplace and what you like about it. Give a clear statement of your feeling, then mention one or two specific aspects you like, linked by words such as "because" or "especially". Correct grammar: "Do you like the place where you work?"

範例: Yes, I like the place where I work, especially the friendly atmosphere and the opportunities for professional development because my manager encourages training.

建議: Give a direct statement about your career goals and one specific plan or step you will take, for example studying further, gaining experience, or applying for a particular role. Use a linking word like "so" or "therefore" to show purpose. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

範例: In the future I plan to become a project manager, so I’m taking online courses in project management and hoping to get promoted within the next two years.

× Good job!

✓ I am a student.

The student replied with 'Good job!' which does not answer the examiner's question 'Do you work or are you a student?'. This is a sentence structure/response error because the reply must state whether they work or are a student. Suggestion: answer directly using a verb and subject, e.g. 'I am a student' or 'I work as a ...'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× You attempted to answer the question, but the response appears to be a transcription error ('Did you work or are you a sting?') which makes the meaning unclear.

✓ You attempted to answer the question, but the response appears to be a transcription error ('Did you work or are you a student?') which makes the meaning unclear.

This sentence comments on a transcription mistake; the mistake is the wrong word 'sting' instead of 'student'. Correcting that keeps the sentence meaningful. Suggestion: use the correct noun 'student' and ensure quoted material reflects the intended words. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× Where do you work?

✓ Where do you work?

This is already a correct question form in present simple asking about current employment. No change needed. Ensure student replies with a place or job title. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× Where do you work?

✓ I work at [company/place].

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. The correct response should be a statement using present simple: 'I work at...' or 'I work as a...' Suggestion: provide the workplace or job title to answer the question. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

The examiner's question is grammatically correct. No correction required. The student should answer with an opinion, e.g. 'Yes, it is a good place to work because...'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work because [reason].

The student repeated the question instead of giving an opinion. A correct reply uses subject-verb structure and reason: 'Yes, it is...' or 'No, it isn't...' followed by supporting details. Suggestion: give a clear opinion and examples. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The examiner likely intended to ask about the student's liking, using 'Do you like...' rather than 'Would you like...' which asks about preference in a conditional or hypothetical sense. Change to present simple 'Do you like...' to ask about current feelings. Suggestion: use 'Do you like' for current preference and 'Would you like' for hypothetical offers. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× What do you like that place where you're work?

✓ What do you like about the place where you work?

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun/relative clause and verb form: 'you're work' is wrong. Use 'about' to ask what aspects are liked and use 'where you work' (not 'you're work'). Suggestion: structure the question as 'What do you like about the place where you work?' and use present simple for general opinions. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12)

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

The examiner's question is grammatically correct (present continuous used for planned future). No change required. The student should answer with future plans, e.g. 'I plan to.../I want to...'. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)

× What are your future work plans?

✓ I plan to [study/change jobs/start a business], or I want to [description].

The student repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. A proper reply uses future-tense phrasing or expressions of intention: 'I plan to...', 'I want to...', or 'I will...'. Suggestion: give specific goals and timelines for a stronger answer. (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26)