7 分范例

问题: Are there any differences between cooking today and in the past?

思路 1

Yes
是的
考官答案
Definitely, cooking today is quite different from the past. One major change is our access to international foods. We can easily buy ingredients from around the world, broadening our culinary horizons. Also, cooking has turned into a significant industry. There are endless cooking shows, cookbooks, and celebrity chefs, which shows just how much cooking has evolved and expanded as a cultural phenomenon.
当然,今天的烹饪与过去大不相同。一个主要的变化是我们可以轻松地购买来自世界各地的食材,这扩大了我们的烹饪视野。此外,烹饪已经变成了一门重要的产业。有无数的烹饪节目、食谱和名厨,这表明烹饪作为一种文化现象已经发展和扩展了很多。
Absolutely, there are marked differences in cooking today compared to the past. Now, we have the luxury of accessing a plethora of global ingredients, transforming the way we cook and eat. Moreover, cooking has become a vast business, with televised cookery shows running around the clock and celebrity chefs becoming household names. This evolution reflects a significant shift in how cooking is perceived and practiced in modern society.
毫无疑问,与过去相比,今天的烹饪有了显著的差异。如今,我们可以轻松获取来自全球的丰富食材,这改变了我们的烹饪和饮食方式。此外,烹饪已经成为一门庞大的生意,电视烹饪节目整天播放,名厨成为家喻户晓的名字。这种演变反映了现代社会中烹饪的感知和实践方式的重大转变。
语法分析
1. 现在分词短语作状语: “marked differences in cooking”使用现在分词短语作状语,增强了句子的描述力和复杂性。 2. 现在完成时: “cooking has become a vast business”使用了现在完成时,表达了时间上的变化和发展,显示了对复杂时态的正确使用。 3. 并列结构: “televised cookery shows and celebrity chefs”使用了并列结构来列举现代烹饪的特点,增加了句子的信息量和复杂性。 4. 形容词前置定语: “significant shift”中的“significant”作为形容词前置定语,强调了变化的重要性,提升了句子的表达效果。
高分词汇
  • marked differences
    明显差异
  • cooking today compared to the past
    现今与过去的烹饪对比
  • plethora of global ingredients
    丰富的全球食材
  • cook and eat
    烹饪和饮食
  • vast business
    巨大的商业
  • televised cookery shows
    电视烹饪节目
  • celebrity chefs
    名厨
  • significant shift
    显著转变
  • perceived and practiced
    感知和实践

思路 2

No
不是
考官答案
I believe our eating habits have changed a lot from the past. Traditional foods, like those my grandparents ate, seem more costly now. Fast food is cheaper than having a hotpot at home or in a restaurant. Also, food is more processed today; we often buy ready-made sauces instead of making them ourselves. This means many of us can't make sauces from scratch.
我认为我们的饮食习惯与过去相比发生了很大变化。像我祖父母那代人吃的传统食物现在看起来更贵了。快餐比在家或餐馆吃火锅便宜。此外,今天的食物加工程度更高;我们经常买现成的酱料,而不是自己制作。这意味着我们中的许多人不会从头开始制作酱料。
I think what we eat today is completely different from the past. It seems to me that traditional food that my grandparents would have eaten is more expensive to buy today. It's cheaper to go to a fast food restaurant and eat there than it is to have a hotpot at home or in a restaurant. Food is also more processed today, so instead of having to make a sauce for vegetables, we can buy one ready-made from the supermarket. This means that most of us couldn't actually make a sauce from scratch.
我认为我们今天吃的东西与过去完全不同。 在我看来,祖辈们吃过的传统食物如今买起来更贵了。 去快餐店吃饭比在家里或餐馆吃火锅更便宜。 如今的食品加工程度也更高,我们可以从超市买到现成的酱汁,而不必为蔬菜调制酱汁。 这意味着,我们中的大多数人实际上无法从头开始制作酱料。
语法分析
对比结构:"completely different from the past" 用于强调现在和过去饮食的对比,突出了变化的幅度。 表达推测:"It seems to me that" 用于表达个人观点和推测,使得语言更加主观和具有个人色彩。 被动语态:"is more expensive to buy today" 使用被动语态来描述传统食物的价格变化,显示了客观情况的叙述方式。 条件状语从句:"instead of having to make a sauce" 使用条件状语从句来比较现成酱料和自制酱料,增加了句子的对比性和逻辑性。
高分词汇
  • completely different from the past
    与过去完全不同
  • traditional food
    传统食物
  • more expensive to buy today
    今天更贵
  • fast food restaurant
    快餐店
  • more processed today
    今天更加加工
  • ready-made
    现成的
  • make a sauce from scratch
    从头制作酱汁