工作— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question (e.g., “I’m currently a student.”), then briefly add one supporting detail about your status. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler sounds like “mmm.”

範例: I’m currently a student. I recently finished my degree and now work part-time in a laboratory while continuing my studies.

建議: Give a direct location and clarify your role. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “laboratory” and “protein structure research”). Keep it to one or two sentences and avoid vague phrases.

範例: I work in a research laboratory that studies protein structures. My role involves experiments to analyse how proteins fold and interact.

建議: Answer directly then give specific reasons using linking words (because, and, so). Use correct words (e.g., “colleagues” instead of “Corker”) and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, it’s a great place to work because my colleagues are supportive and the professor is very encouraging, so I feel motivated and comfortable here.

建議: Start with a direct response to the question (Yes/No/Generally). Then give specific tasks you do, using clear verbs and linking words. Avoid fillers and fragmented sentences.

範例: Yes, I like working there. I mainly perform protein experiments, such as purifying proteins and testing their functions in different assays.

建議: Give a clear, concise plan and explain why, using linking words (because, so). Use correct phrases like “publish research papers” and avoid hesitations.

範例: My main plan is to publish research papers because publishing will demonstrate my skills and share my study results with the scientific community.

× MMM, now I'm on student.

✓ MMM, now I'm a student.

The original uses incorrect preposition 'on' with 'student' and misses the article 'a'. Use the indefinite article for singular countable nouns ('a student'). Replace 'on' with none: 'I'm a student.' This corrects sentence structure and article usage.

× Actually I'm a graduated student so I'm currently work in a laboratory.

✓ Actually I'm a graduate student, so I'm currently working in a laboratory.

'Graduated student' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'graduate student'. Also 'currently work' requires the present continuous 'am working' to match ongoing action. Use 'so' with a comma and change 'work' to 'working'.

× In a repertory where the study in a protein structure.

✓ In a repository where we study protein structure.

The sentence has wrong noun 'repertory' (use 'repository') and wrong verb form 'the study in'. Use 'we study' to provide a proper verb and subject. 'Protein structure' does not need an article here. This fixes verb form and sentence structure.

× Oh yes, absolutely. I think the place is very good for me because the Corker is a great and the professor very nice.

✓ Oh yes, absolutely. I think the place is very good for me because the work is great and the professor is very nice.

'Corker' appears to be a wrong word; likely 'work' or 'job' fits. Adjectives need linking verbs: include 'is' before 'very nice'. Ensure parallel structure: 'the work is great and the professor is very nice.'

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Do you like the place where you work?

The examiner asked 'Would you like...' but the student's reply should use 'Do you like...' to state preference in present. 'Would you like' asks a hypothetical; use present simple 'Do you like...' to answer the question correctly.

× Umm I usually ex experiment about protein.

✓ Umm I usually do experiments on proteins.

'Ex experiment' is incorrect repetition and 'about protein' is awkward; use 'do experiments on proteins.' Make 'proteins' plural when speaking generally. 'Do experiments' is the correct collocation.

× Umm in specific ex purify the protein and using it I experiment the others for examining the function.

✓ Specifically, I purify proteins and then use them to experiment on others to examine their functions.

Original has misplaced adverb 'in specific' (use 'specifically'), wrong verb forms 'ex purify' and 'using it I experiment the others'. Use parallel verbs: 'purify' and 'use', and correct prepositions: 'experiment on' and 'examine their functions'. Make nouns plural for general statements.

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

This is the examiner's question and is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Hmm, my work point is to. Publish experiment papers because it's the it's a good for qualifying my ability and my study result.

✓ Hmm, my work goal is to publish experimental papers because it's good for demonstrating my ability and my research results.

'Work point' is incorrect; use 'work goal' or 'goal'. 'Publish experiment papers' should be 'publish experimental papers'. Remove extraneous 'the it's the'. Use 'demonstrating' instead of 'qualifying' and 'research results' instead of 'study result'. This fixes sentence structure, word choice, and tense/verb forms.