7 分范例

问题: Do you think cooking should be a compulsory or an elective course? Why?

思路 1

Compulsory
必修
考官答案
Definitely necessary. Many young people don't know how to cook and often eat out. This leads to health issues because restaurant food is usually high in fat and salt. We're seeing more young people with diseases like diabetes and heart disease. If kids learned cooking, they'd be more willing to buy fresh ingredients and make healthier meals.
当然是必须的。许多年轻人不懂得如何烹饪,经常外出就餐。这导致健康问题,因为餐厅食物通常含有较高的脂肪和盐分。我们看到越来越多的年轻人患有糖尿病和心脏病等疾病。如果孩子们学会了烹饪,他们会更愿意买新鲜食材,制作更健康的餐点。
Compulsory, for sure. So many youngsters today have no idea how to cook anything and, instead, eat out all the time. This is having a terrible effect on their health as restaurant food is high in fat and salt, so we are seeing a huge increase in diseases like diabetes and heart disease in younger and younger people. If children learnt how to cook, then they wouldn't be so reticent to go to the supermarket, buy fresh ingredients and cook something that's healthier.
当然是必须的。 如今,许多年轻人根本不知道如何烹饪,而是经常外出就餐。 这对他们的健康造成了可怕的影响,因为餐馆的食物高脂肪、高盐分,所以我们看到糖尿病和心脏病等疾病在越来越多的年轻人身上大量增加。 如果孩子们学会了烹饪,他们就不会怯于去超市购买新鲜食材,烹饪出更健康的食物
语法分析
现在分词作主语补足语:"having a terrible effect on their health" 中的现在分词 "having" 用作主语补足语,强调了外出就餐对年轻人健康的负面影响。 名词短语:"a huge increase in diseases" 使用名词短语描述疾病的增长情况,表达了对当前健康问题的严重性的认识。 条件状语从句:"If children learnt how to cook" 中的条件状语从句提出了解决问题的一个方法,即教育年轻人学习烹饪,增加了句子的逻辑性。 现在分词短语作状语:"buy fresh ingredients and cook something that's healthier" 中的现在分词 "buy" 和 "cook" 作状语,展示了更健康的生活方式选择,增强了语言的表现力和说服力。
高分词汇
  • Compulsory
    强制的
  • have no idea how to cook anything
    不知道如何做饭
  • eat out all the time
    一直在外面吃饭
  • having a terrible effect on their health
    对他们的健康产生可怕的影响
  • high in fat and salt
    富含脂肪和盐
  • increase in diseases like diabetes and heart disease
    疾病增加,如糖尿病和心脏病
  • wouldn't be so reticent to go to the supermarket, buy fresh ingredients and cook something that's healthier
    不会如此不情愿去超市,购买新鲜食材并做更健康的食物

思路 2

Elective
选修
考官答案
I believe cooking should be an elective course. It's true that cooking is a valuable skill, but not everyone needs to cook for themselves. Some may choose to eat out or use meal services. Also, schools have limited time and resources, and there are other subjects that might be more essential for students' overall education.
我认为烹饪应该是一门选修课。尽管烹饪是一个有价值的技能,但并不是每个人都需要自己做饭。有些人可能选择外出就餐或使用餐饮服务。此外,学校的时间和资源有限,还有其他一些对学生整体教育更为重要的科目。
I'm of the opinion that cooking should be offered as an elective in schools. While the ability to cook is undoubtedly beneficial, it's not a universal necessity. People have varied lifestyles and choices, and not everyone prioritizes cooking. Furthermore, academic curriculums are already crowded with critical subjects, which arguably deserve more focus than culinary skills in an educational setting.
我认为烹饪应该作为一门选修课在学校提供。虽然拥有烹饪能力无疑是有益的,但它并不是一项普遍的必需品。人们有着不同的生活方式和选择,并不是每个人都将烹饪放在首位。此外,学术课程已经包括了许多关键科目,在教育环境中这些科目比烹饪技能理应得到更多的关注。
语法分析
1. 被动语态: “cooking should be offered as an elective”使用了被动语态,强调了建议的对象和动作,增加了句子的正式性和复杂度。 2. 现在分词作定语: “with critical subjects”中的“critical”作为现在分词,用作定语,为句子增加了描述性和复杂性。 3. 宾语从句: “it's not a universal necessity”中的“universal necessity”作为宾语从句,说明了“cooking”的必要性,增强了观点的阐述。 4. 比较级结构: “deserve more focus than culinary skills”使用了比较级结构来强调教育内容的重要性,提升了语句的复杂度和表达的深度。
高分词汇
  • cooking as an elective
    烹饪作为选修课
  • undoubtedly beneficial
    无疑有益
  • universal necessity
    普遍必需
  • varied lifestyles and choices
    多样的生活方式和选择
  • prioritize cooking
    优先考虑烹饪
  • academic curriculums
    学术课程
  • be crowded with critical subjects
    拥挤的重要科目
  • deserve more focus
    应得到更多关注
  • educational setting
    教育环境