7 分范例

问题: ls physical activity good for relaxation?

思路 1

Yes, can help reduce stress
是的,能帮助减轻压力
考官答案
Yes, I think the two go hand in hand. We live increasingly stressful lives, so exercise gives stress an outlet. It prevents pent-up emotions from overwhelming us. There's nothing better than going for a run after a bad day at work or college. Afterwards, we can relax more efficiently.
是的,我认为这两者是相辅相成的。我们现在的生活越来越有压力,所以运动给了这种压力一个出口。它阻止了积压的情绪压倒我们。在工作或学习中度过糟糕的一天后,没有什么比去跑步更好的了。之后,我们能以更有效的方式放松。
Yes, I think the two go hand in hand. We live more and more stressful lives these days and so exercise gives this stress an outlet; it stops any pent up emotions getting on top of us. There’s nothing better than going for a run after a bad day at work or college and, afterwards, we are able to relax in a much more efficient way.
是的,我认为这两者密切相关。如今我们的生活越来越充满压力,所以运动为这种压力提供了一个出口;它阻止了任何积压的情绪压倒我们。在经历了工作或学校糟糕一天后,没有什么比去跑步更好,之后,我们能以更有效的方式放松。
语法分析
现在分词作状语:“giving this stress an outlet” 使用现在分词作状语,说明运动的效果,使句子更加生动和有深度。 现在分词作主语:“going for a run” 作为句子主语,强调了运动行为,增加了句子的活力和表达的直接性。 3.定语从句:“after a bad day at work or college” 这个定语从句修饰“going for a run”,提供了运动背景,增加了句子的详细性和复杂性。
高分词汇
  • go hand in hand
    密切相关
  • outlet
    出口
  • pent up
    积压的
  • get on top of
    控制
  • nothing better than
    没有什么比...更好

思路 2

Sometimes it helps
有时是有帮助的
考官答案
Yes, I think exercise does help most of the time. There's research that says doing physical stuff helps you sleep better, and good sleep is really important for relaxing. When we don't sleep enough, we face a lot of problems. Doing exercise means we can chill out in our bodies, but also in our minds. Basically, if our body is in good shape and strong, our mind feels better too.
是的,我认为大多数时候锻炼确实有帮助。有研究说做体力活能让你睡得更好,而睡个好觉对放松来说真的很重要。当我们睡眠不足时,会遇到很多问题。锻炼意味着我们的身体可以放松,但我们的心理也同样可以放松。基本上,如果我们的身体状态良好、强壮,我们的心理感觉也会更好。
Yes,in most of the time it helps. There is a lot of research now showing how physical exertion leads to better sleep and this is key to being able to relax. Lack of sleep causes all kinds of problems for us. If we do exercise, we can relax physically sure, but it’s the mental side of relaxation that is just as important. I mean, if we are physically well and feel strong, then mentally, we are just much healthier too.
是的,大多数时候是有帮助的。现在有很多研究表明体力消耗如何带来更好的睡眠,这是放松的关键。睡眠不足会给我们带来各种各样的问题。如果我们进行锻炼,我们确实可以在身体上放松,但精神上的放松也同样重要。我的意思是,如果我们身体健康并且感觉强壮,那么在精神上,我们也会更健康。
语法分析
现在分词作主语:“showing how physical exertion leads to better sleep” 这里使用现在分词作为主语,描述研究内容,增加了句子的复杂性和深度。 定语从句:“that is key to being able to relax” 这个定语从句修饰“this”(指更好的睡眠),说明了更好睡眠的重要性,增加了句子的信息量和复杂度。 条件句:“If we do exercise” 使用条件句表达“如果我们运动”,引出可能的结果,增强了句子的逻辑性和表达的清晰度。
高分词汇
  • physical exertion
    体力劳动
  • key to….
    …的关键
  • better sleep
    更好的睡眠
  • Lack of sleep
    睡眠不足
  • physically well
    身体健康
  • mental side
    心理方面

思路 3

Mental Health and Well-being
心理健康和福祉
考官答案
Yes, for sure. Doing exercise regularly makes us feel happier. People come out of the gym feeling full of energy and like they've done something good. Exercise and feeling good about yourself are connected because it makes your body release dopamine, which is a hormone that makes you happy.
没错,肯定的。经常锻炼会让我们感觉更快乐。人们从健身房出来时会感觉充满活力,好像他们做了一些有益的事情。锻炼和自我感觉良好之间是有联系的,因为它使你的身体释放多巴胺,这是一种让你快乐的荷尔蒙。
Yes, definitely. Regular physical activity is what improves our overall mood. When coming out the gym after a session there, people feel energized and feel like they have actually achieved something. There is definitely a connection between self-esteem and doing physical exercise as it releases the happy hormone dopamine that gives us a lift.
是的,当然。定期的体育活动是提升我们整体情绪的关键。当人们在健身房锻炼后走出来时,他们会感到充满活力,感觉自己真正做到了一些事情。自尊和进行体育锻炼之间绝对存在联系,因为运动会释放让我们感到快乐的荷尔蒙多巴胺,从而使我们振奋。
语法分析
现在分词作状语:“coming out the gym after a session there” 这里用现在分词短语作状语,描述人们在锻炼后的状态,增加了句子的生动性和具体性。 现在分词作定语:“doing physical exercise” 用作定语的现在分词“doing”描述了进行体育锻炼的行为,增强了句子的信息量和复杂度。 定语从句:“that gives us a lift” 这个定语从句修饰“dopamine”,说明了多巴胺的积极作用,增加了句子的详细性和深度。
高分词汇
  • overall mood
    整体情绪
  • energized
    充满活力
  • self-esteem
    自尊
  • physical exercise
    体育锻炼
  • dopamine
    多巴胺
  • release
    释放
  • give us a lift
    使我们振奋